FF : If Only thread2, T3 PG 152 - Page 23

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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb update... Full of emotions .. Loved especially how you wrote Arnav's dilema... Can't wait to read more...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Brilliant update.. . 👏
'If only. . .' I could write like this 😍
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awww I literally teared up... Arnav is goin thru such a difficult time... n so is Khushi.. She's pregnant but she aint even sure of her future.. bless her..
This is gettin more interesting.. great update..
Continue soon =)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Congrats on the new thread!! Really nice update :)
 
I like the pace of the story!
 
Cant wait for the next update, Please do update soon :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
intense! awesome update 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
What a tremendously painful chapter, and you did full justice to it...so Kudos!!👏  So much turmoil for both of them, and you brought it through effortlessly!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Oh my... Arnav's inner battle is heart wrenching. I love your writing.
 
But one thing I am not able to fathom is how he is blaming all prostitutes for what happened to his sister. I don't understand. It is too much narrow minded and unrealistic thinking. Even after hearing Khushi's story of how she was forced into this business by her father, still he is "blaming" her indirectly for what happened to his sister. Why doesn't he put the full blame on Shyam? He is a today's man... what's with this regressive thinking?
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Posted: 11 years ago
THis part sent shivers down my spine
It was brilliant!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing update loved it
Continue soon x
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow amezing update
touched my heart superb job
update soon
eagerly waiting for the next update
do PM me next time plz:)