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MANVEER FF : The journey of a wife... (Book 1) (Page 41)

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Posted: 25 September 2012 at 11:15am | IP Logged
Originally posted by lilybabes

woah finally pura update padne ka mauka 
the ahem ahem was EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed...

J 's condition is pitiable but considering de 
things she did and cud hav done 2 M i 
personally dont pity her tat much 

gr8 update 
cont soon and thanks 4 de PM
 
Yep...I finally updated my update LOL
Haan...ahem-ahem...kuch zyada ho gaya na?
 
I don't pity her either...She deserved it!!!
 
Thanx.
I'll continue when I work out what to put in next Confused
Welcome!
 
THANK YOU, ANU...FOR ALWAYS COMMENTING!!!
 

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Posted: 26 September 2012 at 3:16am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ...navina...

[/QUOTE]
 
 
Glad u think so(about the idea).
Out of Control...WE LIKEWink
Jai will be there for a while...I NEEDED A BREAK FROM HER LOL
 
 
ABOUT YOUR QUERY:
Okay...Let me try to explain: 
 
Chapter 2.2 ended with this:
 
Manyata cried and Uday consoled her. I'm sorry Uday. The party was a disaster... No Princess- don't apologise! It was MOST ENTERTAINING. I enjoyed it: 2 gorgeous girls fighting over me! WHAT MORE CAN I ASK FOR? ,he joked playfully. Manyata laughed through her tears. You gonna pay for saying that Mr Singh! Just tell me when and where, he winked.
 
...Manyata saying that Mr Singh will pay...was just a joke! 
 
 
Paragraph 3 in chapter 2.3:
 
...Uday asks what he'll  pay...there, he was just teasing Manyata, not really expecting her to answer...but, she did (although she was joking)...of course, her joke back-fired on her and he DELIVERED on it in the bathroom. Embarrassed
Manyata whispered a single word to him...the word was :  CUNNILINGUS.
...If u didn't know what it means...I'M SURE U KNOW NOW!!!
 
...I did have that word in the update, but I decided to edit it...I didn't want to give everyone a new word to add to their vocabulary...
 
HOPE THAT ANSWERED YOUR QUESTION!!!
 

oh i get the point
CUNNILINGUS. i knew what that meant but u did not use it in the actual update so i wondered what the word would be i thought ti was a manyata giving uday oral pleasure or something
thanks for solving my doubt
[/QUOTE]
 
Good!
I didn't want to put in that word...in case somebody didn't know what it meant...and if they asked me to explain...I  WOULD JUST DIE!!!...but now if anybody asks...I'll refer them here  LOLLOLLOL
 
Manyata giving Uday oral pleasure...GOOD IDEA...CAN I USE IT???
 
[/QUOTE]

of course u can navi 
i would love to read that
in the next chapter u can write 
manveer honeymoon
2 weeks only on bedEmbarrassed

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Posted: 26 September 2012 at 9:38am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mahi0809

OMG... BlushingBlushingBlushing... This was my reaction in all Manyata and Uday parts, I'm such a nanhi bachi, I tell you! LOL... and Jai she has really lost it, cutting off her own eyebrows and cutting off her skin and hair... poor girl.. though she deserves to be punished but can't help feeling a bit sad for her seeing her in this condition!

Jai is too stubborn to see the reality, her one sided love/ obsession is just too much! Fab update Thumbs Up
 
 
 
ROFLROFLROFL...and that was my reaction to U BEING A NANHI BACHI !!!
 
Actually Mahi...I  thought of doing something different: In everybody's ff's...Jai gets off too easily...even in the show, she was let off too lightly...I decided to punish her, how I saw fit...BUT , if you're feeling sad for her...then I could bring her back to turn Manveer's life upside-down...YOUR CHOICE !!!
 
THANX 4 ALWAYS COMMENTING , MAHI.
 
 
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Posted: 26 September 2012 at 9:47am | IP Logged
Originally posted by vampire12345678

Originally posted by ...navina...

 
 
Glad u think so(about the idea).
Out of Control...WE LIKEWink
Jai will be there for a while...I NEEDED A BREAK FROM HER LOL
 
 
ABOUT YOUR QUERY:
Okay...Let me try to explain: 
 
Chapter 2.2 ended with this:
 
Manyata cried and Uday consoled her. I'm sorry Uday. The party was a disaster... No Princess- don't apologise! It was MOST ENTERTAINING. I enjoyed it: 2 gorgeous girls fighting over me! WHAT MORE CAN I ASK FOR? ,he joked playfully. Manyata laughed through her tears. You gonna pay for saying that Mr Singh! Just tell me when and where, he winked.
 
...Manyata saying that Mr Singh will pay...was just a joke! 
 
