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Melody:Arhi SS Last Part (Page 5)

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loved it
very interesting

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Great start
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awesome start
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nice update
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Wow you started new story   I really enjoyed with y
our melodious update n song too
Uffo.. That creep was also there.. I hate him

Anyway .. Whatever.. Arshi love each other so much ..
i dont need to worry... I just wana flow with melody
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awesome dearClap
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Thanks for the PM. Very nice. Interesting.
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Melody:Part 2
This SS is inspired by a malayalam movie 'Mazhavillu' where the guy kills his best friend to get his wife.I just took the plot and changed all the scenes by reconstructing it.Because in that movie the hero and heroine died though they were innocent.


The sky had not become blue and the their tube light which looked like sun was glowing.
But Arnav's face was not glowing even on the wedding anniversary.That made Khushi dull.Arnav's dullness always has a bad effect on Khushi.
Khushi switched on the light realizing that Arnav was not able to sleep.
K:Arnav...what is bothering you?

Arnav never thought that Khushi will understand that.
A:Hey..nothing...
K:Arnav,i can understand the change in you.Don't you know that?
Arnav thought:Yes,it' difficult to hide something from Khushi.She can read my face very easily.

A:Nothing Khushi.You simply feel like that.My sleep got disturbed in between.Right?After that i am not able to sleep.That's all.
Khushi held his hands:Whatever it is..i am always with you Arnav.I will never let anything wound your heart.

Arnav became so emotional that he embraced her.He felt better in her skin.His eyes got welled up with tears.
He thought:How can i tell her the truth?It will give her a lot of pain.When the trust is broken our heart is broken completely.
Arnav went out and cried.So that Khushi won't know how upset he is.
A:I am sorry Khushi...i was always faithful to you.I never used to hide anything from you.But now i am hiding a big bitter truth from you.
His heart was paining as he was suppressing his pain and suffering alone.
A:Kuch Dard Mujhe Tu Sehne De
Andar Se Zinda Rehne De
Ankhe Banjar Ho Jayegi
Kuch Ashq Mere Tu Behne De...(Album Tittle: Tuhi Mere Rab Ki Tarha Hai)
(Please listen to this song:

After a few days...
Arnav saw Shyam's flat's door open.He looked inside.He saw Shyam singing and Khushi enjoying it.
K:What a beautiful melody!
Suddenly Khushi's eyes struck Arnav.
K:Hey...Arnav... you are back from the office...Shyam was singing for me.He is the master of melody.
Arnav knew that Khushi was crazy about the songs composed by Shyam.She loved Shyam's melodies.That only made their friendship stronger.
K:Arnav..sit here.Let us enjoy your best friend's music.
A:No...i am going.
He went.
S:What happened to Arnav?Usually he loves listening to my melodies along with you.
K:I don't know Shyam.Now a days Arnav is dim.
Khushi went near Arnav.
K:Arnav,what's wrong with you?Why are you so dull these days?
A:Nothing Khushi.
K:Have you started hiding things from your Khushi?
He felt upset.First time he hid something from her.
A:Actually now a days work pressure is more.I am fed up.It's completely a professional problem.So i did'nt want to disturb you talking about that.
K:Yes,i don't know anything about your profession,But that does'nt mean i can't console you when you are upset.Don't worry...work pressure will vanish if you drink hot coffee made by me.
He smiled.
She gave him hot coffee.After that she brought jalebies.He was surprised:Jalebies?
K:Yes,your favourite.I made it specially for you.So that your mood will always be pleasant and sweet.
They both smiled.She fed him jalebi.

Arnav and Shyam went for a drive.They reached a mountain area.
A:I love this place.Very quiet and peaceful.No one to disturb us.I wanted to talk to you personally.This is the best place for that.If anybody hears our conversation it will defame you in the society.I don't want my friend's image to get spoiled.For that nobody should hear our conversation.That's why i chose this place.
Shyam felt strange:What are you saying Arnav?I can't understand anything.
Arnav stared at Shyam:You don't know anything?How long can you fool others and play with their emotions?
S:Are you crazy?Now a days you behave strangely.Khushi also felt the same.What's your problem?
A:I have no problem.But the problem is with you.
S:What nonsense!
A:I and Khushi always considered you as our best friend.You were our only friend.We trusted you completely.But you broke our trust.You love Khushi.Right?
Shyam was shocked:What are you saying Arnav?
A:Don't deny it.I read it in your diary.
He was shocked.He realized that he was caught red handed.
A:Can you deny it now?
Shyam did'nt say anything.
A:Tell me Shyam.Tell me that it was just my misunderstanding.I will believe you and i will forget everything and we will be best friends again.Please Shyam.
Shyam burst out:Nooo.I can't deny that i don't love Khushi.She loves my melodies.But she is my melody.
Arnav was shattered:Are you not ashamed to love your best friend's wife?
S:I did'nt do it purposefully.Without my own knowledge she became the melody of my life.
A:Enough Shyam.I had not hidden anything from Khushi,but now...i am hiding the most important thing from her.Our best friend's real face.In a way i am cheating on her.But i can't o that anymore.She should know the truth.Otherwise our lives will get spoiled.I will tell the truth to Khushi.
Shyam was shocked:No Arnav.Don't do that.
A:I am sorry Shyam.I am forced to do that.Because i am scared if i hide it from her it will cause more troubles in the future.As long as i hide something from her i will not get peace of mind also.
Shyam stared at him.His eyes were red:No Arnav.
A:I have to...
Shyam pushed Arnav down from the mountain with full force.Arnav was shocked as he never expected his best friend to go to this extent.
Shyam was relieved as now onwards Arnv won't be here to block his way to reach Khushi.
Though Arnav fell off the cliff he caught the tip of the plant which was hung on the mountain.
Shyam could'nt believe his eyes.
A :Shyam,help me to climb.
Shyam did'nt care:Sorry Arnav..I can't
Arnav cried:I request you..i beg u..
Shyam did'nt care.

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