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Melody:Arhi SS Last Part (Page 11)

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Posted: 13 August 2012 at 12:09am | IP Logged
i hope nothing serious happens 2 Arnav...we can't tolerate this shyaam coming near our KhushiOuch

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omg,...superb dear..
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Posted: 13 August 2012 at 3:45am | IP Logged
verry nicee...
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Posted: 13 August 2012 at 2:32pm | IP Logged
awesome update
cant wait for next part
continue soon please
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Posted: 14 August 2012 at 1:18am | IP Logged
Part 1 is nice...so Arnav has discovered Shyam true face that's great ...thxs for the pm
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Posted: 14 August 2012 at 1:24am | IP Logged
Part 2 ...omg hope nothg happen to Arnav ...couldn't expect better from Shyam ...he is so evil
 
Do update soon ...thxs for the pm
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oo noo...mazhavillu film is a trajedy...were both of them die...i cant even imagine arnii dying even in an os...so pls change the ending pls pls
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Melody Part 3
Arnav fell down.Shyam was relieved.He had an evil smile on his face.

Khushi was arranging their room with the photographs of babies.
She smiled:Arnav will be surprised to see this.Arnav..my dear...you were longing for a baby for quite some time now.Right?Very soon you will be able to see our baby.
Shyam was shocked to see this.
He thought:Khushi is pregnant with Arnav's baby?Oh!
Khushi saw Shyam:Hi Shyam!Good thing that you came.I am...
S:Khushi...Arnav...
K:Arnav...
S:Arnav fell off the cliff.
Khushi was shocked:What are you saying?
S:He stood on the edge of the mountain to enjoy the beauty of the place though i warned him not to stand there.But he did'nt listen to my words.His leg got slipped and...
Khushi screamed:Nooo!
She was shattered.She fainted.She fell down unconscious.
Shyam did'nt expect that.He took her to the hospital.
The doctor:Sorry...Khushi had a miscarriage.
Shyam was relieved.He thought:Good thing that the miscarriage took place.Otherwise that baby would have been a barrier between me and Khushi.
Shyam went near Khushi:Khushi...
She lost her control and cried holding his hand:Shyam...i lost my Arnav and our baby.Our baby was something which would have kept me reminded of Arnav till the end of my life.I lost my baby also.Why God is so cruel to me?
Shyam caressed her hair to console her:Khushi,don't cry...
She did'nt know that even while touching and caressing her he was doing it in a wrong way.

Shyam took Khushi to her room and placed her on the bed.He started removing the baby's pictures from the wall.
Khushi was shocked:What are you doing Shyam?
S:Now why should you keep these pictures here Khushi?
K:Let it be there itself Shyam.I lost our baby.At least seeing these pictures i will feel that our baby is still with us.
S:You are wrong Khushi.If these pictures are here you will never get peace of mind.You will keep having unnecessary thoughts and i want my friend to have peace of mind.
K:I don't have unnecesssary thoughts Shyam.I think only about Arnav and our unlucky unborn baby.How can they be my unnecessary thoughts?
Shyam did'nt know what to say.
Khushi looked at Arnav's photograph.She thought of her beautiful moments with Arnav and shed tears:tu Jahaan Main Wahaan
Sang Sang Yu Chalu Tere
Jaise Tera Aasmaan...(Salam namaste).


Shyam took care of Khushi very well as she was physically weak after the miscarriage.
Khushi thanked him:Thanks a lot Shyam.You are a true friend.Only a true friend can take care of a weak lady like this.
S:No need of thanking me Khushi.It's my duty.

Slowly slowly Khushi recovered from her depressed state.She went to Shyam's flat to hear his new melodious composition.By mistake her hand hit the table and his diary fell down.She took the diary from the floor.
K:Hope it is not spoiled because of me.
She went through it's pages.She was shocked to see 'Khushi i love you' written there.
After some time Shyam came with some fruits.He was shocked to see her with his diary.
S:Khushi!
K:By mistake you forgot to close the door before you went for shopping.So i could come inside.What is this Shyam?Do you love me?Tell me.
The fruits fell down from his hands.

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