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MANVEER FF : The journey of a wife... (Book 1) (Page 92)

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Posted: 01 November 2012 at 10:57am | IP Logged
Hey navi Smile sorry for the super late comment but here hurricane sandy has really tossed our lives just got my power back , and just now read ur update . And need I say how much of a good writer u r ! As usual I loved the update Clap

Now navi I feel from the shoot out episode u have taken this ff in a whole new level. We all by know know that manveer were destined to be 2gether and they love each other more than anything in this world. UV is a prefect character , now with this new climax I see u giving a whole new definition to Manyata . I can see the hidden tigress coming out . Now navi I want u to take this asshole Aryan to a whole new level of evilry. I mean he dared to hurt our prince I mean I want u to define Aryan and his disgusting nature so that we as viewers can hate him even more plus with every passing second even Manyata can know how wrong she was in falling for this paskash Angry I mean I know in the previous chapter u hav made M regret her coldness and hatred towards UV, but now I want her to be even more great full for having UV in her life, I want M to fall for UV even more now .

Thanks for the PM navi and update soon Big smile

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Posted: 01 November 2012 at 12:53pm | IP Logged
navi i forgot which page i had reserved 
so can i comment here 
or can u please tell me which page it was 

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Posted: 02 November 2012 at 10:17am | IP Logged
Originally posted by coolsaloni.nira

reserve for now...LOL

but i have already  read the part ,,, do i need to say this again its awesum...navina...Clap

will post  detailed comment soonLOL
 
Thanx Nira  Hug   .
 
This comment is more than sufficient,
 ...  no need for a detailed 1 LOL.
 
 
 


Edited by ...navina... - 03 November 2012 at 7:26am
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Posted: 02 November 2012 at 10:24am | IP Logged
Originally posted by puggyy

  NAVINA JI WEN R U GONNA UPDATE ???

    Pls can u update today Sleepy Atleast tomorrow Day Dreaming  ? Pls Ouch     
      Last update was too good , MANYTAHA Jhansi ki rani bangayi Clap
 
 
 
Hai hai Anisha Confused...
"JI"     and all huh???Shocked
My next update will take a few days Ouch , as I'm not happy with certain things there Angry.   But i will try to do it soon!!! Big smile   Manyata's   "JHANSI KI RANI "   attitude will be toned down for the next part as she takes on a different role Embarrassed.   She will be  "PLAYING NURSE"   to her injured husband WinkBlushing.
 

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Posted: 02 November 2012 at 10:28am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ...navina...

Originally posted by puggyy

  NAVINA JI WEN R U GONNA UPDATE ???

    Pls can u update today Sleepy Atleast tomorrow Day Dreaming  ? Pls Ouch     
      Last update was too good , MANYTAHA Jhansi ki rani bangayi Clap
 
 
 
Hai hai Anisha Confused...
"JI"     and all huh???Shocked
My next update will take a few days Ouch , as I'm not happy with certain things there Angry.   But i will try to do it soon!!! Big smile   Manyata's   "JHANSI KI RANI "   attitude will be toned down for the next part as she takes on a different role Embarrassed.   She will be  "PLAYING NURSE"   to her injured husband WinkBlushing.
 
 Clap Clap
 


   I would love to see her new role Day Dreaming
  Am so excited for ur next update and manveer Smile

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Posted: 02 November 2012 at 10:35am | IP Logged
Originally posted by MsLuscious

Omg this chapter was fab! Without any romance it was purly romantic. Navina u r amazing writer i could visualize each and every scene of this chapter. There r less writers who can write so beautifuly that u feel like u r watching iy i know last time i said something like this too but seriously wenever  i read ur update one thing which comes into my mind is wow! I loved the way manyata handled the press the way she make them realize their mistake was great. Manveer were amazing but the best part was that u didn't killed uday and i love you for that thanks for not dragging the hospital scene! I love you for this beautiful update :)
 
 
Thank you Sarah  Hug .  Glad u felt that it was still romantic Embarrassed .  HOWEVER : just a side note :  THERE WILL BE PLENTY ROMANCE IN THE NEXT 2 PARTS WinkBlushing !!!     U are very kind   with your compliments and I appreciate it.    My Dear - if I killed off Uday   ...   I WOULD"VE HAD TO LEAVE THE FORUM Shocked  ...  MY LIFE WOULD"VE BEEN IN SERIOUS DANGER!!! Ouch   The hospital scene was boring me too muchConfused ...   THAT'S WHY I HAD UDAY DISCHARGED SO FAST !!!WinkLOL
 
THANK U SO MUCH 4 SUCH A LOVELY COMMENT Star.
 
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Posted: 02 November 2012 at 10:41am | IP Logged
Originally posted by puggyy

Originally posted by ...navina...

Originally posted by puggyy

  NAVINA JI WEN R U GONNA UPDATE ???

    Pls can u update today Sleepy Atleast tomorrow Day Dreaming  ? Pls Ouch     
      Last update was too good , MANYTAHA Jhansi ki rani bangayi Clap
 
 
 
Hai hai Anisha Confused...
"JI"     and all huh???Shocked
My next update will take a few days Ouch , as I'm not happy with certain things there Angry.   But i will try to do it soon!!! Big smile   Manyata's   "JHANSI KI RANI "   attitude will be toned down for the next part as she takes on a different role Embarrassed.   She will be  "PLAYING NURSE"   to her injured husband WinkBlushing.
 
 Clap Clap
 


   I would love to see her new role Day Dreaming
  Am so excited for ur next update and manveer Smile
 
 
Forgot to say something  ...
 ... for the next update - 
you better make sure the fan / air-conditioning is working Blushing!!!
 
( hope u are still excited about the next part and hope I didn't scare u too much )  LOLWink.
 


Edited by ...navina... - 02 November 2012 at 10:42am

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Posted: 02 November 2012 at 10:53am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ...navina...

Originally posted by puggyy

Originally posted by ...navina...

Originally posted by puggyy

  NAVINA JI WEN R U GONNA UPDATE ???

    Pls can u update today Sleepy Atleast tomorrow Day Dreaming  ? Pls Ouch     
      Last update was too good , MANYTAHA Jhansi ki rani bangayi Clap
 
 
 
Hai hai Anisha Confused...
"JI"     and all huh???Shocked
My next update will take a few days Ouch , as I'm not happy with certain things there Angry.   But i will try to do it soon!!! Big smile   Manyata's   "JHANSI KI RANI "   attitude will be toned down for the next part as she takes on a different role Embarrassed.   She will be  "PLAYING NURSE"   to her injured husband WinkBlushing.
 
 Clap Clap
 


   I would love to see her new role Day Dreaming
  Am so excited for ur next update and manveer Smile
 
 
Forgot to say something  ...
 ... for the next update - 
you better make sure the fan / air-conditioning is working Blushing!!!
 
( hope u are still excited about the next part and hope I didn't scare u too much )  LOLWink.
 

     I don't get u navi ??? Any suspense ...don't harm anyone ...I'll need ac only wen it is full of suspense ...hint plsss

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