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MANVEER FF : The journey of a wife... (Book 1) (Page 40)

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Posted: 25 September 2012 at 10:17am | IP Logged
Originally posted by vampire12345678

Originally posted by ...navina...

Originally posted by vampire12345678

awesome update 
sweetness
rightous
impressive
super
amazing
great
wonderful
fanstastic
fantabulous
and finally:
SUPERCALIFRAGILISTIC EXPIALIDOCIOUS!!!
i loved this update thanks for dedicating it to me 
and i loved the manveer ahem ahem scenes so vividly described especially the bathroom and uday licking k getting to graphic i better stop writingLOL that part was very nice and manyata being so super naughty and the invisible nighty idea u still remembered it and used it super nicely 
now coming to J she has just lost her mental balance 
i am happy how u are treating her she deserved it 
i loved this update and manveer scenes were the best please update soon
thanks so so much for the pm
and a wonderful birthday gift
love u 

 
Thank u Saira   (FOR ALL 11 COMPLIMENTS)
Thank God u liked it...Had to dedicate it to my best friendWink
Yeah...we better not talk anything more about the ahem-ahem scenes,
...I don't want to start blushing again!
...so, u also remember the invisible nighty part...(you would have done a better job...for sure).
I gave Jai, what she deserved...but ,there are some readers feeling sorry for her Cry...I think I have to get her treated quicklyLOL
I'll update when I recover from this 1...it took a lot out of me!
U ARE MOST WELCOME!!!
LOVE YOU 2 SWEETY!!!
 
 
no u used it super nicely(the idea)
if i would have used it then things would go out of controlLOL\J deserves this i hope to see her mental for some more time
and i forgot to ask u some thing when commenting earlier
K
there is this part when manyata tells uday some thing in his eyes and he gets shocked 
pleease tell me what did she say
if it not apportiate for some readers and please pm me 
 
 
Glad u think so(about the idea).
Out of Control...WE LIKEWink
Jai will be there for a while...I NEEDED A BREAK FROM HER LOL
 
 
ABOUT YOUR QUERY:
Okay...Let me try to explain: 
 
Chapter 2.2 ended with this:
 
Manyata cried and Uday consoled her. I'm sorry Uday. The party was a disaster... No Princess- don't apologise! It was MOST ENTERTAINING. I enjoyed it: 2 gorgeous girls fighting over me! WHAT MORE CAN I ASK FOR? ,he joked playfully. Manyata laughed through her tears. You gonna pay for saying that Mr Singh! Just tell me when and where, he winked.
 
...Manyata saying that Mr Singh will pay...was just a joke! 
 
 
Paragraph 3 in chapter 2.3:
 
...Uday asks what he'll  pay...there, he was just teasing Manyata, not really expecting her to answer...but, she did (although she was joking)...of course, her joke back-fired on her and he DELIVERED on it in the bathroom. Embarrassed
Manyata whispered a single word to him...the word was :  CUNNILINGUS.
...If u didn't know what it means...I'M SURE U KNOW NOW!!!
 
...I did have that word in the update, but I decided to edit it...I didn't want to give everyone a new word to add to their vocabulary...
 
HOPE THAT ANSWERED YOUR QUESTION!!!
 

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Posted: 25 September 2012 at 10:23am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ...navina...

Originally posted by vampire12345678

Originally posted by ...navina...

Originally posted by vampire12345678

awesome update 
sweetness
rightous
impressive
super
amazing
great
wonderful
fanstastic
fantabulous
and finally:
SUPERCALIFRAGILISTIC EXPIALIDOCIOUS!!!
i loved this update thanks for dedicating it to me 
and i loved the manveer ahem ahem scenes so vividly described especially the bathroom and uday licking k getting to graphic i better stop writingLOL that part was very nice and manyata being so super naughty and the invisible nighty idea u still remembered it and used it super nicely 
now coming to J she has just lost her mental balance 
i am happy how u are treating her she deserved it 
i loved this update and manveer scenes were the best please update soon
thanks so so much for the pm
and a wonderful birthday gift
love u 

 
Thank u Saira   (FOR ALL 11 COMPLIMENTS)
Thank God u liked it...Had to dedicate it to my best friendWink
Yeah...we better not talk anything more about the ahem-ahem scenes,
...I don't want to start blushing again!
...so, u also remember the invisible nighty part...(you would have done a better job...for sure).
I gave Jai, what she deserved...but ,there are some readers feeling sorry for her Cry...I think I have to get her treated quicklyLOL
I'll update when I recover from this 1...it took a lot out of me!
U ARE MOST WELCOME!!!
LOVE YOU 2 SWEETY!!!
 
 
no u used it super nicely(the idea)
if i would have used it then things would go out of controlLOL\J deserves this i hope to see her mental for some more time
and i forgot to ask u some thing when commenting earlier
K
there is this part when manyata tells uday some thing in his eyes and he gets shocked 
pleease tell me what did she say
if it not apportiate for some readers and please pm me 
 
 
Glad u think so(about the idea).
Out of Control...WE LIKEWink
Jai will be there for a while...I NEEDED A BREAK FROM HER LOL
 
 
ABOUT YOUR QUERY:
Okay...Let me try to explain: 
 
Chapter 2.2 ended with this:
 
Manyata cried and Uday consoled her. I'm sorry Uday. The party was a disaster... No Princess- don't apologise! It was MOST ENTERTAINING. I enjoyed it: 2 gorgeous girls fighting over me! WHAT MORE CAN I ASK FOR? ,he joked playfully. Manyata laughed through her tears. You gonna pay for saying that Mr Singh! Just tell me when and where, he winked.
 
