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MANVEER FF : The journey of a wife... (Book 1) (Page 39)

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Posted: 24 September 2012 at 1:16pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by pia.raha

manveer ka to aj sprks hi sprks ho raha thaa!!!!!!!!! it wass gr88 and suprbb updatee!!!!!!!!!!!! and wen udayy said dat she is hnging her room nt for uday bt for sshower,dat was soo hilariouss and tyhe pthr partss wass awesme chmstry!!!!!!!!!!
 
Haan Pia...bohot ELECTRIC ho gaye na!!! Thank you!!!
Dear...after every update u seem to find something hillarious
...I'm so happy...I can make u laugh!!!
 
THANX 4 COMMENTING!!!

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Posted: 24 September 2012 at 7:59pm | IP Logged
loved the chapterSmileSmile
no words.. such an awesome chapter..Clap
uday removing the saree's pin in d elevatorLOLLOL
n manyata asking whether he cant wait even a bit.. so damn cute..EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
manyata giving uday punishment and getting caught herselfEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed


n coming to jay.. finally i get to see someone writing on jay getting wat she deserved..Smile
or else in most cases she is forgiven very easilyAngryAngry

continue soon navinaSmileSmile


Edited by Sunshinegirll - 25 September 2012 at 7:03am

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Posted: 25 September 2012 at 4:54am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ...navina...

Originally posted by vampire12345678

awesome update 
sweetness
rightous
impressive
super
amazing
great
wonderful
fanstastic
fantabulous
and finally:
SUPERCALIFRAGILISTIC EXPIALIDOCIOUS!!!
i loved this update thanks for dedicating it to me 
and i loved the manveer ahem ahem scenes so vividly described especially the bathroom and uday licking k getting to graphic i better stop writingLOL that part was very nice and manyata being so super naughty and the invisible nighty idea u still remembered it and used it super nicely 
now coming to J she has just lost her mental balance 
i am happy how u are treating her she deserved it 
i loved this update and manveer scenes were the best please update soon
thanks so so much for the pm
and a wonderful birthday gift
love u 

 
Thank u Saira   (FOR ALL 11 COMPLIMENTS)
Thank God u liked it...Had to dedicate it to my best friendWink
Yeah...we better not talk anything more about the ahem-ahem scenes,
...I don't want to start blushing again!
...so, u also remember the invisible nighty part...(you would have done a better job...for sure).
I gave Jai, what she deserved...but ,there are some readers feeling sorry for her Cry...I think I have to get her treated quicklyLOL
I'll update when I recover from this 1...it took a lot out of me!
U ARE MOST WELCOME!!!
LOVE YOU 2 SWEETY!!!
 
 
no u used it super nicely(the idea)
if i would have used it then things would go out of controlLOL\J deserves this i hope to see her mental for some more time
and i forgot to ask u some thing when commenting earlier
K
there is this part when manyata tells uday some thing in his eyes and he gets shocked 
pleease tell me what did she say
if it not apportiate for some readers and please pm me 

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Posted: 25 September 2012 at 4:56am | IP Logged
Comment edited on pg 36Hug

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Posted: 25 September 2012 at 6:41am | IP Logged
woah finally pura update padne ka mauka 
the ahem ahem was EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed...

J 's condition is pitiable but considering de 
things she did and cud hav done 2 M i 
personally dont pity her tat much 

gr8 update 
cont soon and thanks 4 de PM

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Posted: 25 September 2012 at 8:28am | IP Logged
Originally posted by adorable_rana

Woaahhh Navi dear...It was super electrifying and sparky...ahem ahemBlushingBlushingBlushing

I don't more words to say...Blushing BlushingLOL

and what happened to J...is she gone madLOL

Thanx for the pm dear and update soonHug

whats next nowDay Dreaming

Hug

 
 
Thanx Ruba...U really think so???
 
I know what u mean...after that update...I'm also wordlessLOL
 
Jai has gone off the deep end...hope u aren't sad about it!
 
Welcome!
 
Good question...Do u have any ideas???
 
Hug   SAME TO U DEAR!
 
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Posted: 25 September 2012 at 8:36am | IP Logged
Originally posted by zinayrules

WOW...
how passionate love it navina very very nice update love the manveer scenes...
jay in mental asylum...thats better for that phsyco...lol
thanks for pm...update soon...!
 
U really think so???
Thank you!
...so glad u agree with me.
Welcome.
 
THANX 4 COMMENTING!!!
 
 
 
Originally posted by Shals9

Loving the update, nok-jhok, Uday's chedkaani, manyata's naughtyness!! Superb update! Pls update asap! Ufff yeh guests!! Simply hate them!
 
Thanx Shalini...
The programme never showed us Manveer after-marriage scenes Cry...I wrote these parts as I imagined  it would be...THIS IS MY DREAM!!! Embarrassed
 
I also hate when guests arrive unannounced...Angry
& then don't know when to say Good-bye!
 
THANK U FOR COMMENTING!!!
 
 
Originally posted by Fantasyangel

whom u r talking abt guys?
 
Confused
 
 
 
Originally posted by pmpm1

Loved the Manveer scenes. And although I hate J, I felt sad for her in this update.Cry I wish she had changed for the better and found true love herself instead of ending up in an assylum.
 
I'm so glad...I had to put in a lot of effort into it.
I also felt sad for Jai...but I can only deal with 1 villain at a time and the main villain is on his way ...that's why I sent Jai away to the mental-institute.
 
THANX 4 COMMENTING!!!
 
 
Originally posted by milhan

i am in luv wd ur ff! its awsom!...:D plz pm me the next tym
 
I'm also in love with itLOL.
Thank u Dear.
I'll add u to my PM list...no problem!
 
THANX 4 YOUR COMMENT!!!
 
 
 
Originally posted by Hawa.Hawai

Oh no again updating.Navi dear meri beemari lag gayi kya tumhe???Pliz cont soon...
RES
 
 
...Haan Swini...tumhari bimari bohot contagious he LOL
 
 
 
Originally posted by hemvb

mindblowing update!!!!!!!!!!!! love maanveer's chemistry but feel bad for J...do continue soon :P
 
 
Thank u!!! Manveer  is a very electrifying couple...
...Don't worry about Jai,  WE ALL NEED A BREAK FROM HER!!!
...Will continue when I get some new ideas.LOL
 
 


Edited by ...navina... - 28 September 2012 at 6:52am
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Posted: 25 September 2012 at 9:50am | IP Logged

Navina yot are amazing writer ur ff ix epic!
I read all the parts and trust i loved it to the core do update s0on n do pm me:)

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