 
Paragraph 3 in chapter 2.3:
 
...Uday asks what he'll  pay...there, he was just teasing Manyata, not really expecting her to answer...but, she did (although she was joking)...of course, her joke back-fired on her and he DELIVERED on it in the bathroom. Embarrassed
Manyata whispered a single word to him...the word was :  CUNNILINGUS.
...If u didn't know what it means...I'M SURE U KNOW NOW!!!
 
...I did have that word in the update, but I decided to edit it...I didn't want to give everyone a new word to add to their vocabulary...
 
HOPE THAT ANSWERED YOUR QUESTION!!!
 

oh i get the point
CUNNILINGUS. i knew what that meant but u did not use it in the actual update so i wondered what the word would be i thought ti was a manyata giving uday oral pleasure or something
thanks for solving my doubt
[/QUOTE]
 
Good!
I didn't want to put in that word...in case somebody didn't know what it meant...and if they asked me to explain...I  WOULD JUST DIE!!!...but now if anybody asks...I'll refer them here  LOLLOLLOL
 
Manyata giving Uday oral pleasure...GOOD IDEA...CAN I USE IT???
 
[/QUOTE]

of course u can navi 
i would love to read that
in the next chapter u can write 
manveer honeymoon
2 weeks only on bedEmbarrassed
[/QUOTE]
 
 
Thanx Saira.
OH GOD...If I write about their 2 week honey-moon in bed,
...I'LL NEED 2 WEEK BED-REST LOL
In fact...I have something more interesting in mind
...& I know U WILL LOVE IT!!! Big smile
It will come after the next 3 parts...HOPE U'LL STILL BE INTERESTED !!!
 
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Posted: 26 September 2012 at 10:07am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ...navina...

Originally posted by vampire12345678

Originally posted by ...navina...

 
 
Glad u think so(about the idea).
Out of Control...WE LIKEWink
Jai will be there for a while...I NEEDED A BREAK FROM HER LOL
 
 
ABOUT YOUR QUERY:
Okay...Let me try to explain: 
 
Chapter 2.2 ended with this:
 
Manyata cried and Uday consoled her. I'm sorry Uday. The party was a disaster... No Princess- don't apologise! It was MOST ENTERTAINING. I enjoyed it: 2 gorgeous girls fighting over me! WHAT MORE CAN I ASK FOR? ,he joked playfully. Manyata laughed through her tears. You gonna pay for saying that Mr Singh! Just tell me when and where, he winked.
 
...Manyata saying that Mr Singh will pay...was just a joke! 
 
 
Paragraph 3 in chapter 2.3:
 
...Uday asks what he'll  pay...there, he was just teasing Manyata, not really expecting her to answer...but, she did (although she was joking)...of course, her joke back-fired on her and he DELIVERED on it in the bathroom. Embarrassed
Manyata whispered a single word to him...the word was :  CUNNILINGUS.
...If u didn't know what it means...I'M SURE U KNOW NOW!!!
 
...I did have that word in the update, but I decided to edit it...I didn't want to give everyone a new word to add to their vocabulary...
 
HOPE THAT ANSWERED YOUR QUESTION!!!
 

oh i get the point
CUNNILINGUS. i knew what that meant but u did not use it in the actual update so i wondered what the word would be i thought ti was a manyata giving uday oral pleasure or something
thanks for solving my doubt
 
Good!
I didn't want to put in that word...in case somebody didn't know what it meant...and if they asked me to explain...I  WOULD JUST DIE!!!...but now if anybody asks...I'll refer them here  LOLLOLLOL
 
Manyata giving Uday oral pleasure...GOOD IDEA...CAN I USE IT???
 
[/QUOTE]

of course u can navi 
i would love to read that
in the next chapter u can write 
manveer honeymoon
2 weeks only on bedEmbarrassed
[/QUOTE]
 
 
Thanx Saira.
OH GOD...If I write about their 2 week honey-moon in bed,
...I'LL NEED 2 WEEK BED-REST LOL
In fact...I have something more interesting in mind
...& I know U WILL LOVE IT!!! Big smile
It will come after the next 3 parts...HOPE U'LL STILL BE INTERESTED !!!
 
[/QUOTE]

something interesting
what will that be 
if i will love it then it must be in the romance genre 
of course i will be interested u are such a fab writer
please update soon
i know u must have figured out what will be nextTongue

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Posted: 26 September 2012 at 10:26am | IP Logged
Originally posted by vampire12345678

Originally posted by ...navina...

Originally posted by vampire12345678

Originally posted by ...navina...

