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MANVEER FF : The journey of a wife... (Book 1) (Page 23)

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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 5:37pm | IP Logged
fabulous...too good ...loved it...waiting for ur next update...pls lengthy one this time...donno about uday's birthday celebration...i doubt if manyatha will b able to get up da next day morning ...its gonna b horrible for her pain n stuff. i guess ...donno how she manages in da party ...poor manyatha... ur ff is tooo good...fabulous...pls continue

Edited by puggyy - 09 September 2012 at 3:41am

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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 6:49pm | IP Logged
mindblowing...that was good...finally manveer became one...nice update...though it was short u covered up many things... pls from now no more misunderstandings...thanks.for da pm...nice update

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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 7:17pm | IP Logged

it was fabulose and so ramantic 

this is really a very good part of ff

and i loved it 

plzz update soon

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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 9:30pm | IP Logged
Wow too good I loved it but hate you for making it short lol you got some hot update out their though

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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 10:13pm | IP Logged
It was nicely done Navina!... and thank you for the awesome birthday wishes and for dedicating this chapter to me... that was so sweet of you yaar...

Some of Manyata's bold avatar like her saying 'khol ke dekho... shayad pasand aaye' surprised me... but then I thought abhi bold nahi hogi toh kab hogi?... so I'll say it was a fab update!

Plzz do continue soon !... Next should be Uday's b'day party right?.. Well whatever you've thought of...write it down soon.. cause I wanna read more n more!

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Posted: 09 September 2012 at 2:43am | IP Logged
sorry for the late comment 
K now coming back to the update it was awesome 
i loved the bold manyata 
the small conversations in between gave it a more real real feeling 
i loved the part when uday thought he was dreaming that was funny ROFL
the hot scene was kept in the boundaries but was not much nor was it to less it was perfect and complimented your story very wellThumbs Up
the whole thing on the overall was beautiful and i loved it
thanks for including me in the patient waiters listLOL
 
please update soon u did a great job in this i know that writing hot scenes is very difficult but u really did a fab jobBig smile

please update ASAP and thanks for the pm naviHug

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Posted: 09 September 2012 at 5:59am | IP Logged
Awesome 
beautifully written 
loved de confession 
Manyata gifting Uday her virginity 
tat whole concept was nyc 

thanks for de PM

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Posted: 09 September 2012 at 9:55am | IP Logged

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   sweetshab
   AKlover101...
   pmpm1
 
Thank u 4 commenting & thanx 4 the compliments!


Edited by navinahun - 10 September 2012 at 8:33am

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