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MANVEER FF : The journey of a wife... (Book 1) (Page 73)

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Posted: 18 October 2012 at 12:33pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by MsLuscious

God it was nice update but how u know so much about horses and their delivery stuff? this update was quite hot but i guess next would be way to hot do give warning;)
 
 
Thank u Sarah   Hug.
I read a lot about  the most weirdest  things u can think of LOL , 1 of which is HORSES - that's how I knew of all the details. 
 
Next part is not gonna be that HOT  ,but it will have a lot of action.
SHOULD I GIVE A WARNING FOR VIOLENCEOuch.
 
THANX 4 COMMENTINGStar.
 
 


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Originally posted by pia.raha

uday and manyata moments were sooo rmnticcc and passionatee!!!!!!!!! manyata in western wearr,woww!!!!!!!! horses ke baarein mein hume bhi info ho gayi!!!!!!! manveer scenes always sparks!!!!!!!! waitmg too read mree,cntinueee sooN!!!!!!!!
 
Manveer are a very romantic coupleBlushing, but in my ss ; they are naughty as wellWink.
Wouldn't it have been nice if we could actually see Manyata in western wearEmbarrassed???
Glad u learnt about horses from me  ...  
STICK AROUND  ...  & I will teach u other things too LOLWink.
 
THANX FOR COMMENTING PIA  Hug.


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so navi here is my second comment 
the whle thing was very nicely written 
my favorite part was the one written in purpleEmbarrassed
i loved the name EQUINA i think it is so nice 
uday and manyata room scenes were awesome 
and uday explaining things to manyata was so awww
and i learnt a lot about horses too
loved how u showed manyata is western dressing and how u showed a a small kind of flashback on how manyata acted before and how she regrets it
the last line was freaking awesome manyata wants a baby of her own wow that means hot hot hot manveer romance navi style wow 
i am eagerly waiting for it 
i loved the whole thing
SUB- CHAPTER : 2.6 : ANOTHER LIFE???
 
 
It was 2 hours since Manyata had seen Akash.  She didn't leave Uday's side since then.  The guards were given a tongue-lashing for "allowing" an intruder onto the premises. 
 
Uday- is it possible that Akash did not die when he fell off the cliff? , Manyata asked after much deliberation.  Uday was confused as to what could've prompted Manyata to ask such a question. Why Princess - why are u asking me that NOW?  Please Uday - just answer me.  When Akash fell, Rajjat & the guys surveyed the whole area for almost a week.  They didn't find anything  ...  NO INJURED AKASH / NO DEAD BODY  ...NO BODY - that means ; he could still be alive  ...  he could be, but I doubt it.  Why?  Akash fell from a height of 500 feet, if he did survive ...  something huge would be wrong with him.  Like?  Like ,he'd probably be crippled.  Manyata thought for a moment.  Uday was right!  If Akash survived the fall - he wouldn't be 100% healthwise  ...  SO - the person that was on the balcony  ...   COULDN'T HAVE BEEN HIM. Princess - NOW TELL ME ; why did u bring up this Akash topic?  Mmm  ...  NO REASON; I was just wondering.
 
The phone rang and Uday attended the call.  His face lit up with the news he just received.  He immediately informed Manyata:  Princess - ask the servants to pack our bags.  Why?  We are going to Jaigarh for a few days.  Woh kyun?  Honeymoon ke liye!  Manyata stared at him with mixed expression.  Offho Princess!  ...  itna mat socho.  Hum mazzak kar rahe the.  Actually  ...  that call I just received, it was Dr Mehra.  He says that in 3 days time , it will be 300 days  ... & Equina will be ready to give birth.  I HAVE TO BE THERE FOR THAT!  And after what happened with that intruder looking in on u  ...   there's no way I'm leaving u here alone.  U are coming with me!
 
Manyata found herself rooted to the spot, unable to move.  Only 1 line echoed in her head: " Equina will be ready to give birth -  I HAVE TO BE THERE FOR THAT!"   With a broken voice, she asked: Who's Equina  and why do u have to be there when she gives birth?  Uday realised Manyata's fear, but; instead of correcting her - he decided to add fuel to the fire.
 
