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Arnav-Khushi FF: ASR Decrypted - Part 5 on pg9 (Page 2)

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Posted: 08 August 2012 at 9:41pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by --SweetFarwii--

Res :)

Edit.

I liked how you executed what rain was to Khushi, how the rain changes due to her mood. That was really cute :)
Arnav murdered Shyam 'o' And to the world Shyam was a nice guy...Damn...interesting!

Loved Shashi's and Khushi's bond. Their conversation was really sweet! I really like how he explains Khushi about recognizing another persons' feelings out of the decency of being human.

Loving this story...really creative idea =) Keep updating and don't forget to pm me :$

-Farwii.

Originally posted by --SweetFarwii--

P.S. Love yur Banner :)
 

Thank you!! Embarrassed Really appreciate the lovely, detailed comment! The thing with the weather, I do it too, and I'm pretty sure I'm not the only one LOL 
I like how you said that "to the world" Shyam was a nice guy.. I'm keeping the characterisations close to what they are in the soap, so some things are probably expected. However, that also means that Arnav is just as frustratingly inaccessible as ever!
Thank you once again. Glad you liked it! Big smile
And thanks for the comment on the banner. I'm kinda proud of it too Embarrassed


Originally posted by -JollyJabeen-

OMG! This is beautiful, I've read it briefly, Back to reading it again now and i LOVE it! Big smile

I'll edit in a bit, Btw fantastic start! And please PM me ::)

CSI: New York's on! Sorry, Will be back! ;)
 

I'm super chuffed that you like it so much!! Big smile Big smile Thank you! 
And I love CSI: NY!


Originally posted by Suni

Interesting start! Looking forward to part 2.

 

Thanks dear! Hope part 2 lives up to your expectations! Embarrassed  


Originally posted by onetwothree

ITS AMAZING...Thumbs UpThumbs Up...interesting...ErmmHug...continueee...Smile

thanks for d pm..Hug
 

Really?? Yayy!! Thanks so much!!  Hug  That's very encouraging! Embarrassed


Originally posted by sakthi25

ASR killed shyam ...
Pretty interesting storyline...

Thanks for the comment! Glad you find it interesting! Embarrassed









Edited by errrm - 08 August 2012 at 9:42pm

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Posted: 08 August 2012 at 9:46pm | IP Logged
And to everyone who commented/liked, a HUGE thank you once again! I would not have continued this, if there were no comments - which I would have felt really sad about.

So, thank you, for encouraging me to take this further! Hug

Ps. To those of you whom I spammed without your asking, sorry again :P 


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Posted: 09 August 2012 at 5:44am | IP Logged

Damn Interesting Part ; D Embarrassed

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Posted: 09 August 2012 at 6:05am | IP Logged
That was so awesome...

Really catchy...

Interesting concept n superb starting...

Loved it...

Cont. soon...

Thnx for the pm...

Waiting for more...

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Posted: 09 August 2012 at 6:06am | IP Logged
P.S. loved the banner...

Really wonderful...

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Posted: 09 August 2012 at 6:07am | IP Logged
Interesting concept...And ur writing is powerful too...Loved it and im sure ur readers will love ur writing style...
Cont soon with part 2..

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Posted: 09 August 2012 at 7:32am | IP Logged
Wow! I really liked it!

The way you portrayed each character, keeping their main traits while also altering them as needed.

Shyam...hmmm...is he really as good as they make him sound? I think not! Arnav Singh Raizada never does anything without a reason ;) Am I right or am I right?

Anyways I love Shashi babua in this story!! Lol

And awh. Khushi lost her parents in this one too?! But writers gotta do what a writers gotta do.

Khushi is still the same bubbly, optimistic, hard-headed, determined girl but shes more mature and not as innocent maybe...

Arnav is still the controlling, short-tempered, egoistic, except his a blood crazed murderer this time! But his ego will never leave will it?

Anyways continue soon! And I'll let you know that I won't be able to read every update as it comes because college is starting and I'll be busy. But I'll try! But please continue PMing me.

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Posted: 09 August 2012 at 11:22am | IP Logged
Nicely penned :)

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