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MANVEER FF : The journey of a wife... (Book 1) (Page 34)

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Posted: 19 September 2012 at 9:12am | IP Logged
Originally posted by vampire12345678

waiting waiting waiting waiting
 
...Sorry  sorry    sorry    sorry !!!
 
 
Originally posted by vampire12345678

awesome and lovely beautifully written i am glad the precap turned out to be nice
and not the three some i acceptedROFL
i loved how u shortened things and did not drag them alot
please update soon and thanks for the pm
actually i should please update on my birthdayLOL and alot of manveer doing what u knowWink
i loved the dialogues and especially the manyata climbing the stairs slowly that was very original i loved manyata and her dialogues
please update soon i cant really wait
u know how greedy i am when it comes to manveerLOL
at the end it was a lovely chapterBig smile
 
Thank u Saira...Told u precap won't be as bad as it looked.
SORRY ABOUT THE 3SOME!
I didn't detail too much...didn't want to bore every1.
 
Yes...I'm updating next part on your birthday.
And ...M & U are going to be VERY BUSY LOL...Hope u'll like it!
 
 

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Posted: 19 September 2012 at 9:28am | IP Logged
Originally posted by swetsurati

Navi dear plzzz...update fast.
 
I'm going as fast as I can...WHICH ISN'T FAST AT ALLLOL
 
 
Originally posted by swetsurati

wowww...woww...woowww...awsome, mind blowing, gr8 update...manveer scene was very nice...love that scene when uday saiid...
 Please Princess, let me in.  Besides...I've already seen everything anyway, he smirked.  Uday- why don't u tell it louder- I'm sure some parts of India still didn't hear u.
awww...manveer eye-lock scene was sooo...romentic...
just love unnati and manyata scene...
OH MY GOD! OH MY GOD!  OH MY GOD!!!, she exclaimed.  Manyata stared at her in confusion.  When Unnati finally calmed down, she whispered to Manyata:  Bhabhisa' , Is that a HICKEY on your neck?
urghhh...that J is sooo...uday pe line marne ka ek chance nahi chhodti...
and last scene...jsut superb
 No Princess- don't apologise!   It was MOST ENTERTAINING.   I enjoyed it:   2 gorgeous girls fighting over me!   WHAT MORE CAN I ASK FOR? ,he joked playfully.  Manyata laughed through her tears.   You gonna pay for saying that Mr Singh!   Just tell me when and where,  he winked...now enough of my bakwas waise mera bas chale toh me comment me puri story hi likh dalun...
.love it...he navi dear ur a great writter...keep it up dear...plzzz...update soon...thanx for PM.
 
Thank you so very much...
I appreciate it!...Seems like you've highlighted  my favourite scenes...WE THINK ALIKE!!!
Unnati is Manveer's cheer-leader (that's why I love her so much)...and that's why she gets good dialogue from me LOL...
Jai will never change...SHE BELIEVES UDAY IS HERS...But , don't worry...I'll sort her out in the next chapter!
 
Please don't say: enough of my bakwas...I DON'T CONSIDER IT "BAKWAS" ...I love reading everybody's comments and I enjoy replying back to them...next update is on Monday (as per order from SAIRA)...u are most welcome...
 
THANK U FOR COMMENTING...
 


Edited by navinahun - 19 September 2012 at 10:22am
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Posted: 19 September 2012 at 9:31am | IP Logged
Originally posted by FireNIce

Res..will comment on both 2.1 and 2.2 after I've finished preparing for my exams...I'm really sorry for not commenting even though you've been such a sweetie and have regularly sent me pms...I hope you don't mind?
 
No problem Anusha...take your time!
I don't mind at all!
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Posted: 19 September 2012 at 10:19am | IP Logged
Originally posted by pia.raha

Jaldi update karo na,wait nehi ho raha hai!!!!!!! okkay,on dis part of ur update,manyata in udays arms,soo lovelyy!!!!!!! m taking uday on a date,howw sweet,m bhi rajwade hai!!!!!!! and the part where uday tld her dat he has already seen everythng and m's answer,i was laughing cntinuosly!!!!!!!!
 
Sorry for keeping u waiting...I'm a slow typist!!!
Actually Manyata lied about taking Uday out on a date...That was the excuse...to get  him to the party...(but she will be PUNISHED 4 LYING TO HIMWink)...I'm so happy that I made u laugh!!!
 
 
Originally posted by pia.raha

muaahhh to m!!!!!!!! thank god m ne uday ko drnk karne se bacha liya,akhir patn hi kaam aayaa!!!!!! andd the alstt part wa sbst uday saying dat 2gorgeous grls fighting over and him,and then saying when and where!!!!!!!! oh godd i fainted!!!!!!!!!!!Smile
 
Yes Dear ...lots of hugs & kisses to M for saving Uday!!!
OH NO!!!...I don't want anybody to faint...hope u are well now!!!
 
 

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Posted: 19 September 2012 at 10:29am | IP Logged
Originally posted by pmpm1

Lovely update! Yeh J kabhi nahi sudhregi!Angry
And thanks for the pm.
 
Thanx Dear...Don't worry about Jai...
...I will fix her (in the next chapter)
You're Welcome.
 
 
Originally posted by Chamakchallo30

it was superb Navina!! thank god J ke plans fail hogaye...please update soon...can't wait for the next part...:)
 
Thank u  VIBHA...Arre Thank GOD kyun??? Maine sab kuch kiya!!!
( SORRY, I GOT CARRIED AWAY)
Next part...on Monday!
 
 
Originally posted by Sunshinegirll

hey lovely update.. the precap was scary but d update was different frm wat i expected..
ur promo was a very good edit.. Clap continue soonSmileSmile
 
Thank u very much.
I think i got every1 worried after the promo I gave...
But, it turned out in our favour ...RIGHT???
Thanx 4 commenting!!


Edited by navinahun - 19 September 2012 at 10:34am
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Posted: 19 September 2012 at 10:59am | IP Logged
awesum it was amzing gr8 work mannnClap

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Posted: 19 September 2012 at 11:42am | IP Logged
Superbbb update! Loved it. Very nice dear. Please update soon. Can't wait for the next part.

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Posted: 20 September 2012 at 3:20am | IP Logged
awesome update 
my prediciton party came true 
i m glad J didnt sleep wid UV 
tat girl is crazy she needs medical 
attention if u ask me 


eager to c how mrs. singh makes mr.singh
pay 

hehe 
thanks for de PM 
do cont soon

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