I'm sorry Princess- it happened many months ago.   I wasn't exactly in the correct frame of mind and SHE WAS AVAILABLE.  One thing led to another, and things went too far.  Manyata was burning with anger.  She raised her hand to slap Uday- he held her wrist just in time.  Let go of me Uday.  You disgusting pig...U jerk.   I hate you   ...   I hate you!  Princess- I said I'm sorry...SORRY, is not gonna make this go away.  You are a Yuvraaj, Uday  -  didn't u think of the consequences  & anyway - how could anyone go for a person named " EQUINA "  ???  
 
Manyata's eyes and nose were turning red with fury.  Hot tears were falling from her eyes.  She couldn't be in the same room with Uday.  She turned to leave but Uday grabbed her hand and pulled her towards him forcefully.  She banged onto his chest.  Leave me , Uday; she protested as she tried to free herself from him.  He forced her to look at him.  She began losing herself in his dreamy brown eyes.  She pushed him hard ,as she didn't want to become weak in front of him.  He held onto her wrists and pinned them onto the wall.  Uday smirked at her while she stared at him with disgust.  He came closer to her and began planting wet kisses on her neck.  Manyata's resistance lessened,  her heart wanted her to give in to him -  her brain wasn't allowing her to forget the confession he just made.  Before Manyata could decide: which path to follow  ...   her body had already decided! 
 
Manyata had no idea when exactly Uday let go of her hands because, now his hands were tightly squeezing her waist and her hands were around his neck...   and both were battling tongues in a passionate kiss.  Both separated from their lip-lock at the same time, as air was desperately required.  Manyata's chest heaved as she tried to catch her breath.  Uday's smiling at her was becoming annoying.  She pushed him with all her might.  This kiss  ...  doesn't mean;  I'VE FORGIVEN YOU!  
 
Manyata had walked almost out of the room, when Uday spoke:  Princess!   She stopped in her tracks but didn't turn to look at him.  He continued:  Equina is a mare  ...  Princess - she is a horse  ...  MY HORSE!  Uday noticed how Manyata's very tense body; now relaxed.  He walked to her and back-hugged her loosely.  Then all what u told me?  It was a lie - I was just having some fun with u!  I see that all my tears;  had no effect on u.  It did Princess - it broke my heart, ...  and still u persisted?  You see Princess, u were looking too cute there, so I didn't want to stop.  BESIDES; I knew you'll forgive me and then  ...   THEN? ( he moved closer to her ear and whispered ) ...   then we'll have a VERY HOT "MAKE-UP"  SESSION. 
 
She tried to break away from the hug but Uday had tightened his grip, so she turned around to face him.  Uday - U really think that after what u did to me tonight  ...  u are gonna get "lucky" . Yes Princess - by now ...  DON'T U KNOW  ...  Yuvraaj UdayVeer Singh, always gets HIS WAY!!!  NOT TONIGHT!  Uday raised his eye-brows at her.  Go amuse yourself with something else, because u are not  "playing"  with me tonight.  Awww Princess - BUT U ARE MY FAVOURITE TOY.  He moved his hands down her back and rested it on her bottom.  You are so soft and  ( he pinched her buttocks ) ... squeezable.   
 
Manyata's eyes shot wide open; so did her mouth.  Before she could say anything _ uday wrapped his lips over hers and began kissing her.  Manyata was whisked away in his strong arms and carried to bed where he made her his all over again.
 
Manyata woke up early the next morning and readied herself for the trip.  After looking in the mirror, satisfied that she looked like the next queen of Jaigarh - she woke up Uday.  His eyes nearly pop out of their sockets when he saw Manyata decked up in an exquisite sari and extravagant embellishments.  Going somewhere Princess?  Arre, tum hi ne toh kaha tha ke hum Jaigarh ja rahe hain.  Hmmm - but this is an informal visit  & we are going to Jaigarh Ranch  NOT Palace, so sweetheart; u are a bit over-dressed.  Then what should I wear?  He kissed her on her fore-head:  You leave that to me!
 
He spoke on the phone for a while, showered , changed and accompanied M anyata in having breakfast.  Uday's bag was loaded into the car but Manyata's wasn't.  Uday- why are you leaving my bag behind?  Have u changed your mind about taking me?  No Princess - I haven't changed my mind  ... but I'm sure your bag contains saries & salwars - RIGHT?  Hmmm.  Manyata, where we are going - u cannot wear that.  You have to wear  ...  Uday stopped talking when a servant came in.  He apologised for interrupting and handed Uday a number of  gift bags.  Uday handed 1 to Manyata and asked her to change into that.  He then emptied out Manyata's previously packed luggage & repacked the new clothes.
 
