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MANVEER FF : The journey of a wife... (Book 1) (Page 27)

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Posted: 13 September 2012 at 10:10am | IP Logged
Originally posted by AndreaBaid

Lolyou said u update in a week so waiting for your update plz update soon
 
All done...EVEN BEFORE TIME!!!

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Posted: 13 September 2012 at 10:14am | IP Logged
lovely awesome beautifully written please update soon and the promo just was with so much suspense did J and uday sleep together 
did manyata catch them or something
did manyata uday and J sleep together like uday in the middle thing 
what actually happened please tell me i will die out of curiosity 
but please dont make uday and J sleep together please the whole essence of the story will spoil 
p[lease update soon and thnaks for the pm

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Posted: 13 September 2012 at 10:15am | IP Logged
Oye abhi toh bas ek hi baar Ding Dong huva hai

Abhi se donoon mein misunderstanding bhi hogi kya? nt fairCry

N wanna kill that JaighamandiniAngry

Pre-cap ne daraa diya

 thanx for this update

Manveer scene n kiss was too goodDay Dreaming

Luvd it dearHug

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Posted: 13 September 2012 at 10:19am | IP Logged
Updated my comment on Page 26 Smile

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Posted: 13 September 2012 at 10:24am | IP Logged
Originally posted by fia21

Updated my comment on Page 26Smile


Even mine on page 26 lol mavina do read it

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Posted: 13 September 2012 at 10:26am | IP Logged
update was awesome... i loved it...but i felt it too short than usual this time...i thought manyatha was about to give some surprise ...but u know it was her exam ...in dat guest room scene...funny ... it was superb ...i mean da convo between uday n manyath so casual... pls don give me heartattack ...don let that bloody j to sleep wit uday... pls... thanks for da pm...villians ka hissa kabi katham hi nahi hotha... jus now manveer r happy n this j is behind them...omg if she gets to know that they became one i can imagine j will go mad... wen will b ur next update? since this is short ...can u update it on saturday 2.2 chap ...
SMALL GUESS - i think something happens i donno wat it is n manyatha happens to sleep wit uday n j comes n shouts how they can do this bolke then manyatha replies am his wife damittt... wild guesss... ill c if am right or not aft next update ... am 98% sure about this... Wink

Edited by puggyy - 13 September 2012 at 11:42am

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Posted: 13 September 2012 at 10:41am | IP Logged
Originally posted by fia21

I am so sorry for being SO late.
So here's my comment now for both the chapters.

1.7

Just LOVED this part to bits. Manyata's bold advances towards Uday, and Uday's surprised reactions were perfectly blended together. I thoroughly enjoyed each and every moment in it. The consummation part was impeccable. Really beautiful and romantic. All in all, a wonderful chapter dedicated to Uday and Manyata's reconciliation!

2.1

Finally Uday and Manyata start their lives as a proper married couple. It was so cute how Uday feared that Manyata might have regretted what happened between them and so she wasn't in the room in the morning, and how Manyata explained to him that she didn't regret it even one bit. And then her asking Uday to fill her maang with sindoor. Loved it. Hahah Seema ji and the dowry reference was hilarious LOL . This Jay is the Queen of desperation. I hope her plan majorly backfires. Hmm Manyata has planned a surprise party for her Hubby. That ought to be interesting,

Really curious to read the next part. Even more because of the promo which I feel is misleading so that you could keep us on the edge or our seats biting our nails and thinking of possible scenarios and then give out the ACTUAL scene Wink
Once again, fantastic updates Navina. Continue soon Smile
 
Please Fia...you don't have to apologise...U did tell me that you were gonna be late with the review...I totally understand.  However , At 1 point I did think that u didn't like the previous update...ANYWAY...I'm glad u enjoyed it ...IT TOOK A LOT OUT OF ME!!!
 
I'm  happy that you loved the TINY but Special moments between U&M...and of-course ,my little dowry joke.
 
AWWW...looks like u caught me out on the promo!  DAMN!!!...I need a new strategy!!!
 
THANK U SO MUCH FOR COMMENTING.

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Posted: 13 September 2012 at 11:28am | IP Logged
Originally posted by vampire12345678

lovely awesome beautifully written please update soon and the promo just was with so much suspense did J and uday sleep together 
did manyata catch them or something
did manyata uday and J sleep together like uday in the middle thing 
what actually happened please tell me i will die out of curiosity 
but please dont make uday and J sleep together please the whole essence of the story will spoil 
p[lease update soon and thnaks for the pm
 
Thank u ...so many compliments, WOW.
Can't tell u if U&J slept together...
Sorry...can't tell u that either.
GOSH SAIRA...only u would think of a 3some...ANSWER IS NO!
Okay...I know this is not your strong point: BUT BE PATIENT!!!
Don't make them sleep together...I'LL THINK ABOUT IT!
I'll update Sunday/Monday.
Welcome.

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