 
 
Glad u think so(about the idea).
Out of Control...WE LIKEWink
Jai will be there for a while...I NEEDED A BREAK FROM HER LOL
 
 
ABOUT YOUR QUERY:
Okay...Let me try to explain: 
 
Chapter 2.2 ended with this:
 
Manyata cried and Uday consoled her. I'm sorry Uday. The party was a disaster... No Princess- don't apologise! It was MOST ENTERTAINING. I enjoyed it: 2 gorgeous girls fighting over me! WHAT MORE CAN I ASK FOR? ,he joked playfully. Manyata laughed through her tears. You gonna pay for saying that Mr Singh! Just tell me when and where, he winked.
 
...Manyata saying that Mr Singh will pay...was just a joke! 
 
 
Paragraph 3 in chapter 2.3:
 
...Uday asks what he'll  pay...there, he was just teasing Manyata, not really expecting her to answer...but, she did (although she was joking)...of course, her joke back-fired on her and he DELIVERED on it in the bathroom. Embarrassed
Manyata whispered a single word to him...the word was :  CUNNILINGUS.
...If u didn't know what it means...I'M SURE U KNOW NOW!!!
 
...I did have that word in the update, but I decided to edit it...I didn't want to give everyone a new word to add to their vocabulary...
 
HOPE THAT ANSWERED YOUR QUESTION!!!
 

oh i get the point
CUNNILINGUS. i knew what that meant but u did not use it in the actual update so i wondered what the word would be i thought ti was a manyata giving uday oral pleasure or something
thanks for solving my doubt
 
Good!
I didn't want to put in that word...in case somebody didn't know what it meant...and if they asked me to explain...I  WOULD JUST DIE!!!...but now if anybody asks...I'll refer them here  LOLLOLLOL
 
Manyata giving Uday oral pleasure...GOOD IDEA...CAN I USE IT???
 

of course u can navi 
i would love to read that
in the next chapter u can write 
manveer honeymoon
2 weeks only on bedEmbarrassed
[/QUOTE]
 
 
Thanx Saira.
OH GOD...If I write about their 2 week honey-moon in bed,
...I'LL NEED 2 WEEK BED-REST LOL
In fact...I have something more interesting in mind
...& I know U WILL LOVE IT!!! Big smile
It will come after the next 3 parts...HOPE U'LL STILL BE INTERESTED !!!
 
[/QUOTE]

something interesting
what will that be 
if i will love it then it must be in the romance genre 
of course i will be interested u are such a fab writer
please update soon
i know u must have figured out what will be nextTongue
[/QUOTE]
 
 
Nope...not romance genre!
It's in the EROTICA genre !!!
 
Yeah...finally got some ideas on upcoming plots:
...next is ...A TRIP TO JAIGARH
...then...A MARRIAGE OF CONVENIENCE
...after that...A NIGHT TO REMEMBER  WinkEmbarrassed
 
Thanx 4 calling me a fab writer
...U DO WONDERS FOR MY EGO!!!
 

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Posted: 26 September 2012 at 10:31am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ...navina...

Originally posted by vampire12345678

Originally posted by ...navina...

Originally posted by vampire12345678

Originally posted by ...navina...

 
 
Glad u think so(about the idea).
Out of Control...WE LIKEWink
Jai will be there for a while...I NEEDED A BREAK FROM HER LOL
 
 
ABOUT YOUR QUERY:
Okay...Let me try to explain: 
 
Chapter 2.2 ended with this:
 
Manyata cried and Uday consoled her. I'm sorry Uday. The party was a disaster... No Princess- don't apologise! It was MOST ENTERTAINING. I enjoyed it: 2 gorgeous girls fighting over me! WHAT MORE CAN I ASK FOR? ,he joked playfully. Manyata laughed through her tears. You gonna pay for saying that Mr Singh! Just tell me when and where, he winked.
 
...Manyata saying that Mr Singh will pay...was just a joke! 
 
 
Paragraph 3 in chapter 2.3:
 
...Uday asks what he'll  pay...there, he was just teasing Manyata, not really expecting her to answer...but, she did (although she was joking)...of course, her joke back-fired on her and he DELIVERED on it in the bathroom. Embarrassed
Manyata whispered a single word to him...the word was :  CUNNILINGUS.
...If u didn't know what it means...I'M SURE U KNOW NOW!!!
 
...I did have that word in the update, but I decided to edit it...I didn't want to give everyone a new word to add to their vocabulary...
 
HOPE THAT ANSWERED YOUR QUESTION!!!
 

oh i get the point
CUNNILINGUS. i knew what that meant but u did not use it in the actual update so i wondered what the word would be i thought ti was a manyata giving uday oral pleasure or something
thanks for solving my doubt
 
Good!
I didn't want to put in that word...in case somebody didn't know what it meant...and if they asked me to explain...I  WOULD JUST DIE!!!...but now if anybody asks...I'll refer them here  LOLLOLLOL
 
Manyata giving Uday oral pleasure...GOOD IDEA...CAN I USE IT???
 

of course u can navi 
i would love to read that
in the next chapter u can write 
manveer honeymoon
2 weeks only on bedEmbarrassed
 
 
Thanx Saira.
OH GOD...If I write about their 2 week honey-moon in bed,
...I'LL NEED 2 WEEK BED-REST LOL
In fact...I have something more interesting in mind
...& I know U WILL LOVE IT!!! Big smile
It will come after the next 3 parts...HOPE U'LL STILL BE INTERESTED !!!
 
