Phir Subah Hogi

India-Forums

   
Phir Subah Hogi
Phir Subah Hogi

Future of the show...

Laila2009 IF-Rockerz
Laila2009
Laila2009

Joined: 27 October 2009
Posts: 7552

Posted: 08 August 2012 at 10:39pm | IP Logged
POST COMPLETED
 
At this point I do not know what the CVs will do but my guess is they will do the following (posted on forum elsewhere)...
 
The show is so predictable; we all knew that the wedding would never happen and Gulabiya and Aditya would stop the wedding. So this is what will happen:
a) Sugni gets depressed and mourns loss
b) Sugni gets upset with TVS
c) Sugni goes back to live with family
d) TVS and Aditya have falling out
e) Aditya and Amrita break up
f) Sugni depressed and TVS tries to reconcile
g) Sugni mocked; Aditya starts to feel sorry for her
h) Aditya tries to do nice things for and visits house
i) Aditya starts developing feelings for Sugni
j) TVS stuck with Reva and grows more angry at Aditya and his relationship with Sugni
k) TVS starts to see Sugni developing feelings for Sugni
l) TVS turns worse and tries to seperate them
m) TVS turns against nephew - even tries to kill him
n) TVS turns super negative and tries to further separate Aditya and Sugni
o) Aditya and Sugni run away to city
p) Jiji and Sugni have confrontation - she blames her for chasing brother and now nephew and causing rift in family
q) Reva continues to annoy audience members
r) Reva gets better, but TVS does not want her
s) TVS has something awful happen to him
t) TVS and Reva fall in love and she convinces him to let Sugni and TAS to be together
u) TVS either dies or gives his blessing to Sugni and Aditya
v) Aditya and Sugni get married
w) Jiji does not approve Sugni as new bahu
x) We have some saas-bahu drama
y) Sugni becomes accepted as new bahu
z) Show ends (o, and we see Aditya and Sugni help the new bednis in the process)
There you go folks - the predictable outline for PSH. for the next year.
 
 
NOW, if I was writing the show...it would be the following (posted on forum on another thread):
 
I would have Reva show.. Sugni furious for what TVS did her...she leaves and goes to leave with her family...(this happened) 
 
Amrita decides to leave Aditya...he realizes that he is going to lose his best friend...runs after her and tells his mama he is going to Delhi
 
TAS apologizes to his uncle for bringing Reva and not realizing how sick she really is...realizing he is going to lose Amrita he now understands what he has done to his uncle
 
Sugni goes back to her home...family have no money and TVS has said to her he will NEVER bother her again...
 
Sugni is mocked by community, Takhurs and the family...endures A LOT of taunts and humilation.
Gulabiya wakes up and realizes family is poor and they have to learn how to survive...
 
Sugni tries to find odd jobs and the family scrape a living together...
In Delhi, Aditya meets up with Amrita and we see him desperately try to reconcile with her once again...he supries her with a trip to the mandir and there is puts sindoor in her maang. LOL
 
Reva is at the house making TVS life a living hell. Jiji realizes Reva is worse than before and she urges TVS to take her to a hospital. Dhanuma keeps interfering and Jiji gets suspiious and calls Aditya and Amrita to find out what is giong on...they decide to do an investigation and find out that there is a lot of secrets behind Dhanuma her family and Reva...eventually it is found that Reva IS Dhanuma's duaghter and she was adopted by the Thakurs...Dhanuma's daughter was also mentally ill. When they met with an accident, Dhanuma and her son looked for her - that's why Dhanuma searched for...Dhanuma and her family financially benefit from the Reva and had hoped that they would benefit from TVS.
 
When Jiji finds the truth she forces TVS is get a divorce and apologizes to him for his horrible life. TVS has also decided to return to Delhi.
 
Sugni is not doing well financially; Rattan lets TVS know but TVS says that at this point Sugni will not take his help and while he feels sad for her and does care about her, he is ready to move on in his life.
 
Sugni and her family cannot make ends meet; Tinkle meets with a horrible accident and they need money. Gulabiya goes to TJS but his wife throws her out...Sugni does not know what to do...she goes to a Rai dance and agrees to do her Sardakai to save Tinkle...TVS happens to be there...he sees her and walks away.
 
At the Rai dance Sugni knows she will be sold...Gulabiya finds out and runs to the Rai dance... she sees TVS leaving and throws herself at his feet and begs him to do the Sardakai of Sugni
TVS goes back in and does Sardakai of Sugni but refuses to bring Sugni back into his life...he tells Sugni that they are now finished as a couple...
 
A woman arrives to start an NGO in the area and help the people in the area...she meets with TVS and together they strike up a good friendship...Sugni realizes that this woman is here to help...but the otther Takhurs do not like her...
 
TVS finds her an older version of Sugni and finds himself falling for her...Sugni is not happy and realizes that unless she does something, she could loose TVS again...but she knows the NGO is a great asset to the community...what does she do?
 
Gulabiya also fnds a new person in her life...the partner of the lady who runs the NGO...can Gulabiya find new love in her life...can she love someone after her life with TJS? And will TJS allow her to fall in love again...
 