Manyata came out of the bathroom wearing a pair of blue jeans & a white coloured satin blouse. Wow Princess - looking HOT!  Yeah; and feeling uncomfortable, she moaned.  Uday & Manyata were driven to an open field nearby.  There, waiting for them; was a small jet aircraft.  Manyata's face lit up with joy.  Uday- are we going in this aeroplane?  Princess - this is not an aeroplane, it is an ECLIPSE 500.  Huh? Yes Princess - that's what it's called.  It is a very light aircraft.  It is normally used for carrying freight but today it'll be transporting us to our destination.  Manyata & Uday took their seats in the middle, 2 bodyguards sat behind them, the pilot & co-pilot sat at the front. 
 
I didn't know  Jaigarh had an airport.  It doesn't , but we do have an airstrip where we will land , then a car will fetch us & take us to the ranch.  Uday - u are doing all this just so that nobody there will see us coming!  No Princess - I'm doing all this because it will take lesser time for us to get to Jaigarh.  
 
Uday - the last time we went to Jaigarh, just after we got married - I was very rude to your people,  na!  All the people waited outside in the blazing heat waiting to see their Yuvraaj's wife, & I just snubbed them.  I'm sorry Uday - I  wish I could go & undo all that I did that day.  Don't worry about it Princess.  Dad handled it quite well , REMEMBER?  Hmmm.  Uncleji said that the new bahu was unable to get accustomed to the climate in Jaigarh.  And she has taken ill & will not address the crowd.  Uncleji is very smart!  Hmmm  ...  akhir baap kiska hain.  Manyata just shook her head & rolled her eyes at his statement. 
 
After 11/2 hours, the jet landed at the air-strip & a car escorted them to the ranch.  Uday & Manyata immediately checked up on Equina.  The veterinary doctor was also present.  Dr Mehra informed them that it was not yet time.  
 
Uday went to another stable to see his horse SULTAAN.  Manyata soon joined them.  Uday stroked the horses head & neck and Manyata could've sworn that the horse  smiled at Uday. Come Princess, meet my "jungli ghoda" , SULTAAN.  Manyata was terrified to come near. Sultaan- this is my "jungli-billie" ( for Manyata ).  The horse raised his hoof & offered it to Manyata.  Princess-  shake  "hands"  with him.  He's only trying to be friendly.  Manyata reluctantly put her hand forward & held the horse's hoof.   
 
Manyata spent the next few days learning everything about her husband's hobby.  Uday educated Manyata about what horses ate, how & where they slept, how to train a horse, how to tell the difference between a male & a female...   and how to induce breeding.  
 
Her days were spent with Uday , her nights were alone.  Uday chose to stay behind at the stables; making sure everything was perfect for when Equina finally did go into labour. 
 
It was the 4th night already, Manyata was changing - getting ready for bed.  She removed her blouse, when somebody encircled their arms around her waist from behind.  She shook with fright but relaxed when she saw who it was.  Uday - u scared me!  Princess - obviously it had to be me.  Nobody else would dare come near u.  Kyunki main itni khatarnaak jo hoon.  Haan nahi toh!  Manyata shrugged to get out of Uday's grip but couldn't.  Oi  ...  what do u mean?  Oh come on Princess; on our 1st meeting - u scratched me,  on our 3rd meeting - u bit me.  Manyata smiled remembering those moments.  
 
Uday bit hard on her shoulder and she flinched in pain.  He licked the spot to give her relief.  Manyata's breathing became heavy as Uday pulled her closer to him.  Her back was stuck to his chest & she could feel his heart-beats.  Uday pinched her waist & Manyata's head dropped to 1 side.  He nibbled, on her now very exposed neck.  Manyata moaned in pleasure as Uday bit, sucked and kissed on her neck.  He unhooked her bra & she removed it & threw it over the blouse she had removed earlier.  Uday's 1 hand was over her breast & lightly "massaging"  it whilst the other hand was making its way inside her jeans.  His hand was inside her pants and fingers were now slipping beneath the band on her underwear  ...  then the phone rang.  Equina had gone into labour.  
 
