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How things change... - SS updated pg 20 (Page 7)

Anu101 Senior Member
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Posted: 15 August 2012 at 11:29pm | IP Logged
Thank you so much for the pm 
CryCryCry
Feeling so sorry for Viren and Jeevika..I just can't bear that they are going through al this..I mean they are the blissfully happy couple...
Your concept is really nice and your story is so touching Star
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Posted: 15 August 2012 at 11:39pm | IP Logged
lovely update...i am not getting words to praise the beauty of your writing skill...hats off dear

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Posted: 16 August 2012 at 1:41am | IP Logged
Really emotional & aweosm one Pj...Jeevika's state of mind & atmosphere in house is  described very well...both VJ have gone through a bad phase...ESP J...but finally she opened up to viren...it always helps
 But a lot is to b unwrapped yet...the way Manvi is avoiding J's calls

& the last line that Viren is supporting her But this isn't enough indicates a lot of other things yet to come...
 But really nice one & the best part was J's outburst & Viren's urge to c her happy...to take all her pains away

Lovely update !!!! Waiting for next one ..
 && colours r nice always an add on while reading & as for story making sense I dont find it confusing & by the sound of it...it seems well managed..so don't worry about that

PS - & u can really think dude...I mean J's notes r quite philosophical...end point of life & all that...I love such things But to be honest when I Read them with concentration & tried to think on J's pov...I ended up being hungry !!!!



Edited by nobo - 16 August 2012 at 1:48am

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Posted: 16 August 2012 at 2:36am | IP Logged
after loosing who was closest to her soul, her sis, if life had given her ahope, it was the pregnancy.
and that too ends out tragegically.
now i can connect to jeevika here. its too much of loss she has been through 
 
 as you put really well sometimes when you have most of what you want the void will still be there, cause emotional proportions of importance of people in our lives is only what we know, and only that one person can fill such a void. no replacement works there.

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Posted: 16 August 2012 at 2:41am | IP Logged
an awesome concept!!Feelings,pain...both r just simply commendable..Jeevika pain for lossing evrything...Viren as alwayzz a big support as alwayzz hides his pain..evrythng was just Superbb...Simply Commendable..i want to read more and more partss or never ending partss..plz do update soon...
thankss for d PM!

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Posted: 16 August 2012 at 3:34am | IP Logged
absolutely brilliant
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Posted: 16 August 2012 at 3:46am | IP Logged
superb...loved the way u described everything...jeevika loosing everything...n viren being her support...amazing...continue soon...n thnx 4 d pm...

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Posted: 16 August 2012 at 6:20am | IP Logged
This was awsome,loved it to the core.Poor virika lost their baby,though I feel bad for jeevika but my sympathies wud be with viren,he has always been so loving and supportive,but may be jeevika didn't,there were so many other issues tht consumed her,tht she lost focus on viren.(I m saying this keeping in my yr SS) .The way u write is so good,it's so gripping and the story is very interesting!

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