[QUOTE=-Pj-]@Ami
Well at least this time my update did not take as long as the previous one did. Maybe you needed a catch up.
The story was coherent? Well that was a bonus! I didn't really know where I was heading but it did try and relate back to it to how it started. As change is something that should always be round and a journey through s story.
The last part was unreal? is that a good thing?
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Yes true- you have been relatively quick with your update this time!!! Last part being unreal in the sense that it was not something I had imagined and you added that extra touch of suspense which made it interesting to read so yes, its a good thing :)
It was perfect blend, Pj :) Looking forward for your next!!!!!
Edited by Amii90 - 11 years ago
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