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MANVEER FF : The journey of a wife... (Book 1) (Page 25)

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Posted: 10 September 2012 at 10:58am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Swini01

Originally posted by navinahun

[QUOTE=Swini01]Res hehe just kidding buddy.awesome update.hot n a lil bit cute.Cont soon Navi.

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<font color="#0000ff">SwiniJi...aap hi ka intezaar tha...</font>

<font color="#0000ff">I know that it wasn't as HOT as u write it..</font>

<font color="#0000ff">but I tried... </font>


<font color="#0000ff">Anyway... I'm glad u approve!</font>

[DIV]<font color="#0000ff">Thanx 4 commenting.</font>[/
no no it waz hot man.n JI hayee itni izzat ROFL
 
Okay fine...if u say it's hot...we'll leave it at that.
JI kaha ,toh accha nai laga...phir ,kya kaho???

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Posted: 10 September 2012 at 11:11am | IP Logged
Originally posted by navinahun

Originally posted by Swini01

Originally posted by navinahun

[QUOTE=Swini01]Res hehe just kidding buddy.awesome update.hot n a lil bit cute.Cont soon Navi.


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<font color="#0000ff">SwiniJi...aap hi ka intezaar tha...</font>


<font color="#0000ff">I know that it wasn't as HOT as u write it..</font>


<font color="#0000ff">but I tried... </font>


</div>

<font color="#0000ff">Anyway... I'm glad u approve!</font>

<font color="#0000ff">Thanx 4 commenting.</font>[/
no no it waz hot man.n JI hayee itni izzat ROFL

[DIV]

<div><font color="#0000ff">Okay fine...if u say it's hot...we'll leave it at that.</font>

<font color="#0000ff">JI kaha ,toh accha nai laga...phir ,kya kaho???</font>
Hehe yaar jo kehna hai keh dey but ji nahi,itni izzat ki humain adad nahi hai ROFL

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Posted: 10 September 2012 at 11:20am | IP Logged
Originally posted by vampire12345678

sorry for the late comment 
K now coming back to the update it was awesome 
i loved the bold manyata 
the small conversations in between gave it a more real real feeling 
i loved the part when uday thought he was dreaming that was funny ROFL
the hot scene was kept in the boundaries but was not much nor was it to less it was perfect and complimented your story very wellThumbs Up
the whole thing on the overall was beautiful and i loved it
thanks for including me in the patient waiters listLOL
 
please update soon u did a great job in this i know that writing hot scenes is very difficult but u really did a fab jobBig smile

please update ASAP and thanks for the pm naviHug
 
SAIRA...I should apologise for responding late to your comment.
I'm sorry...but not my fault...STUPID SERVICE -PROVIDER!!!
 
Thank you.
I also love her this way.
Glad u think so.
Ya...poor Uday- Bet he never thought his dream will become a reality!
Told you...I'm gonna go 4 Hot & Clean
...Thanx 4 da Thumbs-up!
 
Saira...Sweety...Lovey...u were'nt included in the patient waiters list.
We both know how many times u asked me last week about WHEN I'm gonna update...
 
U are right...writing HOT scenes was a nightmare...
...I've now decided:  NO MORE S**  FOR U & M.
 
I hope to update by weekend...U are very welcome.
 
THANX 4 SUCH A LONG COMMENT.
I REALLY APPRECIATE IT.
ALSO, I MISSED CHATTING WITH U LAST WEEK.
HOPE U ARE FEELING BETTER NOW!!!
 
 
 
 

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Posted: 10 September 2012 at 11:21am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Swini01

Originally posted by navinahun

Originally posted by Swini01

Originally posted by navinahun

[QUOTE=Swini01]Res hehe just kidding buddy.awesome update.hot n a lil bit cute.Cont soon Navi.


</div>
<div>


<font color="#0000ff">SwiniJi...aap hi ka intezaar tha...</font>


<font color="#0000ff">I know that it wasn't as HOT as u write it..</font>


<font color="#0000ff">but I tried... </font>


</div>

<font color="#0000ff">Anyway... I'm glad u approve!</font>

<font color="#0000ff">Thanx 4 commenting.</font>[/
no no it waz hot man.n JI hayee itni izzat ROFL

[DIV]

<div><font color="#0000ff">Okay fine...if u say it's hot...we'll leave it at that.</font>

<font color="#0000ff">JI kaha ,toh accha nai laga...phir ,kya kaho???</font>
Hehe yaar jo kehna hai keh dey but ji nahi,itni izzat ki humain adad nahi hai ROFL
 
Theek hain Swini-behenjiLOL
 
 

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Posted: 10 September 2012 at 11:46am | IP Logged
WOW puggyy...2 comments...Thank U.
Don't worry ..no more misunderstandings from now on.
 
