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MANVEER FF : The journey of a wife... (Book 1) (Page 80)

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Posted: 23 October 2012 at 2:02pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ...navina...

Originally posted by MsLuscious

oh God dear the updaye was very unpredictable. It had indeed a very big twist.
seriously i was hell shocked when uday got shot twice. Please navina i dont want hin to die or something cant bear that i know twists are necessary for the progress of any story but dont kill him!
the updated was really amazingly written i was actually picturizing it in my mind!
Great job deary eagerly waiting for next update now its your time to update very very fast:)
 
Hey Sarah   ...    Had to put in a twist, something which nobody would've expected.  ( because I had to make sure that all my readers will come back for the next partLOLWink).
 
I am not evil Dear -   I'm not gonna let him die.   I Heart him as much as all the girls here love him. 
 
Thanx for the lovely compliment    Hug.
 
Will TRY to update soonStar.
lol navi trust me if you didnt updated fast i wont mind it cox i now how much time this UPDATE THING consumesLOL i can feel your pain
it
screws your head completelyWink
but still ill say  update as soon as you can lol
Hug

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Posted: 23 October 2012 at 2:05pm | IP Logged
loved reading your SS..read all the chapters at a stretch..you are great in making plots.. waiting to see what will happen next. Pls update soon and PM me if possible.

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Posted: 23 October 2012 at 3:56pm | IP Logged
comment reached on pg 75Wink

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Posted: 23 October 2012 at 9:10pm | IP Logged
navina plsss update soon plsss...

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Posted: 24 October 2012 at 1:36am | IP Logged
Originally posted by MsLuscious

Originally posted by ...navina...

Originally posted by MsLuscious

oh God dear the updaye was very unpredictable. Ithad indeed a very big twist. seriously i was hell shocked when uday got shot twice. Please navina i dont want hin to die or something cant bear that i know twists are necessary for the progress of any story but dont kill him! the updated was really amazingly written iwas actually picturizing it in my mind! Great job deary eagerly waiting for next updatenow its your time to update very very fast:)
Hey Sarah ... Had to put in a twist, something which nobody would've expected. ( because I had to make sure that all my readers will come back for the next partLOLWink).
I am not evil Dear - I'm not gonna let him die. I Hearthim as much as all the girls here love him.
Thanx for the lovely compliment Hug.
Will TRY to update soonStar.
lol navi trust me if you didnt updated fast i wont mind it cox i now how much time this UPDATE THING consumesLOL i can feel your pain
it
screws your head completelyWink

but still ill say update as soon as you can lolHug

Lo alll writers are in one team to not to give updates soon

Sarah and navi...me still here...don't even think about late updates...

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Posted: 24 October 2012 at 4:44am | IP Logged
hi. your action sequel was awesome never read action sequel as good as this one it reminds of shoot-out at lokhandwala. damn thrillingStern SmileThumbs UpD'oh
please pm me.

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Posted: 24 October 2012 at 9:33am | IP Logged
Originally posted by swetsurati

Awsomeee...and scary update navi dear...hume toh title dekhate hi dar lagane laga tha...lolzzz...manyata is too much kya kya naam suggest kiye...chamiya and chammakchallo...
Hawww...woh kamina ok ntha jo manveer ko dekh rha tha?hum toh fir bhi padh rahe the...kamina kutta kahin kaa my poor uday...kahin ye sab majnu ka karnama toh nahi hai?ush majnu ki toh me...update soon and thanx for PM.
 
Thanx Sweta 
                       U are right the title came out very scary - especially with the blood drippingOuch.  Awww - give Manyata a break ; this was the first time she had to name a horseLOL .
Kamina is  YOU KNOW WHOAngry  .  He was watching them  - BUT, WHY WERE U READINGShocked???    Didn't u say u are a shareef child Embarrassed .    Don't worry about Uday or Akash - I'll take care of them in my wayWinkEvil Smile.
Next update - this weekend.
Welcome for the PMSmile
 
THANX 4 COMMENTING   Hug
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Posted: 24 October 2012 at 9:47am | IP Logged
Originally posted by adorable_rana

comment reached on pg 75Wink
 
  ... FinallyLOL
 
 
Originally posted by adorable_rana

resWink

So here I come...lollzzTongue

Terrific and fantastic updateClapClap

full on romantic and action packed with a touching end scene...mind blowind naviStar

hmmm so start was very romantic and too cute..WinkBlushing

Manyata's antics I found very funny yaar...donno why...lolzzzWinkLOLLOL

and the action part...you wrote it beautifully...I mean the bang thing...I literally like visualize the scene with that sound...Thumbs Up

but UV is indeed a brave and strong man...can bear any pain when it comes to save his lady loveEmbarrassed

Navi you ended on such a scene that I literally can't stop thinking about whats gonna happen now...Ouch

Whats gonna happen now????Ermm ...lolzzz

gotta have update soon...I am waiting impatientlyDay Dreaming

and thanx for the pm deary...love yaHugHug

 
 
Thanx Rubaa  - for so many complimentsBig smile.   I tried to put in everything :  a little bit of romance , a bit of nok-jhok,  a drop of comedy  and finally some violence - Really glad all enjoyed it.  
Uday will do anything to protect  Manyata Embarrassed   - here too, he risked his life in trying to get her to safety   - He is a TRUE HERO!!!Day Dreaming.
Well, as for what's gonna happen next - u need to stay  tuned Wink.  I think the next update will be weekend - BUT I CAN'T PROMISE ANYTHING!!!
Welcome for the PMSmile.
 
Love U 2 Dear   Hug     ...    THANX 4 COMMENTING   Hug
 

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