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MANVEER FF : The journey of a wife... (Book 1) (Page 47)

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Posted: 06 October 2012 at 2:53pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ...navina...

Originally posted by vampire12345678

Originally posted by ...navina...

Originally posted by vampire12345678

awesome
i loved it 
beautifully written 
form the dialogues to the jokes to the romance to the emotional 
i loved manveer and there scenes as usual
i loved the sheitan joke
loved the brother and sister bonding
i really liked how u described giriraj and his political moves and how uday stood for his sister
the whole thing was PERFECT 
really really navi you writing gets better each time u update 
u rock man
please please update soon
thanks so so much for the pm
love u
 
 
Thanx Saira...
...For giving me such a long and beautiful comment,
( considering what u are going through at the moment )
I do appreciate it.
 
Love u 2   Hug
 

ho navi dont worry i ama very cool person  ...Yep, that u are!
i was vey pissed a few minutes ago but had ice LOL  ...lucky u didn't have a carrot!!!ROFL
actually i decided to be cool with it because it was a mistake...EXACTLY!
but i will not spare sameer he is defiantly  gonna pay ...Give him 2 slaps from me!

ha ha no carrots for me for some timeLOL
i will give him 2 form you and 8 form me 
he just messed up my 1 hour 
and tomorrow we have a plan to go for movies i will take a few dead coacroaches with me then throw them on him
he is very scared of crocoaches 

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Posted: 06 October 2012 at 3:04pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by vampire12345678

Originally posted by ...navina...

Originally posted by vampire12345678

Originally posted by ...navina...

Originally posted by vampire12345678

awesome
i loved it 
beautifully written 
form the dialogues to the jokes to the romance to the emotional 
i loved manveer and there scenes as usual
i loved the sheitan joke
loved the brother and sister bonding
i really liked how u described giriraj and his political moves and how uday stood for his sister
the whole thing was PERFECT 
really really navi you writing gets better each time u update 
u rock man
please please update soon
thanks so so much for the pm
love u
 
 
Thanx Saira...
...For giving me such a long and beautiful comment,
( considering what u are going through at the moment )
I do appreciate it.
 
Love u 2   Hug
 

ho navi dont worry i ama very cool person  ...Yep, that u are!
i was vey pissed a few minutes ago but had ice LOL  ...lucky u didn't have a carrot!!!ROFL
actually i decided to be cool with it because it was a mistake...EXACTLY!
but i will not spare sameer he is defiantly  gonna pay ...Give him 2 slaps from me!

ha ha no carrots for me for some timeLOL
i will give him 2 form you and 8 form me 
he just messed up my 1 hour 
and tomorrow we have a plan to go for movies i will take a few dead coacroaches with me then throw them on him
he is very scared of crocoaches 
 
I am so SORRY about the carrot thing!
Good idea about the cockroaches,
BTW...I'm also terrified of cockroaches!!!
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Posted: 06 October 2012 at 3:09pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ...navina...

Originally posted by vampire12345678

Originally posted by ...navina...

Originally posted by vampire12345678

Originally posted by ...navina...

Originally posted by vampire12345678

awesome
i loved it 
beautifully written 
form the dialogues to the jokes to the romance to the emotional 
i loved manveer and there scenes as usual
i loved the sheitan joke
loved the brother and sister bonding
i really liked how u described giriraj and his political moves and how uday stood for his sister
the whole thing was PERFECT 
really really navi you writing gets better each time u update 
u rock man
please please update soon
thanks so so much for the pm
love u
 
 
Thanx Saira...
...For giving me such a long and beautiful comment,
( considering what u are going through at the moment )
I do appreciate it.
 
Love u 2   Hug
 

ho navi dont worry i ama very cool person  ...Yep, that u are!
i was vey pissed a few minutes ago but had ice LOL  ...lucky u didn't have a carrot!!!ROFL
actually i decided to be cool with it because it was a mistake...EXACTLY!
but i will not spare sameer he is defiantly  gonna pay ...Give him 2 slaps from me!

ha ha no carrots for me for some timeLOL
i will give him 2 form you and 8 form me 
he just messed up my 1 hour 
and tomorrow we have a plan to go for movies i will take a few dead coacroaches with me then throw them on him
he is very scared of crocoaches 
 
I am so SORRY about the carrot thing!
Good idea about the cockroaches,
BTW...I'm also terrified of cockroaches!!!

and i will tell my maid to get the super huge once that look like small rats 
i am scared of coachroaches 
will use gloves will holding themLOL

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Posted: 06 October 2012 at 3:12pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by vampire12345678

Originally posted by ...navina...

