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Posted: 24 August 2012 at 2:52am | IP Logged
oh that was amazing,finally the duo realised their mistake n decided to apologise to Al
but the thing which i liked was jay n kabeer's discussion over clown,ha ha ha that was funny,poor sam was thinking to apologise n they were discussing over clown on funeral
n jay was right they r making great plan for Al in her own house so stupid but thanx to kabeer he one of ineligent being among all three,well i feel so n sam's condition was so pitiful,sandy ne maaf kar dia hope Al bhi kr de
ud soon
luv u
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Wonderful update! This chapter had everything. Powerful writing, a knack for penning down emotions beautifully and a good sense of humor! Hug

I loved the beginning. EmbarrassedHow Sam went up to the tree house which the trio had built together. The tree house was symbolic in so many ways. It reminded him of a time when all was well between the three friends. I guess Sam just wanted a little bit of peace. With himself. And the tree house could give him that sense of comfort, happiness long lost.

It's just that it didn't. Because Alya had been inside him all the time. He never really stopped thinking about her, loving her. And the tree house, the memories contained in the tree house reminded him of just how much he had hurt her. You are amazing when it comes to writing emotions. Sam's P.O.V was done to the T. Clap

I loved the scene where Sam apologizes to Sandhya. She may be a tough nut from the outside but from the inside, she is very soft. Much like her sister. But unlike her sister she can also see straight and forgive mistakes quickly.

Oh, and Jay has to be my favorite character in the story.Wink He is so carefree and happy and overly adorable. Little ball of sunshine, exactly!

This was a fantastic read! Big smile

P.S. You are ending this after two chapters? So soon? Anyhow, waiting to see how their past story unfolds.




Edited by LoveToLaugh - 27 August 2012 at 9:42am
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Posted: 24 August 2012 at 9:20am | IP Logged
Nice part dearTongue...Keep updatingThumbs Up
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Posted: 25 August 2012 at 4:28am | IP Logged
reserved :)

EDIT.

Sam's POV-brilliantly written! Clap I actually felt  bad for the poor  guy you know..every single gesture of his was so descriptive.Loved it!

The tree house scene-a masterpiece really!You really must have thought deeply about this scene,coz as i always say,this story really means a lot to you and thus it shows in your writing Embarrassed 

So Sam finally accepts the fact that he had faulted and it was high time he apologised..He couldn't see Al crying..awww Embarrassed Oh and the Sandhya waala scene..gosh you're so good! Big smile Its was so adorable..he knelt down LOL And then he hugged her LOL It was all so cute!

Loved the chapter as always <3

P.S : 
 Oh and you had asked me a question bout the ending..well i dont really know if we even had a proper ending. it was an  abrupt ending,which is why it hurt more,coz i had no idea why what  and how..and i was way too confused with the whole situation to demand answers you know..so,yeah,that's all that there is to it.It took me a while to understand,that,oh,so that was the end. lol 

@ the A/N : the end of the story is near? Shocked oh..that really upsets me Unhappy but anyway,i think of  myself as lucky that i got to read such an epic piece of writing Smile Clap



Edited by disha15 - 27 August 2012 at 11:48am
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Posted: 25 August 2012 at 6:38am | IP Logged
Great update, Sam's views were nicely penned down. Good that he finally realized his mistakes and decided to say sorry. Really liking Jay; he is fun! =P 
Waiting to know how and why they drifted apart...

Amazing job once again. You are gonna end soon it seems, but it was a great read. Hope to read from you. :))
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Posted: 27 August 2012 at 9:45am | IP Logged
Edited my comment. :)


Edited by LoveToLaugh - 27 August 2012 at 9:46am
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Posted: 27 August 2012 at 11:59am | IP Logged
Originally posted by aamirkhanfan

great update

Thanks :). Glad you enjoyed it :D 
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Originally posted by sultanahabeeb

wow amazing thanks for pm

No problem, super happy you liked it :)

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