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Arhi SS: A Crack in the Mirror Chp 8 Updated (Page 40)

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Khushi is clearly carrying old baggage

It would be interesting to read what is haunting and disturbing her... I loved the bond between Tami and Khushi.. it shows blood relations are not definitely everything.

So the new entry's Arnav kya??? the husky voice tells me it isWink

See you after chapter 3

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Ah!! a fun part!!! this guy is defo Arnav and the scar gives me another proof.
He seems cool types.. I like him... did he just say ' not even a goodbye... how rude??" LOL

Ok.. so these r going to same university? loved the your car, my care argument.

See you after next chapter..

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As the story progresses my interest over Khushi's past is increasing . Clearly, something big would have happened with her otherwise she wouldnt be so much submissive with meeting ppl, hugging people.

Finally  Arnav  knows her name! I loved when he said, Are you paid to get angry or you do it for free LOL

Now I gues with newer environment.. Khushi with help of Arnav break the shell and come out Smile

See you after part 5

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Hahah love this Arnav.. and before I get distracted describing him I should add this one.. this Kellie is really weird.

Ok back to Arnav.. happy, flirty and a good dressed one. I really like guys who are well dresses you know.. But sadly most guys I see r the worst dressed people. Now I know you have not progressed with their feelings but I can clearly say this guy is smitten with her. So she's stuck for 4 years with him? Hope it turns 400 [;-)]

Will see you after Chap 6 

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Have loads of questions

Is Arnav following her?
Does Arnav know her from before?
What was he drawing?
What is Khushi's past???

OMG!!! ts a bloody questionnaire... You have to answer them all do you get that!

Though we finally know Arnav has something to do with Khushi!!!

See you after chapter 7
p.s. the story is interesting! 

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This chap was through Arnav's POV right? Correct me if I'm wrong. He was also a disturbed child I guess and Khushi's mom and his mom were best friends.. So he is there to help her out to break her shell right? So in coming chaps we'll get to read both of them healing each other of their pain right?

Waiting for more of your updates.

See you after Chap 8

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Love Khushi's dress..

So finally Khushi is mingling with ppl./ thats a good news... and Arnav isnt speaking much yet affecting her with his presence! cool!!!

Now I am more interested to read abt the christmas Party!!!! I am sure there will be flames [;-)]

Post it soon...


Huff!!!!! Finally I commented on all the chaps... I feel so relieved Smile

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Love Khushi's dress..

So finally Khushi is mingling with ppl./ thats a good news... and Arnav isnt speaking much yet affecting her with his presence! cool!!!

Now I am more interested to read abt the christmas Party!!!! I am sure there will be flames [;-)]

Post it soon...


Huff!!!!! Finally I commented on all the chaps... I feel so relieved Smile

I absolutely loved how you commented for each chapter! Thank you! :)

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