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It began from a quiet point where the reader could see that Sam remembered all the tiny things about Alya and erupted into a fully blown argument. And you really couldn't blame either of the two. Both of them had a valid stand and at the end of the day, your heart goes out to both of them. 
In that moment Alya betrayed the immense control over her feelings that she had displayed all that time after the break-up. She had loved him. All the time. Every moment. And even though she was mad at him, had not wanted to see his face before Sandhya had forced her to talk, she was glad that he was back in her life. She just didn't want him to leave her ever again. I LOVED that moment. And like Sam, I was left feeling super elated. 
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and teenie bits of comedy here and there (dunno if the word comedy would be apt,but oh what the hell,you know what i mean :) )
(if that even makes sense!)It was all so adorable! And then how caring Kabir was.How Sam still loves Al so much 
I just love Sandy i tell ya!
ROFL.
but oh well,you know what i mean )Al to speak up and confess why it hurt her so much Please please include a few more romantic scenes!Romantic scenes are tricky.And people get it all messy most of the time.But i simply loved the way you've described Sam and Al's scene here!Is there any genre u aint good at it?I doubt it! 
) 
I just found it so very hilarious at the moment.Jay's comment seeing her was a contributing factor later on Plus Kabir and ALl questioning Jay in response at the same time jinx Kabir carrying her and then the foot thing..aww Oh!the cockroach.Kabir is such a doll 
And what i admire the most is..even though they've been having this sort of ..turbulence in their relationship for almost a year..they didn't even talk to each other during the time you know..it took them minutes to get back to what they were.I am referring to all three of them here actually. Aww So i need not comment anything on this scene.I simply loved it The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:
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and teenie bits of comedy here and there (dunno if the word comedy would be apt,but oh what the hell,you know what i mean :) )The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:
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Aww thank you! You are so sweet! That's a great compliment :)and lol Jay can be so annoying but find his character quite funny and adorable here. He is annoying all the time. But he's adorably annoying. And very important too. Yes. I'm glad you picked up on that. He's very, VERY important. Haha nothing exciting or mind blowing will be revealed, fair warning :PThe following 1 member(s) liked the above post:
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