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How things change... - SS updated pg 20 (Page 7)

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Posted: 16 August 2012 at 2:36am | IP Logged
after loosing who was closest to her soul, her sis, if life had given her ahope, it was the pregnancy.
and that too ends out tragegically.
now i can connect to jeevika here. its too much of loss she has been through 
 
 as you put really well sometimes when you have most of what you want the void will still be there, cause emotional proportions of importance of people in our lives is only what we know, and only that one person can fill such a void. no replacement works there.

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Posted: 16 August 2012 at 2:41am | IP Logged
an awesome concept!!Feelings,pain...both r just simply commendable..Jeevika pain for lossing evrything...Viren as alwayzz a big support as alwayzz hides his pain..evrythng was just Superbb...Simply Commendable..i want to read more and more partss or never ending partss..plz do update soon...
thankss for d PM!

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Posted: 16 August 2012 at 3:34am | IP Logged
absolutely brilliant
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Posted: 16 August 2012 at 3:46am | IP Logged
superb...loved the way u described everything...jeevika loosing everything...n viren being her support...amazing...continue soon...n thnx 4 d pm...

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Posted: 16 August 2012 at 6:20am | IP Logged
This was awsome,loved it to the core.Poor virika lost their baby,though I feel bad for jeevika but my sympathies wud be with viren,he has always been so loving and supportive,but may be jeevika didn't,there were so many other issues tht consumed her,tht she lost focus on viren.(I m saying this keeping in my yr SS) .The way u write is so good,it's so gripping and the story is very interesting!

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Posted: 17 August 2012 at 10:35am | IP Logged
Amazingly written!!
Loved it!

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Posted: 17 August 2012 at 4:13pm | IP Logged
Sorry for being so late to review this... I m doing combined comment of last two updates...
I don't even know where to start...Shitt...M kinda..hating you and loving you right now.Sleepy
Flashback scene was OUCH...they broke KHOON KA RISHTA:(:(:( M' anger.. its been 13 months they are not in contact...aah... still alive??Ermm whose photo J burnt?


"Ignore everything? Me? You're the one who is ignoring your feelings. Something has pissed you off, yet you won't acknowledge it and tell me. And I'm the one who is ignoring things. . Smile - I love VIREN in ur SS the most... and J is always my fav. :))) I'd like to say right now that I LOVEDDD EVERYTHING U WROTE...
The Way You Write, The Plot, Details, Everything... SUPERBBB PoojaClapClapClap

They lost their Baby... :( means Jeevika lost her two babies.. her pain is no doubt much more than Viren...

I've lost everything, my parents, my family, my sister, MY child. Everyone is gone, they left, and some forever, whist others carry on with their lives, without even looking back. Where am I left, alone by myself." incredibly powerful and so heartrending...You've got me in tears, here..my heart's literally aching

Viren leant in and cried on Jeevika's bed. Slowly she patted him on the back and as she tried to understand what had happened.SmileSmileSmileSmile

Viren reading J's notes...  Superb ideaThumbs Up

So they are heading to Hrishikesh... Well then for sure Behnas gonna face each other after an year... :) well i wud love to know they meet again... so update the next part sooon... Overall Brilliant writing...Very well-written.. excellent use of descriptions, physical and emotional.
Keep it up

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Posted: 20 August 2012 at 6:00pm | IP Logged
Sincere apologies for the late reading, Pooja! Unhappy Finally found some time to breathe...couldn't wait any longer (love your writing) so just caught up with the two parts that I missed :D

All I can say to this is...B R I L L I A N T!!!! Stern Smile I don't know how you do it, dude!!! The way you get right into Virika's heads and beautifully express their POVs...incredible!!! I was biting my nails throughout because I was picturing all this happening right in front of my eyes...your writing is SO convincing and believable *sigh* The flashback of the JM scene was haunting...major heartbreak! The sacred khoon ka rishta...broken?!  Unhappy Intrigued to see how and what happens when they meet again *covers eyes* All the Virika scenes are AMAZING Stern Smile It's like "when a tornado meets a volcano" *sigh* The way you presented their pain and anguish because of each other & the circumstances...it's hard to take a side! I can't help but sympathize with both...Manvi, the baby, the Vadheras...*sigh* Special shout-out to the June 5th and 6th notes...so poignant! My heart was in my mouth while reading them...got reminded of Grey's voiceovers actually :p

Great work, dude!!! Update again soon :D  

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