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MANVEER FF : The journey of a wife... (Book 1) (Page 38)

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Posted: 24 September 2012 at 12:32pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by snowdream

ahhh visitors i hate them...Angry
finally finally finally navi thanks thanks thank for such a gr8 cute update...
love uHug
feeling bad for J poor lost her mental balance bt what to do jaisi karni waisi barni...
hey waiting for the next part...the more u write the more we demandLOL

 
I actually didn't know how much I hate visitors...until yesterday!!!
Thank u for calling it CUTE.
Love u 2.
U are absolutely right!
Krishna...after that part...I'm taking a holiday. LOL
...will update when I recover!!!

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Posted: 24 September 2012 at 12:43pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by swetsurati

abhi tak visitors gaye nahi kya?
 
 
Originally posted by swetsurati

urghhh...Angry these guest...kabhi bhi kahib bhi kisi ke bhi ghar muh utha ke chale atate hai...but yaar plzzz...try toh karna.
 
 
Originally posted by swetsurati

visitors gaye k nahi?????
 
 
Originally posted by swetsurati

Superb superb ...amazing update kehate hai naa k sabar ka fal mitha hota hai...ye fal bhi kuch aisa hi tha...
Manveer lift scene was sooo...cute...lolzzz...manyata really dosent know any thing about senser shower...i love that lailought kya princess isi hoti hai?
Manyata : nahi biwiya aisi hoti hai...
Haila J bhai lost her mental balance...i think she needs electric shock tretment tabhi life ke itne bade shock se bahar aa payegi...to be honest i dnt feel bad for J ab jaisa karoge waisa bharoge...ok...thanx for lovely update and PM.
 
Thank u Sweta...was it really that sweet???
I try to make all Manveer scenes cute...it's easy with them!!!
 
I agree with everything u said about Jai.
 
THANX 4 COMMENTING!!!
 
 


Edited by ...navina... - 24 September 2012 at 1:01pm
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Posted: 24 September 2012 at 12:44pm | IP Logged
edited my comment on page 36
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Posted: 24 September 2012 at 12:59pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by vampire12345678

awesome update 
sweetness
rightous
impressive
super
amazing
great
wonderful
fanstastic
fantabulous
and finally:
SUPERCALIFRAGILISTIC EXPIALIDOCIOUS!!!
i loved this update thanks for dedicating it to me 
and i loved the manveer ahem ahem scenes so vividly described especially the bathroom and uday licking k getting to graphic i better stop writingLOL that part was very nice and manyata being so super naughty and the invisible nighty idea u still remembered it and used it super nicely 
now coming to J she has just lost her mental balance 
i am happy how u are treating her she deserved it 
i loved this update and manveer scenes were the best please update soon
thanks so so much for the pm
and a wonderful birthday gift
love u 

 
Thank u Saira   (FOR ALL 11 COMPLIMENTS)
Thank God u liked it...Had to dedicate it to my best friendWink
Yeah...we better not talk anything more about the ahem-ahem scenes,
...I don't want to start blushing again!
...so, u also remember the invisible nighty part...(you would have done a better job...for sure).
I gave Jai, what she deserved...but ,there are some readers feeling sorry for her Cry...I think I have to get her treated quicklyLOL
I'll update when I recover from this 1...it took a lot out of me!
U ARE MOST WELCOME!!!
LOVE YOU 2 SWEETY!!!
 
 


Edited by ...navina... - 24 September 2012 at 1:03pm
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Posted: 24 September 2012 at 1:05pm | IP Logged
OMG... BlushingBlushingBlushing... This was my reaction in all Manyata and Uday parts, I'm such a nanhi bachi, I tell you! LOL... and Jai she has really lost it, cutting off her own eyebrows and cutting off her skin and hair... poor girl.. though she deserves to be punished but can't help feeling a bit sad for her seeing her in this condition!

Jai is too stubborn to see the reality, her one sided love/ obsession is just too much! Fab update Thumbs Up

Edited by mahi0809 - 24 September 2012 at 2:23pm

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Posted: 24 September 2012 at 1:16pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by pia.raha

manveer ka to aj sprks hi sprks ho raha thaa!!!!!!!!! it wass gr88 and suprbb updatee!!!!!!!!!!!! and wen udayy said dat she is hnging her room nt for uday bt for sshower,dat was soo hilariouss and tyhe pthr partss wass awesme chmstry!!!!!!!!!!
 
Haan Pia...bohot ELECTRIC ho gaye na!!! Thank you!!!
Dear...after every update u seem to find something hillarious
...I'm so happy...I can make u laugh!!!
 
THANX 4 COMMENTING!!!
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Posted: 24 September 2012 at 7:59pm | IP Logged
loved the chapterSmileSmile
no words.. such an awesome chapter..Clap
uday removing the saree's pin in d elevatorLOLLOL
n manyata asking whether he cant wait even a bit.. so damn cute..EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
manyata giving uday punishment and getting caught herselfEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed


n coming to jay.. finally i get to see someone writing on jay getting wat she deserved..Smile
or else in most cases she is forgiven very easilyAngryAngry

continue soon navinaSmileSmile


Edited by Sunshinegirll - 25 September 2012 at 7:03am

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Posted: 25 September 2012 at 4:54am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ...navina...

Originally posted by vampire12345678

awesome update 
sweetness
rightous
impressive
super
amazing
great
wonderful
fanstastic
fantabulous
and finally:
SUPERCALIFRAGILISTIC EXPIALIDOCIOUS!!!
i loved this update thanks for dedicating it to me 
and i loved the manveer ahem ahem scenes so vividly described especially the bathroom and uday licking k getting to graphic i better stop writingLOL that part was very nice and manyata being so super naughty and the invisible nighty idea u still remembered it and used it super nicely 
now coming to J she has just lost her mental balance 
i am happy how u are treating her she deserved it 
i loved this update and manveer scenes were the best please update soon
thanks so so much for the pm
and a wonderful birthday gift
love u 

 
Thank u Saira   (FOR ALL 11 COMPLIMENTS)
Thank God u liked it...Had to dedicate it to my best friendWink
Yeah...we better not talk anything more about the ahem-ahem scenes,
...I don't want to start blushing again!
...so, u also remember the invisible nighty part...(you would have done a better job...for sure).
I gave Jai, what she deserved...but ,there are some readers feeling sorry for her Cry...I think I have to get her treated quicklyLOL
I'll update when I recover from this 1...it took a lot out of me!
U ARE MOST WELCOME!!!
LOVE YOU 2 SWEETY!!!
 
 
no u used it super nicely(the idea)
if i would have used it then things would go out of controlLOL\J deserves this i hope to see her mental for some more time
and i forgot to ask u some thing when commenting earlier
K
there is this part when manyata tells uday some thing in his eyes and he gets shocked 
pleease tell me what did she say
if it not apportiate for some readers and please pm me 

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