Originally posted by vampire12345678

Originally posted by ...navina...

Originally posted by vampire12345678

Originally posted by ...navina...

Originally posted by vampire12345678

awesome
i loved it 
beautifully written 
form the dialogues to the jokes to the romance to the emotional 
i loved manveer and there scenes as usual
i loved the sheitan joke
loved the brother and sister bonding
i really liked how u described giriraj and his political moves and how uday stood for his sister
the whole thing was PERFECT 
really really navi you writing gets better each time u update 
u rock man
please please update soon
thanks so so much for the pm
love u
 
 
Thanx Saira...
...For giving me such a long and beautiful comment,
( considering what u are going through at the moment )
I do appreciate it.
 
Love u 2   Hug
 

ho navi dont worry i ama very cool person  ...Yep, that u are!
i was vey pissed a few minutes ago but had ice LOL  ...lucky u didn't have a carrot!!!ROFL
actually i decided to be cool with it because it was a mistake...EXACTLY!
but i will not spare sameer he is defiantly  gonna pay ...Give him 2 slaps from me!

ha ha no carrots for me for some timeLOL
i will give him 2 form you and 8 form me 
he just messed up my 1 hour 
and tomorrow we have a plan to go for movies i will take a few dead coacroaches with me then throw them on him
he is very scared of crocoaches 
 
I am so SORRY about the carrot thing!
Good idea about the cockroaches,
BTW...I'm also terrified of cockroaches!!!

and i will tell my maid to get the super huge once that look like small rats 
i am scared of coachroaches 
will use gloves will holding themLOL
 
Saira...don't put such comments on the forum.
What will people think of your living conditionsCry
 
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Posted: 06 October 2012 at 3:17pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ...navina...

Originally posted by vampire12345678

Originally posted by ...navina...

Originally posted by vampire12345678

Originally posted by ...navina...

Originally posted by vampire12345678

Originally posted by ...navina...

Originally posted by vampire12345678

awesome
i loved it 
beautifully written 
form the dialogues to the jokes to the romance to the emotional 
i loved manveer and there scenes as usual
i loved the sheitan joke
loved the brother and sister bonding
i really liked how u described giriraj and his political moves and how uday stood for his sister
the whole thing was PERFECT 
really really navi you writing gets better each time u update 
u rock man
please please update soon
thanks so so much for the pm
love u
 
 
Thanx Saira...
...For giving me such a long and beautiful comment,
( considering what u are going through at the moment )
I do appreciate it.
 
Love u 2   Hug
 

ho navi dont worry i ama very cool person  ...Yep, that u are!
i was vey pissed a few minutes ago but had ice LOL  ...lucky u didn't have a carrot!!!ROFL
actually i decided to be cool with it because it was a mistake...EXACTLY!
but i will not spare sameer he is defiantly  gonna pay ...Give him 2 slaps from me!

ha ha no carrots for me for some timeLOL
i will give him 2 form you and 8 form me 
he just messed up my 1 hour 
and tomorrow we have a plan to go for movies i will take a few dead coacroaches with me then throw them on him
he is very scared of crocoaches 
 
I am so SORRY about the carrot thing!
Good idea about the cockroaches,
BTW...I'm also terrified of cockroaches!!!

and i will tell my maid to get the super huge once that look like small rats 
i am scared of coachroaches 
will use gloves will holding themLOL
 
Saira...don't put such comments on the forum.
What will people think of your living conditionsCry
 

ha ha navi
i live in a big villa opposite the sea 
my living conditions are really nice 
but if u come to tanzania u will see coachroahes are all around 
and i said my maid will bring them she lives in one of the slums 
at my place u will only find cats and dogs playing around



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Posted: 06 October 2012 at 3:29pm | IP Logged

Hey navi...superb and awesome updateThumbs Up

I loved the shaitan scene...it was too funny and cute naLOL

and uday is like getting so naughty yaar in your ff...BlushingLOL that bachain sceneLOL

and akash return...now whatShocked???? on no worry UV AND M are already togetherWinkLOL

thanx for the pm and do update tomorrow huh...and a request do give me anticipatory warning when you will update that updateWinkStern Smile

muuahhhHugHug



Edited by adorable_rana - 06 October 2012 at 3:45pm

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Posted: 06 October 2012 at 3:40pm | IP Logged
great update navina i loved it.
i love the scene bwt manyata uday n giriraj n shaitaan ka bache one dialogue was hilarious. Oh God that akash chipko will be back again i hate him so much:/

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Posted: 06 October 2012 at 3:54pm | IP Logged
Navina... Loved it dear. Woohoo!! Double bonanza!! Two updates in one go! Fab updates.

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