new ArHi ff khwaish Part 2 on Page 6 (15/08/2012) - Page 2

Sounds promesing...continue soon...

Well a good start to the ff. The storyline looks promising. Update soon. Thanks for the pm

Very interesting start! Edited by sohara - 11 years ago

Nice start.thanx for the pm

sounds interesting dear:)

continue soon...

absolutely an amazing start.. for a while i was thinking u have pen down ur personal experiences.

Awesome FF! 😃..

Khushi's POV is quite frank & honest- me thought u were introducing ur self
I am not a follower of the serial Maaneet but still liked the idea of merging the two
thnx for the p.m.

nice really want to read further😊

really nyc intro...