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AnSh SS- Mumbai adventures Note Page 22

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Posted: 09 August 2012 at 11:29am | IP Logged
I know I have many OS' running LOL. I will try to finish them one by one but this one came to mind. Please hold the joothis for the old ones and tell me how you like this one. Embarrassed

Part I


Anandi, Shiv, Shiv's parents, his aunt and his grandfather had all come to Mumbai for a wedding. Shiv's second cousin was getting married and so the entire family had decide to show up with the newly weds. Anandi did not want to run into Jagya and Gauri. Bhairon knew she was worried had assured her that Mumbai was so big that they would not cross paths. Daadisa further said "Why are you worrying? Go enjoy yourself. Now you are not alone. Shiv and his family are with you."

Upon their arrival in Bombay, they had taken a suite in a nice hotel so that they could all be together. Anandi and Shiv were still getting used to each other. Anandi liked her new in-laws - they were such a fun bunch. They teased Shiv mercilessly until he blushed. They treated her so nicely. Shiv's mother and aunt went out of their way to make her feel comfortable. Shiv's dad and grandfather were always cracking jokes. His grandfather had found a new prey to tell his Army stories - someone who had not heard the stories before unlike the rest of the family who had heard it more times than they could count. LOL The rest of the family rolled their eyes. They knew how nice she was so after a while his mother or aunt would come rescue her. They noticed that Shiv hung around even though he could tell every single one of those stories himself having heard them so many times. Wink

Anandi was at peace with her decision to marry Shiv. Her mother's soul would be at peace. Daadisa and the rest of the family was happy but she still missed her family though she spoke to them every single day.  Today was her mother's birthday and she wanted to go to the temple but she did not want to upset their plans. So she sat there letting the conversation flow around her as they planned the day's events.

Jagya was pensive. His wedding to Gauri had happened but things were not fine between them. Jagya was angry with her because he had discovered the truth about who funded her education from bade papa and was mad because she hid it from him. Gauri had told him that she wanted to tell him but when she contacted his father to confirm it, Bhairon had insulted her and so she did not want to hurt Jagya. Jagya was still upset but agreed to go ahead with the wedding. During the wedding people commented on why there was no one from Jagya's side and this made Jagya miss his family. Gauri made up some story but Jagya was reminded of what Anandi told him about how he had made a world without elder's blessing. Gauri did not seem to care when he brought this up and they had a huge fight. Gauri came and saw Jagya pensive and decided that she was going to try and get him to come around. She had a chat with her mother and her mother convinced her that it was in her best interest to keep Jagat happy.

Gauri came and told Jagya that since they have not gone out in a while, they should go out. Jagat said that they had spent enough money and did not want to spend any more. Gauri told him that they had gotten a lot of gift cards as gifts and that they could use those. She told him she wanted to buy him clothes but he refused. She pleaded and told him that she was sorry for her actions but she only wanted to protect him. She reminded him that he always said they would be there for each other. Jagya relented and agreed to go with her.

The Shekar family decided to go out for some sightseeing. Shiv noticed that Anandi was disturbed and asked her what the matter was. She smiled and said that there was none. Shiv's mother noticed this and went to sit down next to her. She said to her "I am like your mother right. Tell me what you need." Anandi burst into tears and hugged her. Shiv's mother and aunt took a crying Anandi to the bedroom to calm her down.

Shiv tried to go into the bedroom but was stopped by his father and grandfather. Next thing he knew Shiv was hearing it from them about making his wife cry and not taking care of her properly. LOL Shiv was completely confused as to why she was crying and protested but to no avail. Just then his choti maa came out and called him aside. She told him that it was Anandi's mother's birthday and that is why Anandi was so emotional. She told him that Anandi was still crying and that his mom was consoling her. Shiv felt bad for Anandi and wished he could be with her but he knew she needed his mom now more than she needed him.

Shiv then had an idea. He said to his choti maa "Choti maa its her mother's birthday. I think we should donate clothing to the poor like we do every year when it is one of our birthdays. We could not do anything for her mother when she passed..."

Hearing this Choti maa, Shiv's dad and grandfather all smiled broadly. His grandfather patted him on the back and said "Great idea. This will make her feel better." Shiv's mom came out hearing this and told him "I am proud of you. I think you should go inside. She needs you." As Shiv left, the other four watched him go. Shiv's mother and choti maa decided that the four of them would go out and make the purchases. A flustered Shiv came out to get him mom and said he had discussed this with Anandi and she was crying again. Shiv's mom shook her head at her clueless offspring  and went off inside with his choti maa.

After calming Anandi down who was so overwhelmed that they would do this for her late mother's birthday, Shiv's mother told her that she will make herself ill. She made her promise to rest and made her sleep. Once she fell asleep, she left a worried Shiv in charge and the foursome went off to the market to buy the requisite items. 



Part II - page 2
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Part III - page 3
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Part IV - page 5
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Part V - page 7
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Part VI - page 8
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Part VII - page 8
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Part VIII - page 13
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Part IX - page 16
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Part X - page 17
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Nice one Jhan ! I hope you complete this and don't leave us hanging for long ! Smile

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Posted: 09 August 2012 at 11:43am | IP Logged
Originally posted by dixie123

Nice one Jhan ! I hope you complete this and don't leave us hanging for long ! Smile


I don't trust myself so I am working on part 2 now ROFL ROFL ROFL

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Posted: 09 August 2012 at 11:49am | IP Logged
Originally posted by liv2laugh

Originally posted by dixie123

Nice one Jhan ! I hope you complete this and don't leave us hanging for long ! Smile


I don't trust myself so I am working on part 2 now ROFL ROFL ROFL
 
Good. Although I don't really care for JaGa and especially in between AnSh Angry but I want to see how AnSh support each other in this. So, ya do it quick !
I have just seen people addressing you as Jhan. Is that your full name ? Confused


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Superb!!!
DO update soon!!

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Good one dear...
 
i guess Shiv's family are an inspiring bunch for writing OSLOL...i love them and i loved your OS
 
but pls pls this time update soon and update others too

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wonderful os
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