Arnav-Khushi FF: ASR Decrypted - Part 5 on pg9 - Page 3

 

 

Originally posted by: -Tintin.

WOOOW, Story ; D 😳

 

 

 

Originally posted by: Arina_R

This is definately something new! And I'm loving it<3

The characters so different yet the same.

ASR is still the doting brother for his beloved sister, but how far can he go for her happiness? Can he do something that would lead her to take her own life? Well we'll find out soon won't we? ;D

And Khushi, still so delicate and serene but this time she had a focus...that may become unfocused in the process of seeing the truth clearly?!

They both intrigue the other yet their positions hold them back...but will her job and the common sense be enough to hold her back? Will his secrets be enough to hold him back? I think not.

When chained down like an animal how can you act any less? My heart truly felt for Arnav and the way he was treated. I can see so did Khushi.

All in all I loved it. I truly didn't know what to expect after te first part but this was outstanding. Can't wait to read more and learn more! :)

Thanks for the PM. Update soon.

 

 

 

Originally posted by: onetwothree

amazing update..👍🏼🤗...superb..🤗

 

 

 

Originally posted by: Auroni.92

U've portrayed arnav's helplessness and his rage perfectly...so much that i cud visualize that part..
Amazing this ws..
Cont..

 

 

 

 

What a different story - very interesting and I'm looking forward to the next update.

Your story drew me in from the first about Khushi and the weather...

Love her as a shrink...

Soo Anjali committed suicide...like mom and dad?  And it must have all been Shyam's fault--he was probably living a double life-the public one..Defender of the Downtrodden...and the private one..must have been too hurtful for Di to face...

JUST can't wait to find out what went down--what drove Anjali and then Arnav...

The story is just so intriguing, can see ASR losing it if Di died and killing Shyam...

Anxiously but patiently waiting for more of the story...

 

Originally posted by: tsultana

Omg WOWWW!!! am lost for words... ur work had me gripped from begining to end. Outstanding!!! Plz pm me when u update. Thank u

 

 

 

Originally posted by: dorindakate

Whew...this is powerful stuff!!!

Your story drew me in from the first about Khushi and the weather...

Love her as a shrink...

Soo Anjali committed suicide...like mom and dad?  And it must have all been Shyam's fault--he was probably living a double life-the public one..Defender of the Downtrodden...and the private one..must have been too hurtful for Di to face...

JUST can't wait to find out what went down--what drove Anjali and then Arnav...

The story is just so intriguing, can see ASR losing it if Di died and killing Shyam...

Anxiously but patiently waiting for more of the story...

 

 

Originally posted by: sugarcane

Very original and interesting. Please update.

 

 

Originally posted by: icegurl789

plzz pm me when u update...its so interesting!

 

 

Originally posted by: --SweetFarwii--

Beautiful update <33

-Farwii.