Princess - Equina is foaling.  We need to go now.  Uday- u carry on.  I'll come in a few minutes. After all those loving touches from Uday, Manyata needed a shower ... BADLY!!!  
 
Manyata joined Uday just in time to see the front hooves of the foal appearing.  Dr Mehra, Uday, Manyata & 1 horse-handler were present but sat in the shadows and "mother" handled the delivery on her own.  After the fore-hooves were out,  the nose & then the head came out.  Half the foal was out, but the other 1/2 seemed to be stuck.  Manyata panicked and told the Doctor & Uday to help the horse.  Princess - don't worry, it's natural.  The mother & child are bonding here; it'll take about 15 minutes and then she'll push out the other 1/2.  Manyata was not convinced so Dr Mehra confirmed:  Yes Mrs Singh; your husband is absolutely right.  Horses can manage delivery on their own, we are just here as "back-up"  ,in case a problem arises.  Rightly enough, after 15 minutes the foal was pushed out. 
 
Oh Uday - he's beautiful!  Actually Princess - it's not a colt.  It's a filly - SO, it's a SHE!  Manyata stuck out her tongue to "Mr-Know-It-All" .  Dr Mehra, shouldn't u cut the umbilical cord? Yuvraajsa' - do u want to answer that?  Uday nodded, then explained to Manyata:  Equina will cut the cord herself.  If we do it ,1 of them could bleed to death.  Manyata nodded. 
 
She smiled when she noticed the foal suckling on the mother.  She began wondering about having a family of her own.  
 
An hour passed since the birth.  Everybody was happy with the proceedings.  The Doctor and the handler left.  Uday & Manyata remained behind.  Manyata pulled Uday into an empty stable. Princess - what are u doing?   Why are we going in there?   Princess - answer me   ...  Manyata, say something!   Uday - let's MAKE A BABY!!! 
 

now remember that i said this comment will be super long so this was my idea 
see the comment t is longer than the chapter itself LOL
i hope u liked my idea 
if no then i better run
but at last i would say 
hats off navi
i love your writing
and i am your fan


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Originally posted by vampire12345678

waiting for your reply navi

May I...super crazy...WinkLOL

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Originally posted by vampire12345678

so navi here is my second comment 
the whle thing was very nicely written 
my favorite part was the one written in purpleEmbarrassed
i loved the name EQUINA i think it is so nice 
uday and manyata room scenes were awesome 
and uday explaining things to manyata was so awww
and i learnt a lot about horses too
loved how u showed manyata is western dressing and how u showed a a small kind of flashback on how manyata acted before and how she regrets it
the last line was freaking awesome manyata wants a baby of her own wow that means hot hot hot manveer romance navi style wow 
i am eagerly waiting for it 
i loved the whole thing
 
SUB- CHAPTER : 2.6 : ANOTHER LIFE???
 
 
 
I'm sorry Princess- it happened many months ago.   I wasn't exactly in the correct frame of mind and SHE WAS AVAILABLE.  One thing led to another, and things went too far.  Manyata was burning with anger.  She raised her hand to slap Uday- he held her wrist just in time.  Let go of me Uday.  You disgusting pig...U jerk.   I hate you   ...   I hate you!  Princess- I said I'm sorry...SORRY, is not gonna make this go away.  You are a Yuvraaj, Uday  -  didn't u think of the consequences  & anyway - how could anyone go for a person named " EQUINA "  ???  
 
Manyata's eyes and nose were turning red with fury.  Hot tears were falling from her eyes.  She couldn't be in the same room with Uday.  She turned to leave but Uday grabbed her hand and pulled her towards him forcefully.  She banged onto his chest.  Leave me , Uday; she protested as she tried to free herself from him.  He forced her to look at him.  She began losing herself in his dreamy brown eyes.  She pushed him hard ,as she didn't want to become weak in front of him.  He held onto her wrists and pinned them onto the wall.  Uday smirked at her while she stared at him with disgust.  He came closer to her and began planting wet kisses on her neck.  Manyata's resistance lessened,  her heart wanted her to give in to him -  her brain wasn't allowing her to forget the confession he just made.  Before Manyata could decide: which path to follow  ...   her body had already decided! 
 
