Originally posted by: What_theOops i reserved a post above your update...what a booboo!!!
It was a nice update...they are bonding...i know he is going to use her as his escape route but i hope he will not do wrong by her...
Originally posted by: jen_xthanks you! Wow they meet again... After 6 years.. and he said sorry :) Poor Payal, she died...
Originally posted by: tsultanaOmgg beautiful update!! So emotional. I loved how arnav couldnt go ahead with wat he had planned. Wats more great was he apologised to her head down n she forgave him...
Thank u for the pm x
Originally posted by: Arina_RRes. I know I have two RES's to edit but I've been a bit busy. Sorry! Will get them both done by tomorrow!
Originally posted by: sakthi25Woah! he admitted his mistake to her...
Originally posted by: dorindakateThanks for the pm...
What a turn in direction...whew...didn't see it coming...I thought that Arnav would continue on with his plan to use her for a long time...you succeeded in shocking me...I wasn't prepared for Arnav to feel guilt over the Sheesh Mahal incident...'course I didn't know that Payal had died at the hands of her husband and his family either...poor Payal, Khushi and family...but he easily could have been insensitive...my sister died--so what if yours did too...So..he already realizes what a unique person Khushi is...sees her worth...her value...already loving her..wanting to protect her..but alas...the one she needs protection from is himself...What a terrible place for Arnav to be in...mentally and emotionally, let alone physically...Great story, great writing...I notice I keep holding my breath while reading each chapter...and have to gulp for air...you are just too good...To say that I'm anxiously awaiting the next chapter would be an understatement...
Originally posted by: SuniYay! An update. Really liked it. Was not expecting the twist of the Sheesh Mahal meeting...
Originally posted by: HubzeJust read the whole thing and man it's so intriguing... Continue soon and plz PM me if you can...
Originally posted by: freya123grt part
Originally posted by: annabVery well written story...loving the characters.i have a feeling tht arnav didnt kill shyam..he is framed for his murder.its just my thought only !!! khushi has gone through soo much in her life also..so its easy for them to connect each other...
pls continue soon and pls pm me whn u update...thanx...
Originally posted by: fianothis FF as i am reading some author book.
i really want to know how u got inspired from .Really it amazing ...
Originally posted by: Kittya_Cullen@Anu: Only five updates? I am wailing over here. Why oh why did you send that joint P.M.!??πππThis is worse than waiting for MAK to be updated! Atleast with that I already watch PV to abate my anguish. Ohhh Anu!!!πππ
I'm not sure if I'm going to be able to do the detailed commentary you deserve. Atleast not right now. I will reserve this parking space for my grand re-entryπππ.
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Originally posted by: Auroni.92That ws excellent...
Loved this part..
Do cont soon..:)
Originally posted by: Mxk3444Dood I love this story it's amazing well done! You have an amazing writing style. This is one if the greatest pieces I've ever read and I can't believe I have never seen this story before :) I can't wait to read the next update so update soon!!!
Originally posted by: Mxk3444Update I'm dying here lol!!!! But seriously..
Originally posted by: perfectpisceanThis FF is BRILLIANT
The story is sooo good and your writing is even better!I hope you continue this one soon, so impatient to read the next part haha :)And please PM me whenever you do update it :)Thanks xx
Originally posted by: niharika111I love it so far...I hope you continue writing!
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