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Ignoscentia-chapter 8 posted page 15 (Page 19)

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Posted: 26 October 2012 at 2:18am | IP Logged


I knw u r seeing my cmnt so long..

 But credits goes to my studies fr my busy schedule…

But finally landing here.

 I thought I will complete reading atleast 2 upadtes,

 But cpt-6 ws enough big as three updates I feel.

 So sry .i managed to read only 1 big update.

 So my cmnt on update strts.

Al..darlz dnt b so over perceptive abt ur sis's hey…its JUST A HEY…NOT A BOMB.

Okey- sam is in house, no reaction, kabir is in house no rxn agn…al is important.

But jay??/- reaction- wat the hell is he doing…in dis hostage drama….

He irritates all wid his encroachment I knw.. but u knw I actually enjoy his participation in stry.wen I dnt get his dialogue fr too long, I actually scroll up the page to check whether I missed any dialogue of his…non sense dialogue…

Hostage is done agnst will- really logical n thoughtful.

Al is nt ready to give dem a chance to rectify- dats rude actually.

But really liked the way to showed significance of color red- passionate…I din knw dat much…

Can u elaborate mid night blue to me???  :P

''I can't bear your face!''- al.

Come on, kya handsome banda h(agr rt ko imagine kare tho))-u cnt bear his face…!!.. ;)

Mera ek simple logic h- if u lov someone..dnt let him go…

Break up bhi mutual hone lage h….?? kabse???...abhi tak tho maine aapni life mei sirf ditching dekhi h.. mutual break up….new one… more importantly, I dnt like to play wid ma heart so I hv neva been in any relationships.. so meri knowledge kamm h iss mamale mei…

D line- wen sam n al remember their kisses below stairs on terrace, in rains…. I read dat line 5 times…

Finally we got a quasi-cosy scene b/w sam n al…really wanted a scene like dat.

Cockroach phobia- same pinch al.

N dat co-incidence of knife cut- I quiet liked it…afterall it's a stry…so co-incidence happens ..

I really expected dat nonsense question frm someone- does it hurt???- thnx kabir u did it…u proved me rite in anticipating abt YOU candy…

One more foolish thing ppl do is, dey wake up up by msging or calling and ask- soo raha h kya???- idiot, so rahi hoti tho phone nhi uthati..  :P

Kabir ws a gud frnd, he thought al is strng…bt al took him wrng way.

Hmm. Finally dinner ready ho gya…

Gr88. U talked abt bob the builder, Scooby doo n evn maskuteers…. Mera pooh kyu bhul gye yaar….

Yaar vaise tho dimaag bada chalta h tum sabka in hostaging al, n ab apni memory ki dahi bana di.. so confused.

So finally there is sm thing really imp- jay is doing..hmm..

 Acha bacha…sandhya hs left him to espionage.

Last scene ws gorgeous…mesmerizing…

Truly fascinating..cho chweet..awww!..

Lovely shovel tha vo ekdum, she ws abt to fall, he solaced her wid his hand…

She threw th pillow, snuggled him..


Kabhi kabhi talli hona kitna helpful hota h…dis is a only reason  I admire alcohol- it helps u speak your heart


But really a dreamy scene.. I loved it..

 Thnx fr the update..

N sry fr late cmnt.


Will reda rest of them soon.

 U r gr88 writer..like the way u show detailing...




Edited by sweetsanyo - 29 October 2012 at 1:05am

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