Manyata had no idea when exactly Uday let go of her hands because, now his hands were tightly squeezing her waist and her hands were around his neck...   and both were battling tongues in a passionate kiss.  Both separated from their lip-lock at the same time, as air was desperately required.  Manyata's chest heaved as she tried to catch her breath.  Uday's smiling at her was becoming annoying.  She pushed him with all her might.  This kiss  ...  doesn't mean;  I'VE FORGIVEN YOU!  
 
Manyata had walked almost out of the room, when Uday spoke:  Princess!   She stopped in her tracks but didn't turn to look at him.  He continued:  Equina is a mare  ...  Princess - she is a horse  ...  MY HORSE!  Uday noticed how Manyata's very tense body; now relaxed.  He walked to her and back-hugged her loosely.  Then all what u told me?  It was a lie - I was just having some fun with u!  I see that all my tears;  had no effect on u.  It did Princess - it broke my heart, ...  and still u persisted?  You see Princess, u were looking too cute there, so I didn't want to stop.  BESIDES; I knew you'll forgive me and then  ...   THEN? ( he moved closer to her ear and whispered ) ...   then we'll have a VERY HOT "MAKE-UP"  SESSION. 
 
She tried to break away from the hug but Uday had tightened his grip, so she turned around to face him.  Uday - U really think that after what u did to me tonight  ...  u are gonna get "lucky" . Yes Princess - by now ...  DON'T U KNOW  ...  Yuvraaj UdayVeer Singh, always gets HIS WAY!!!  NOT TONIGHT!  Uday raised his eye-brows at her.  Go amuse yourself with something else, because u are not  "playing"  with me tonight.  Awww Princess - BUT U ARE MY FAVOURITE TOY.  He moved his hands down her back and rested it on her bottom.  You are so soft and  ( he pinched her buttocks ) ... squeezable.   
 
Manyata's eyes shot wide open; so did her mouth.  Before she could say anything _ uday wrapped his lips over hers and began kissing her.  Manyata was whisked away in his strong arms and carried to bed where he made her his all over again.
 
Manyata came out of the bathroom wearing a pair of blue jeans & a white coloured satin blouse. Wow Princess - looking HOT!  Yeah; and feeling uncomfortable, she moaned.  Uday & Manyata were driven to an open field nearby.  There, waiting for them; was a small jet aircraft.  Manyata's face lit up with joy.  Uday- are we going in this aeroplane?  Princess - this is not an aeroplane, it is an ECLIPSE 500.  Huh? Yes Princess - that's what it's called.  It is a very light aircraft.  It is normally used for carrying freight but today it'll be transporting us to our destination.  Manyata & Uday took their seats in the middle, 2 bodyguards sat behind them, the pilot & co-pilot sat at the front. 
 
Uday - the last time we went to Jaigarh, just after we got married - I was very rude to your people,  na!  All the people waited outside in the blazing heat waiting to see their Yuvraaj's wife, & I just snubbed them.  I'm sorry Uday - I  wish I could go & undo all that I did that day.  Don't worry about it Princess.  Dad handled it quite well , REMEMBER?  Hmmm.  Uncleji said that the new bahu was unable to get accustomed to the climate in Jaigarh.  And she has taken ill & will not address the crowd.  Uncleji is very smart!  Hmmm  ...  akhir baap kiska hain.  Manyata just shook her head & rolled her eyes at his statement. 
  
 
It was the 4th night already, Manyata was changing - getting ready for bed.  She removed her blouse, when somebody encircled their arms around her waist from behind.  She shook with fright but relaxed when she saw who it was.  Uday - u scared me!  Princess - obviously it had to be me.  Nobody else would dare come near u.  Kyunki main itni khatarnaak jo hoon.  Haan nahi toh!  Manyata shrugged to get out of Uday's grip but couldn't.  Oi  ...  what do u mean?  Oh come on Princess; on our 1st meeting - u scratched me,  on our 3rd meeting - u bit me.  Manyata smiled remembering those moments.  
 
Uday bit hard on her shoulder and she flinched in pain.  He licked the spot to give her relief.  Manyata's breathing became heavy as Uday pulled her closer to him.  Her back was stuck to his chest & she could feel his heart-beats.  Uday pinched her waist & Manyata's head dropped to 1 side.  He nibbled, on her now very exposed neck.  Manyata moaned in pleasure as Uday bit, sucked and kissed on her neck.  He unhooked her bra & she removed it & threw it over the blouse she had removed earlier.  Uday's 1 hand was over her breast & lightly "massaging"  it whilst the other hand was making its way inside her jeans.  His hand was inside her pants and fingers were now slipping beneath the band on her underwear  ...  then the phone rang.  Equina had gone into labour.  
 
