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How things change... - SS updated pg 20 (Page 22)

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Posted: 23 December 2012 at 3:04am | IP Logged
Originally posted by nobo

I Justt love how you pen down endings to your stories...Maybe not too happy but always perfect...
BEAUTIFUL...

The restlessness of Viren & Maanvi for Der respective partners...Was really easy to imagine as u read. As I said earlier what you write is easy to connect with
I especially liked the last part where you RE mentioned those philosophical words from Jeevika's notes...the contrast in her situation & her deleting them...Awesomely penned

Another Fab piece...dude I really love these HOW titles





I just love your comments Priya. My How titles! Ha. Honestly my English sucks. I'm known for terrible spelling.

I don't do complexity happy, can be too sweet, I will try but it doesn't always fit for me. There has to be that bittersweet that comes with life.

I'm glad you could connect with that section, as I did think it needed more to make it connectable or relatable.

I really wanted to bring the notes back. They still here not that long, but I know you enjoyed them sync I enjoy writing them. Eva and I wood say, the dark and twisty side had come out. So that had to have a return. It was mainly to show, how the story changed from beginning to end, there is a clear difference and progression. From once writing them to finally deleting them, as in the middle she was still holding onto it. Now it has been released.

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Posted: 23 December 2012 at 3:11am | IP Logged
Originally posted by preetivr

love the finish
total transition of attitute from the begining chap to the completion

justifies so much the title


Thank you for reading the entire SS. I wanted to have closure. So that was the only way, as it started with Jeevika and how she has was after separating to now. How things change, I guess worked out to be an apt title for it.
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Posted: 23 December 2012 at 3:19am | IP Logged
Who says you can love just Perfect things...
 Well really Your titles always prove to be Apt 4 story & Dw abt Eng, most of spell errors are auto correct...
Lol technology ..can't live with it Can't live without it

 Yeah bitter truths which one can't run away from ...thats why I liked the notes part...kinda shows How the story developed from prologue till now.
I did told u earlier  M really crap with Saying philosophical things But I really love reading them...even if I fail to comprehend them sometimes lol

Awesome flow



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Posted: 23 December 2012 at 4:20am | IP Logged
Originally posted by forever_young


Well I just don't know what to say!
Couldn't have been a better ending then this!
Loveed this story, Can't believe its ending! <3
Just beautiful!!

Please Do PM me whenever you write anything... :')

Thank you for giving us such a wonderful treat! <3


Your welcome for the story. I am really glad you enjoyed it and thought the ended suited the entire story. If I do write I will be sure to pm you. However if it is over Christmas that might not be possible. If we are on each others buddy list it might be easier. ( I can't remember) But you welcome for the treat.
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Posted: 23 December 2012 at 6:10am | IP Logged
Originally posted by amritaluvskryan

plz continue soon


Sorry I've finished the entire SS. It had nine parts. Hopefully you enjoyed them all.
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Posted: 23 December 2012 at 8:56am | IP Logged
Amazing!! Loved the ending!
Hope u write more SS in future,ur an brilliant writer!

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Posted: 23 December 2012 at 1:46pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Sweety1234556

Amazing!! Loved the ending!
Hope u write more SS in future,ur an brilliant writer!

Glad you enjoyed the ending and the entire story. Thank you for the compliment, I'm not that great, it's not fully proofread, too many errors that are annoying me. Unfortunately I cannot edit them soon. 
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Posted: 23 December 2012 at 7:10pm | IP Logged
Updated my comment on Page 20 right underneath the final update :)

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