[/QUOTE]

something interesting
what will that be 
if i will love it then it must be in the romance genre 
of course i will be interested u are such a fab writer
please update soon
i know u must have figured out what will be nextTongue
[/QUOTE]
 
 
Nope...not romance genre!
It's in the EROTICA genre !!!
 
Yeah...finally got some ideas on upcoming plots:
...next is ...A TRIP TO JAIGARH
...then...A MARRIAGE OF CONVENIENCE
...after that...A NIGHT TO REMEMBER  WinkEmbarrassed
 
Thanx 4 calling me a fab writer
...U DO WONDERS FOR MY EGO!!!
 
[/QUOTE]

oh by romantic i meant erotic tried to be decentLOL
wow the chapters sound super great
please update soon for the first time i wish i have a birthday every dayLOL

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Posted: 26 September 2012 at 10:54am | IP Logged
Originally posted by vampire12345678

Originally posted by ...navina...

Originally posted by vampire12345678

Originally posted by ...navina...

Originally posted by vampire12345678

Originally posted by ...navina...

 
 
Glad u think so(about the idea).
Out of Control...WE LIKEWink
Jai will be there for a while...I NEEDED A BREAK FROM HER LOL
 
 
ABOUT YOUR QUERY:
Okay...Let me try to explain: 
 
Chapter 2.2 ended with this:
 
Manyata cried and Uday consoled her. I'm sorry Uday. The party was a disaster... No Princess- don't apologise! It was MOST ENTERTAINING. I enjoyed it: 2 gorgeous girls fighting over me! WHAT MORE CAN I ASK FOR? ,he joked playfully. Manyata laughed through her tears. You gonna pay for saying that Mr Singh! Just tell me when and where, he winked.
 
...Manyata saying that Mr Singh will pay...was just a joke! 
 
 
Paragraph 3 in chapter 2.3:
 
...Uday asks what he'll  pay...there, he was just teasing Manyata, not really expecting her to answer...but, she did (although she was joking)...of course, her joke back-fired on her and he DELIVERED on it in the bathroom. Embarrassed
Manyata whispered a single word to him...the word was :  CUNNILINGUS.
...If u didn't know what it means...I'M SURE U KNOW NOW!!!
 
...I did have that word in the update, but I decided to edit it...I didn't want to give everyone a new word to add to their vocabulary...
 
HOPE THAT ANSWERED YOUR QUESTION!!!
 

oh i get the point
CUNNILINGUS. i knew what that meant but u did not use it in the actual update so i wondered what the word would be i thought ti was a manyata giving uday oral pleasure or something
thanks for solving my doubt
 
Good!
I didn't want to put in that word...in case somebody didn't know what it meant...and if they asked me to explain...I  WOULD JUST DIE!!!...but now if anybody asks...I'll refer them here  LOLLOLLOL
 
Manyata giving Uday oral pleasure...GOOD IDEA...CAN I USE IT???
 

of course u can navi 
i would love to read that
in the next chapter u can write 
manveer honeymoon
2 weeks only on bedEmbarrassed
 
 
Thanx Saira.
OH GOD...If I write about their 2 week honey-moon in bed,
...I'LL NEED 2 WEEK BED-REST LOL
In fact...I have something more interesting in mind
...& I know U WILL LOVE IT!!! Big smile
It will come after the next 3 parts...HOPE U'LL STILL BE INTERESTED !!!
 

something interesting
what will that be 
if i will love it then it must be in the romance genre 
of course i will be interested u are such a fab writer
please update soon
i know u must have figured out what will be nextTongue
[/QUOTE]
 
 
Nope...not romance genre!
It's in the EROTICA genre !!!
 
Yeah...finally got some ideas on upcoming plots:
...next is ...A TRIP TO JAIGARH
...then...A MARRIAGE OF CONVENIENCE
...after that...A NIGHT TO REMEMBER  WinkEmbarrassed
 
Thanx 4 calling me a fab writer
...U DO WONDERS FOR MY EGO!!!
 
[/QUOTE]

oh by romantic i meant erotic tried to be decentLOL
wow the chapters sound super great
please update soon for the first time i wish i have a birthday every dayLOL
[/QUOTE]
 
 
Saira    &   decent...NAAH, these 2 words don't go together!LOL
I can guess...which will be your favourite.
 
...& I'm grateful...you don't have a birthday everyday!!!
 

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