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MANVEER FF : The journey of a wife... (Book 1) (Page 33)

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Posted: 18 September 2012 at 2:21pm | IP Logged
awww...last part was really sweet yar...
The  party was ruined. Unnati took leave of the couple.  Manyata cried and Uday consoled her.  I'm sorry Uday.  The party was a disaster... No Princess- don't apologise!   It was MOST ENTERTAINING.   I enjoyed it:   2 gorgeous girls fighting over me!   WHAT MORE CAN I ASK FOR? ,he joked playfully.  Manyata laughed through her tears.   You gonna pay for saying that Mr Singh!   Just tell me when and where,  he winked.
very very well written yar...

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Posted: 18 September 2012 at 2:43pm | IP Logged
awesome update navina!!

Manyata shared her happiness with UV :D
Aww UV is so cute and respects elders

Party was entertaining *winkkii*

Cont soon

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Posted: 18 September 2012 at 6:25pm | IP Logged
Fabulous update!! and OMG Jai is such a despo!
Fighting with the wife on why she slept with her husband while she wanted to get him drugged and in bed with her... DESPERATE!!

A very nice update... and yup Uday had a great b'day... 2 gals fighting over him... what more can a guy want?LOL

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Posted: 18 September 2012 at 11:24pm | IP Logged
hey lovely update.. the precap was scary but d update was different frm wat i expected..
ur promo was a very good edit.. Clap continue soonSmileSmile
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Posted: 19 September 2012 at 5:25am | IP Logged

its really great 

loved it

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Posted: 19 September 2012 at 9:02am | IP Logged
Originally posted by snowdream

great update naviTongue...really can't wait to know hw will Mr.Singh  pay for his words to Mrs Singh..Wink...navi update soon and make it as long as possible...hey who mi8 have drunk that drink...What if Vijay did will he flirt with Unnati thnLOL or Jagat flirting with J...would love to see the  after effect of J's tablet da...
 
Thanx Krishna...Mrs Singh's punishment is going to be SOMETHING VERY NAUGHTY!!!Wink...I'll try to make it long  ( I'm not proffessional...like all the girls here...I get tired typing long updatesLOL)...YOU KNOW, I actually didn't think about passing off the drink to some1 else; that would've been so much fun...I GUESS I'LL HAVE TO USE THAT IDEA SOME OTHER TIME...Thanx 4 the suggestion!!!
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Posted: 19 September 2012 at 9:12am | IP Logged
Originally posted by vampire12345678

waiting waiting waiting waiting
 
...Sorry  sorry    sorry    sorry !!!
 
 
Originally posted by vampire12345678

awesome and lovely beautifully written i am glad the precap turned out to be nice
and not the three some i acceptedROFL
i loved how u shortened things and did not drag them alot
please update soon and thanks for the pm
actually i should please update on my birthdayLOL and alot of manveer doing what u knowWink
i loved the dialogues and especially the manyata climbing the stairs slowly that was very original i loved manyata and her dialogues
please update soon i cant really wait
u know how greedy i am when it comes to manveerLOL
at the end it was a lovely chapterBig smile
 
Thank u Saira...Told u precap won't be as bad as it looked.
SORRY ABOUT THE 3SOME!
I didn't detail too much...didn't want to bore every1.
 
Yes...I'm updating next part on your birthday.
And ...M & U are going to be VERY BUSY LOL...Hope u'll like it!
 
 

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Posted: 19 September 2012 at 9:28am | IP Logged
Originally posted by swetsurati

Navi dear plzzz...update fast.
 
I'm going as fast as I can...WHICH ISN'T FAST AT ALLLOL
 
 
Originally posted by swetsurati

wowww...woww...woowww...awsome, mind blowing, gr8 update...manveer scene was very nice...love that scene when uday saiid...
 Please Princess, let me in.  Besides...I've already seen everything anyway, he smirked.  Uday- why don't u tell it louder- I'm sure some parts of India still didn't hear u.
awww...manveer eye-lock scene was sooo...romentic...
just love unnati and manyata scene...
OH MY GOD! OH MY GOD!  OH MY GOD!!!, she exclaimed.  Manyata stared at her in confusion.  When Unnati finally calmed down, she whispered to Manyata:  Bhabhisa' , Is that a HICKEY on your neck?
urghhh...that J is sooo...uday pe line marne ka ek chance nahi chhodti...
and last scene...jsut superb
 No Princess- don't apologise!   It was MOST ENTERTAINING.   I enjoyed it:   2 gorgeous girls fighting over me!   WHAT MORE CAN I ASK FOR? ,he joked playfully.  Manyata laughed through her tears.   You gonna pay for saying that Mr Singh!   Just tell me when and where,  he winked...now enough of my bakwas waise mera bas chale toh me comment me puri story hi likh dalun...
.love it...he navi dear ur a great writter...keep it up dear...plzzz...update soon...thanx for PM.
 
Thank you so very much...
I appreciate it!...Seems like you've highlighted  my favourite scenes...WE THINK ALIKE!!!
Unnati is Manveer's cheer-leader (that's why I love her so much)...and that's why she gets good dialogue from me LOL...
Jai will never change...SHE BELIEVES UDAY IS HERS...But , don't worry...I'll sort her out in the next chapter!
 
Please don't say: enough of my bakwas...I DON'T CONSIDER IT "BAKWAS" ...I love reading everybody's comments and I enjoy replying back to them...next update is on Monday (as per order from SAIRA)...u are most welcome...
 
THANK U FOR COMMENTING...
 


Edited by navinahun - 19 September 2012 at 10:22am

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