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MANVEER FF : The journey of a wife... (Book 1) (Page 71)

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Posted: 17 October 2012 at 12:56pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by swetsurati

Navi dear plzzz...fast...i m waiting...
 
Sorry Sweta ... I took a supper break, that's what took so long!
 
 
Originally posted by swetsurati

Wowww...that was awsomeee...lolzzz...i knew it ye koi uday ka pet hoga...hey ram majnu is back kamina pichha kyu nahi chhodta...beautifully written...OMG...love that last scene let make baby ...update soon and thanx for PM.
 
Thanx Sweta  Hug.
U knew it was a pet Clap  ...  I'M IMPRESSED!
Hmmm ...   Majnu is backDead.   Every love-story has to have a villainAngry.
I'm not surprised that u loved the last sceneEmbarrassed.
Welcome for the PM.

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Posted: 17 October 2012 at 1:18pm | IP Logged
RESERVEEmbarrassed
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hey dear hi yaar...Hug
must say tht was the update worth waiting for...Clap
awesum man,,,just too good... u did a great jobThumbs Up
From the beginning till the end,,,it was rock on...
woah,,,,u really have so much knowledge about the horses  yaarwell thts really goodBig smile...

the last sentensce where manyta said " uday, lets make a baby"' awww, tht was soEmbarrassed and Blushing
but i really dint like u left manveer romance in b/w,,,,i so wanted to read more Unhappy
but never mind,,,,next update mei plz...us unfulfilled moment ko complete kar dena ...okLOL
reat of all...was just superbBig smile
thnxxx fr the pm,,,,nd continue soon



Edited by coolsaloni.nira - 18 October 2012 at 10:29am

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Posted: 18 October 2012 at 3:34am | IP Logged
its awesome!! kia update hai!
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Princess - what are u doing?   Why are we going in there?   Princess - answer me   ...  Manyata, say something!  
Uday - let's MAKE A BABY!!!
ahahaha...these lines made me jump from my chair...ROFL
and it was sooo hot!
Hot As Hell

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Posted: 18 October 2012 at 6:13am | IP Logged
uday and manyata moments were sooo rmnticcc and passionatee!!!!!!!!! manyata in western wearr,woww!!!!!!!! horses ke baarein mein hume bhi info ho gayi!!!!!!! manveer scenes always sparks!!!!!!!! waitmg too read mree,cntinueee sooN!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 18 October 2012 at 6:51am | IP Logged
beautiful chapterSmile i thought it must be a horse..Smile
loved d endingBlushingLOLLOL
pls update soonBig smileBig smile

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Posted: 18 October 2012 at 8:59am | IP Logged
Originally posted by MAHI1198

AWWW UNBELIEVABLE
ALL THAT HORSE THING WAS AWESUM...
AND MANVEER IS ALWAYS AWESUM...
SO WONDERFUL UPDATE YAR...THNKS FOR PM...UPDATE NXT SOON...
 
 
Was it THAT good???
 
Thanx Mahi  ...  For such lovely comments  Hug
 
 
 
 
Originally posted by Sunshinegirll

beautiful chapterSmile i thought it must be a horse..Smile
loved d endingBlushingLOLLOL
pls update soonBig smileBig smile
 
Thanx Sow  Hug  ,   Yeah; u knew from the beginningClap
Not only u  ...   every1 loved the endEmbarrassed.
I'll update this weekendSmile.
 


Edited by ...navina... - 19 October 2012 at 7:07am

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Posted: 18 October 2012 at 9:06am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sweet_gargi

comment edited on Pg 69Smile
 
 
 
Originally posted by sweet_gargi

hey Navina...This was a great update...Loved the stable scenes and also you must have researched a lot about horses and their labour...really nice..loved itClapStar
 
Hi GargiStar.    You know whenever I have spare time   ,I spend it reading Geek.  Sometimes I read the weirdest  thingsConfused.   This thing about horses I read a while back  ...  SO HAPPENED; it came in handy nowLOL.
 
Thanx 4 commenting   Hug
 
 
 


Edited by ...navina... - 19 October 2012 at 9:54am
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Posted: 18 October 2012 at 9:06am | IP Logged

resWinkLOL

Hug

so here comes me...LOL

Superb and fantastic update...worth waitingClap

seems like Akash fiasco is gonna be started soonOuch

and then the interesting part...like we all got confuse so did Manyata...someone is going to have UV's babyLOL

thats was just so hillarious and cute...jealous and hurt M and UV enjoying itWinkLOL

and the whole ranch scene...seriously you know alot about horses...how come??Ermm

that was your best part in this update you wrote it brilliantly...Star

and then comes the final part...lets make babyBlushing

no comments lolzz...LOL

now how should I say waiting for the next update...u know it very wellWinkLOL

do tell me hum kaha say parhana shuru karainEmbarrassedLOL

Thanx for the pm and sorry for late commentHug

love yaHug



Edited by adorable_rana - 19 October 2012 at 8:16am

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