Princess - Equina is foaling.  We need to go now.  Uday- u carry on.  I'll come in a few minutes. After all those loving touches from Uday, Manyata needed a shower ... BADLY!!!  
 
 
 
An hour passed since the birth.  Everybody was happy with the proceedings.  The Doctor and the handler left.  Uday & Manyata remained behind.  Manyata pulled Uday into an empty stable. Princess - what are u doing?   Why are we going in there?   Princess - answer me   ...  Manyata, say something!   Uday - let's MAKE A BABY!!! 
 
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now remember that i said this comment will be super long so this was my idea 
see the comment t is longer than the chapter itself LOL
i hope u liked my idea 
if no then i better run
but at last i would say 
hats off navi
i love your writing
and i am your fan


 
I appreciate the 2nd comment Saira  ... but it was not necessary - I understand that u have studies/exams   - ALL YOUR SPARE TIME SHOULD BE FOCUSED THERE & NOT HERE!!!
 
I knew your favourite part will be the purple 1Blushing.
EQUINA's name   was the most difficult part of this update.  It needed to sound like a horses name as well as a girl's name   ...  because Manyata had to think that Uday was talking about a girl!LOLWink.   I think the Manveer scenes were quite cuteEmbarrassed - luckily I didn't make a mess of thatOuch.  I  gave every1 a lesson on horses- NOW EVERY1 IS WELL INFORMEDROFL.  Manyata would look gorgeous in western wear  ...  IF ONLY THEY SHOWED IT TO USCry!!!    Manyata was a horrible person when she 1st got married to UdayAngry  ..   then I reformed herApprove.   I agree with u : last line was be bestCool.   NAVI - style romance is not that HOT my Dear, BUT IT IS NAUGHTYEvil Smile.   I know u loved it lots  ...   AS U QUOTED THE ENTIRE THING!!!Confused.
 
Giving this type of comment   ... CAN COME FROM ONLY 1 PERSONWinkSmile.
It was an ORIGINAL idea -  but don't do it again  ...  I'm getting blinded by my own work WackoLOL.
 
THANX FOR THE EXTRA LONG COMMENT    Hug   Hug   Hug
I know u are a fan of my writingBig smile,  BUT I'M A BIGGER FAN OF YOURSStar
 

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Originally posted by vampire12345678

waiting for your reply navi

May I...super crazy...WinkLOL

 
 
AGREED!!!ROFLROFLROFL
  ...   but I still Heart u!

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Originally posted by adorable_rana

resWinkLOL        ...Angry

Hug         ...   Star

so here comes me...LOL    ...  It's about time!!!

Superb and fantastic update...worth waitingClap  ...   THANK U!!!

seems like Akash fiasco is gonna be started soonOuch   ...  YEP, sooner than u thinkAngry.

and then the interesting part...like we all got confuse so did Manyata...someone is going to have UV's babyLOL   ...   That was kinda FUNNY   -  poor ManyataConfused.

thats was just so hillarious and cute...jealous and hurt M and UV enjoying itWinkLOL... he's a DEVIL.

and the whole ranch scene...seriously you know alot about horses...how come??Ermm   

Because I read a lot Geek ...   SOMETIMES  TOO  MUCH!!!

that was your best part in this update you wrote it brilliantly...Star   ...  Thanx Rubaa  Hug

and then comes the final part...lets make babyBlushing  ...   Was that your favourite part???Embarrassed

no comments lolzz...LOL     ...   I KNEW IT   ROFL

now how should I say waiting for the next update...u know it very wellWinkLOL     ...   Sweety, u have to read the next part .  SOMETHING HUGE IS GONNA HAPPEN!!!Shocked

do tell me hum kaha say parhana shuru karainEmbarrassedLOL   ... U can read the whole thing - THIS IS NOT THE CHAPTER U ARE EXPECTING!!!!

Thanx for the pm and sorry for late commentHug    Welcome    &    NO PROBLEM!

love yaHug      ...  Heart you too!!!

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