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MANVEER FF : The journey of a wife... (Book 1) (Page 85)

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Posted: 25 October 2012 at 8:19am | IP Logged
Originally posted by AndreaBaid

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Originally posted by ashukapoor007

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Originally posted by coolsaloni.nira

reserve
sorry navi...fr late replying
will comment soonEmbarrassed
 
 
WAITING ...                  


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Posted: 25 October 2012 at 8:22am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Sunshinegirll

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Originally posted by Sunshinegirll

hey loved d update..          ...    THANK YOU!!!
loved d manveer romance..Embarrassed                                   ...  Blushing Blushing Blushing
who s dat "Censored" who was watching themAngry      ...   U already know that answerWink
pls uday ko teek kar doCryCry                                    ...   main doctor nahi hoon Shocked
update soonSmileSmile                                                       ...  I WILL!!! Big smile
 
THANX  SOW  - FOR COMMENTING   Hug


arrey you are the writer so u r d only one who can make uday get well soon..
not a docLOLLOL
HugHug
 
 
TRUE  Cool    !!!!
 -    I love this forumHeart   ...   u girls have made me
 more  powerful than even a doctor  Evil Smile.
 

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Posted: 25 October 2012 at 9:49am | IP Logged
Originally posted by urvashihiran

hi. your action sequel was awesome never read action sequel as good as this one it reminds of shoot-out at lokhandwala. damn thrillingStern SmileThumbs UpD'oh
please pm me.
 
 
Hi Dear Star ...   Thanx for the compliment ...  I put in a lot of hard work in this chapter and I appreciate your acknowledgement of it     ...    Also,   I'm sure u noticed that the title I chose for my chapter was inspired by SHOOTOUT  @  LOKHANDWALAWinkLOL.    I'll add in your name to my PM list Big smile .                         THANX 4 COMMENTING URVASHI     Hug .
 
 
 
 
Originally posted by Sanarasheedroxx

Awesome navina i really liked ur SS ...jeh in mental asylum well dats hilarious LOL           -   ur updates r full of manveer loving making scenes ROFL update ASAP & pm me if u can
 
 
 
Thanx Dear   ...   Had to get rid of Jai Ouch  - I can only deal with 1 villain at a time LOL .   About the love-making scenes  Embarrassed Blushing  -  WELL , that is PUBLIC-DEMAND  Approve.       THANX 4 YOUR COMMENT     Hug
 
 
 
 
 


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Posted: 25 October 2012 at 9:57am | IP Logged
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now we can become chaddi buddy but now we became huggy buddy n kissy buddy n jeany buddy..hahahaHugHeart
 
 
Sonia Dear  ...  U ARE STARTING TO SCARE MEShocked LOL.
 
Hug   Heart   Hug   Heart   Hug
   
arey dont be scared it was now we cant be chaddi buddy..n i know i m abnormal n mad completely but i m not L..hahahahahsoo chillax..hahahahWink
 
No Dear  - I never even thought of the "L"  word.  To me , U are not abnormal & mad!!!
 
U ARE A WARM , FRIENDLY GIRL  ; WHO IS  VERY LOVING  ...
 
                   
                        
 


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Posted: 25 October 2012 at 2:26pm | IP Logged
i want update Monkey IconsMonkey IconsMonkey IconsMonkey IconsMonkey Icons
i am on strike 


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Posted: 26 October 2012 at 4:32am | IP Logged
updated my comment on page 79///
plz do check it
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Posted: 26 October 2012 at 5:43am | IP Logged
Wow I am extremely late and can't even think of a proper apology for that Confused
Reserved for Chapters 2.3 - 2.7!

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Chapter 2.3

My oh my, so Jaynandini is full on psycho now Wacko . I am confused whether I should sympathize with her or just not care, because she pretty much deserved it. That whole scene with her kinda creeped me out, but it was beautifully penned. I could actually feel her pain too. Loved the usual bickering between Uday and Manyata, now added with a touch of flirting, more from Manyata's side. I am liking the Manyata in your SS. She is so confident and mature. The bathroom scene was too much for me too handle LOL . But good job.

Chapter 2.4

Looks like Aryan/Akash is about to make his unwanted entry in the story soon. But every good love story needs an annoying villain, and who could be better for it than our very own Jerkash Verma aka Aryan. So I'm up for it. Hope Rajjat finds him before it's too late. That shaitaan part with Giriraj was really funny LOL

Chapter 2.5

Unnati's swayamvar LOL . It was so cute the way Uday stood up for his little sister. The part with Uday and Manyata where he teases her on saying Uday kay bachay cracked me up ROFL . You write some really amazing dialogues. And Jerkash shows his face Dead

Chapter 2.6

You dedicated this chapter to Equina giving birth, and hats off to you Navina for such a detailed description of the process which was beautifully penned down Clap . Made me wonder, you seem to know a lot about horses. Really I must say, it was amazingly done. And Manyata thought Equine was some girl, little did she know it was a horse LOL

Chapter 2.7

This chapter literally had me at the edge of my seat till the very end. I'm guessing the mystery man who was eyeing their private moment was Akash. Freaking jerk. Now the entire shoot out scene was mind boggling and utterly amazing. I can't even highlight a favorite part from it as the whole this was so damn intriguing and I was hooked to it. The way the loyal guards jumped in to save their Yuvraaj and lost their lives during it really touched my heart. I could actually visualize that scene. Amazing job Clap


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Posted: 26 October 2012 at 10:17am | IP Logged
Originally posted by MAHI1198

omg it was to good...
loved it awesumm...
hope nothing happens to uv...
thnks for pm...
and do pm me wen u update nxt...Clap
  
 
Thanx Dear  ...   Don't worry about Uday!!!     Whilst I'm the writer - nothing can happen to him Wink  .    Welcome for the PM Smile.
 
THANK U 4 COMMENTING MAHI   Hug
 

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