Originally posted by puggyy

fabulous...too good ...loved it...waiting for ur next update...pls lengthy one this time...donno about uday's birthday celebration...i doubt if manyatha will b able to get up da next day morning ...its gonna b horrible for her pain n stuff. i guess ...donno how she manages in da party ...poor manyatha... ur ff is tooo good...fabulous...pls continue
 
Okay...I'm now responding to this quoted comment:
Thank you...I love that u loved it.
Lengthy 1...I'll try...1 problem:
AFTER I TYPE 6 PAGES...MY FINGERS SWELL.
...u have to make do with what I can manage!
 
Even I don't know about Uday's party...
...I got so much planned for that day.
 
OH DEAR...what do u think Uday has done to Manyata??? ...that she wont be able to stand the next day...
You are so worried about Manyata...You're making me worried!
 
THANK YOU SO, SO MUCH FOR COMMENTING!!!
 
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Posted: 10 September 2012 at 11:59am | IP Logged
Originally posted by navinahun

Originally posted by Swini01

Originally posted by navinahun

Originally posted by Swini01

Originally posted by navinahun

[QUOTE=Swini01]Res hehe just kidding buddy.awesome update.hot n a lil bit cute.Cont soon Navi.



</div>
<div>



<font color="#0000ff">SwiniJi...aap hi ka intezaar tha...</font>



<font color="#0000ff">I know that it wasn't as HOT as u write it..</font>



<font color="#0000ff">but I tried... </font>



</div>


<font color="#0000ff">Anyway... I'm glad u approve!</font>


<font color="#0000ff">Thanx 4 commenting.</font>[/
no no it waz hot man.n JI hayee itni izzat ROFL

[DIV]

<div><font color="#0000ff">Okay fine...if u say it's hot...we'll leave it at that.</font>


<font color="#0000ff">JI kaha ,toh accha nai laga...phir ,kya kaho???</font>
Hehe yaar jo kehna hai keh dey but ji nahi,itni izzat ki humain adad nahi hai ROFL

</div>
<div>

<font color="#0000ff">Theek hain Swini-behenjiLOL</font>


Hawww behenji

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Posted: 10 September 2012 at 12:53pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by navinahun

Originally posted by vampire12345678

sorry for the late comment 
K now coming back to the update it was awesome 
i loved the bold manyata 
the small conversations in between gave it a more real real feeling 
i loved the part when uday thought he was dreaming that was funny ROFL
the hot scene was kept in the boundaries but was not much nor was it to less it was perfect and complimented your story very wellThumbs Up
the whole thing on the overall was beautiful and i loved it
thanks for including me in the patient waiters listLOL
 
please update soon u did a great job in this i know that writing hot scenes is very difficult but u really did a fab jobBig smile

please update ASAP and thanks for the pm naviHug
 
SAIRA...I should apologise for responding late to your comment.
I'm sorry...but not my fault...STUPID SERVICE -PROVIDER!!!
 
Thank you.
I also love her this way.
Glad u think so.
Ya...poor Uday- Bet he never thought his dream will become a reality!
Told you...I'm gonna go 4 Hot & Clean
...Thanx 4 da Thumbs-up!
 
Saira...Sweety...Lovey...u were'nt included in the patient waiters list.
We both know how many times u asked me last week about WHEN I'm gonna update...
 
U are right...writing HOT scenes was a nightmare...
...I've now decided:  NO MORE S**  FOR U & M.
 
I hope to update by weekend...U are very welcome.
 
THANX 4 SUCH A LONG COMMENT.
I REALLY APPRECIATE IT.
ALSO, I MISSED CHATTING WITH U LAST WEEK.
HOPE U ARE FEELING BETTER NOW!!!
 
 
lol LOL i missed to chat to you also i am feeling much better now though i am weak 
and no more s*x scenes why
please do write s*x scenes u can write the lights went offLOL
and please update soonTongue

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Posted: 11 September 2012 at 11:15am | IP Logged
Originally posted by lilybabes

Awesome 
beautifully written 
loved de confession 
Manyata gifting Uday her virginity 
tat whole concept was nyc 

thanks for de PM
 
Thank u.
Confession was a long time coming.
Manyata had to gift him something special & unique...
...so, what better than giving herself to him.
And anyway; he's a Prince...he already has everything!!!
 
Welcome!

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