Will this new man's family accept Gulabiya in their family once they find out what she does for a living or that she has an adult daughter who is the "Sardakai mistress" of TVS...
 
Problems, problems, problems...
 
TJS decides to enter into the elections and TVS decides to challenge him...Haldi chacha returns and decides to stir up to trouble with TJS wife with the NGO, Gulabiya and TVS...
 
Aditya and Amrita return...a pregnant Amrita decides to complete her documentary...and uncovers some horrible truths about the Bednis in the area...Aditya decides to help her only to discover that TJS and other Takhurs have some horrible secrets...
 
Kuhu starts seeing TJS son and finds herself pregnant...will TVS back down from the election to save his sister?
 
Ah, the plot thickens...
 
Amrita and TAS return to the village...
 
OK, that is about it...
 
 


Edited by Laila2009 - 08 August 2012 at 10:55pm

The following 7 member(s) liked the above post:

Humtum25maydaboocbindia2009muktha_cuteHillyloveVinnie79-Eris-

cupd Senior Member
cupd
cupd

Joined: 15 June 2012
Posts: 805

Posted: 08 August 2012 at 11:04pm | IP Logged

a) Sugni gets depressed and mourns loss

b) Sugni gets upset with TVS

c) Sugni goes back to live with family

d) TVS and Aditya have falling out

Laila, you are correct so far, i am still in hope that sugni and TVS will get back together ... Day Dreaming some day


 

The following 3 member(s) liked the above post:

HillyloveJulieDLaila2009

Laila2009 IF-Rockerz
Laila2009
Laila2009

Joined: 27 October 2009
Posts: 7552

Posted: 08 August 2012 at 11:07pm | IP Logged
I wrote a lot of this over a week ago on threads on this forum...what I wrote for the Sugni-Aditya plan is SO predictable it practically puts me to sleep...it is very easy to write...the writers and show up on the set and literally pen the script as it requires no depth or creativity.

The following 2 member(s) liked the above post:

Humtum25Hillylove

muktha_cute Goldie
muktha_cute
muktha_cute

Joined: 24 July 2012
Posts: 2068

Posted: 09 August 2012 at 10:26am | IP Logged
ur story is gud
bt i dnt trust cvs anymore
the day sugvi relation ends  then there is no future for the show
cbindia2009 Groupbie
cbindia2009
cbindia2009

Joined: 22 May 2009
Posts: 192

Posted: 09 August 2012 at 11:00am | IP Logged
I think u are so spot on! I rarely ever see the show now since the Reva track. I felt a wonderful opportunity was missed to tell a mature love-story. Your version is so much more interesting!

The following 2 member(s) liked the above post:

maydabooLaila2009

Laila2009 IF-Rockerz
Laila2009
Laila2009

Joined: 27 October 2009
Posts: 7552

Posted: 09 August 2012 at 8:45pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by cbindia2009

I think u are so spot on! I rarely ever see the show now since the Reva track. I felt a wonderful opportunity was missed to tell a mature love-story. Your version is so much more interesting!
EXACTLY, but that's not what this show is about or even close to it...It's about an Aditya-Sugni love story and NOTHING else. He's supposed to save her from her lechorous Takhur lover.
Vinnie79 IF-Rockerz
Vinnie79
Vinnie79

Joined: 13 June 2012
Posts: 5395

Posted: 09 August 2012 at 8:56pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Laila2009

Originally posted by cbindia2009

I think u are so spot on! I rarely ever see the show now since the Reva track. I felt a wonderful opportunity was missed to tell a mature love-story. Your version is so much more interesting!
EXACTLY, but that's not what this show is about or even close to it...It's about an Aditya-Sugni love story and NOTHING else. He's supposed to save her from her lechorous Takhur lover.


 I agree...they could have this as a mature love story...unlike others...@ Laila  and one of these smart writers decided that the Lecherous  Thankur  will just happen to be Adi's uncle ...how smart!!!\Jeez

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

Laila2009

Laila2009 IF-Rockerz
Laila2009
Laila2009

Joined: 27 October 2009
Posts: 7552

Posted: 09 August 2012 at 9:09pm | IP Logged
Reva Sugni friendship is way out there..something out of the twilight ZONE.  Totally insane. What next? Jiji and Hukum become buddies? Confused 

The following 2 member(s) liked the above post:

cupdVinnie79

Go to top

Forum Quick Jump

Forum Category / Channels
Forums

  • Please login to check your Last 10 Topics posted

Check these Celebrity also

Disclaimer: All Logos and Pictures of various Channels, Shows, Artistes, Media Houses, Companies, Brands etc. belong to their respective owners, and are used to merely visually identify the Channels, Shows, Companies, Brands, etc. to the viewer. Incase of any issue please contact the webmaster.

Popular Channels :
Star Plus | Zee TV | Sony TV | Colors TV | SAB TV | Life OK

Quick Links :
Top 100 TV Celebrities | Top 100 Bollywood Celebs | About Us | Contact Us | Advertise | Forum Index