...Manyata saying that Mr Singh will pay...was just a joke! 
 
 
Paragraph 3 in chapter 2.3:
 
...Uday asks what he'll  pay...there, he was just teasing Manyata, not really expecting her to answer...but, she did (although she was joking)...of course, her joke back-fired on her and he DELIVERED on it in the bathroom. Embarrassed
Manyata whispered a single word to him...the word was :  CUNNILINGUS.
...If u didn't know what it means...I'M SURE U KNOW NOW!!!
 
...I did have that word in the update, but I decided to edit it...I didn't want to give everyone a new word to add to their vocabulary...
 
HOPE THAT ANSWERED YOUR QUESTION!!!
 

oh i get the point
CUNNILINGUS. i knew what that meant but u did not use it in the actual update so i wondered what the word would be i thought ti was a manyata giving uday oral pleasure or something
thanks for solving my doubt

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...navina...

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Posted: 25 September 2012 at 10:32am | IP Logged
HOT HOT HOT!!! Now that was really hot
Navina baby muahh :* you made my day
By updating i was feeling so low today
Now you made me so happy Smile

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Posted: 25 September 2012 at 10:36am | IP Logged
[/QUOTE]
 
 
Glad u think so(about the idea).
Out of Control...WE LIKEWink
Jai will be there for a while...I NEEDED A BREAK FROM HER LOL
 
 
ABOUT YOUR QUERY:
Okay...Let me try to explain: 
 
Chapter 2.2 ended with this:
 
Manyata cried and Uday consoled her. I'm sorry Uday. The party was a disaster... No Princess- don't apologise! It was MOST ENTERTAINING. I enjoyed it: 2 gorgeous girls fighting over me! WHAT MORE CAN I ASK FOR? ,he joked playfully. Manyata laughed through her tears. You gonna pay for saying that Mr Singh! Just tell me when and where, he winked.
 
...Manyata saying that Mr Singh will pay...was just a joke! 
 
 
Paragraph 3 in chapter 2.3:
 
...Uday asks what he'll  pay...there, he was just teasing Manyata, not really expecting her to answer...but, she did (although she was joking)...of course, her joke back-fired on her and he DELIVERED on it in the bathroom. Embarrassed
Manyata whispered a single word to him...the word was :  CUNNILINGUS.
...If u didn't know what it means...I'M SURE U KNOW NOW!!!
 
...I did have that word in the update, but I decided to edit it...I didn't want to give everyone a new word to add to their vocabulary...
 
HOPE THAT ANSWERED YOUR QUESTION!!!
 
[/QUOTE]

oh i get the point
CUNNILINGUS. i knew what that meant but u did not use it in the actual update so i wondered what the word would be i thought ti was a manyata giving uday oral pleasure or something
thanks for solving my doubt
[/QUOTE]
 
Good!
I didn't want to put in that word...in case somebody didn't know what it meant...and if they asked me to explain...I  WOULD JUST DIE!!!...but now if anybody asks...I'll refer them here  LOLLOLLOL
 
Manyata giving Uday oral pleasure...GOOD IDEA...CAN I USE IT???
 

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Posted: 25 September 2012 at 10:43am | IP Logged
Originally posted by AndreaBaid

Res Big smile
 
 
Originally posted by AndreaBaid

HOT HOT HOT!!! Now that was really hot
Navina baby muahh :* you made my day
By updating i was feeling so low today
Now you made me so happy Smile
 
Thanx Andrea...coming from u - it's a huge compliment!
...And u just made mine!!!
 
GLAD I COULD HELP...


Edited by ...navina... - 25 September 2012 at 10:44am
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Posted: 25 September 2012 at 10:55am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ...navina...

Originally posted by AndreaBaid

Res Big smile



Originally posted by AndreaBaid

HOT HOT HOT!!! Now that was really hot
Navina baby muahh :* you made my day
By updating i was feeling so low today
Now you made me so happy Smile


<font color="#0000ff" size="3">Thanx Andrea...coming from u - it's a huge compliment!</font>

<font color="#0000ff" size="3">...And u just made mine!!!</font>


<font color="#0000ff" size="3">GLAD I COULD HELP...</font>


Lol call me andy Wink

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Posted: 25 September 2012 at 11:01am | IP Logged
Heyy Navina! I'm Zainab u Can Call Me Zenu! Well I Read All Your Parts They Were Fabulous ! I'll Try Yo Read Your Updates On Time As I'm Busy Dese Days! Pls PM Me Regarding Your Future Updates! 

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Posted: 25 September 2012 at 11:05am | IP Logged
Originally posted by MsLuscious


Navina yot are amazing writer ur ff ix epic!
I read all the parts and trust i loved it to the core do update s0on n do pm me:)
 
Wow...Thanx SARAH
...Actually, your ff is EPIC!
Sure, I'll PM u...No problem!
 
 
Originally posted by ashukapoor007

Heyy Navina! I'm Zainab u Can Call Me Zenu! Well I Read All Your Parts They Were Fabulous ! I'll Try Yo Read Your Updates On Time As I'm Busy Dese Days! Pls PM Me Regarding Your Future Updates!
 
Nice to meet u Zenu.
Thanx 4 the compliment.
Okay then...I'll add u to my PM list.
 
THANX 4 COMMENTING!


Edited by ...navina... - 26 September 2012 at 9:29am

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