Posted: 19 August 2012 at 12:53am | IP Logged
will read soon-ish,i want to read this in absolute silence around,i cannot enjoy it otherwise :D this is what happens when i REALLY like an ff.
Ana,you are simply epic!
I cannot even start to describe what runs through my mind whenever i read ur updates.Im literally almost in tears each time.I dunno if its bcoz i can relate to this story or because you pen down the emotions so well,that i can actually feel the pain.I think its a bit of both.
I loved three things bout this update-
#Sandhya's entry - first scene itself told us that she is a strong character,much like her sister
But 10 times tougher.I wish i had an elder sibling who could go beat the shit outta some unwanted ppl from life
Oh...I was just heading out to get the groceries...thought its been long since I saw you two...realized I should drop by. Ask you how you two have been. How the band's going...how your families are...and why my sister looks as broken as she did the day you broke her heart."
^^the last line made me go-i so love this woman
Sam, just because you're taller than me now doesn't mean I'm not older than you. I've seen you walking around in your undies in my garden. So, I have more than enough right to slap you if you talk to me like that ever again."
"Watch it! You say one foul word about my sister and I swear to god I will make sure that you are unable to reproduce." Sandhya raised her finger threateningly at him.
^^I so loved this line. With the amount of anger building up within her,im pretty sure she would hav gone ahead and made him impot*** A really well written line. I really love Sandhya!The normally kick-ass woman turning completely helpless looking at her sister's condition showed how much variety you bring in one character.
#Kabir standing up for Sandhya and then finally deciding to apologise to Alya-beautifully written.Im glad Kabir finally has found his voice and has used it at the right place!
#Sam showing up to apologise-awww,this was just aww you know
He looked at Al with eyes that were threatening to spill tears, much like hers. I had a feeling that he desperately wanted to apologize, but at the sight of her tears, was at a loss of words. The abashed, pained expression on his face was unmistakable, and for the first time in twelve months, I felt bad for the poor kid. He looked as if he was suffering just as much, if not more, than my sister.
^^I was the closest to shedding tears while reading this paragraph.This was really..deep.It really pricked me.Cant really type what i am feeling right now,im really outta words.
Ana,i'm really glad you shared this story and I was able to read it Just to know that there are other people who have been through the same shit,makes me feel like,ok..so now i can stop saying,"why me?" each time i look up in the sky,you know
Edited by disha15 - 19 August 2012 at 3:42pm