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MANVEER FF : The journey of a wife... (Book 1) (Page 19)

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Posted: 04 September 2012 at 9:31am | IP Logged
Originally posted by navinahun

Originally posted by afreshbegin

Wonderful update dear...Smile

Tumhare last dialogue ne hamari raaton ki neend churaliya...Wink

Uday - I want to sleep with you!

Is dialogue ko sunne keliye kaan tharas gaye the..

ab tho next weekend thak hamara haal aisa hoga..Day Dreaming


 
Thank you!
Dear- not only u ; UDAY also has lost his sleep after that line!!!

Haaye matlab woh doonon poori raat ek kamre mein sooyenge nahi toh kya karenge? jaldi update karke baathavonaWink

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Posted: 04 September 2012 at 9:34am | IP Logged
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Originally posted by FireNIce

 
First of all, you are happily forgiven 4 giving us such an AWESOME chapter!!Clap And thanks 4 the pm!!Big smile
Aww, poor Manyata...she tried so many times to confess her feelings, but became the victim of misunderstandings!!Unhappy
 
NOW- WHO'S LEAVING?
Dunno why, but that line cracked me up as I was trying to imagine all this really happening!!LOL
 
She clicked her fingers in front of his face and then pointed her index finger at him: YOU GOT IT!
Okay, I just have one question...did you ever watch Choti Bahu?? My mom was an ardent fan, and I used to sit beside her and do my homework...it was better for her, as she could watch all her favourite serials while keeping a watch on me at the same time.LOL The lead actress there played a double role and one of them used to do the same action...your words reminded me of her. Anyway, enough of my useless banter...Ouch
 
Coming back to the update, Manyata's plan of confessing to Uday was soo cute!!Embarrassed Thank god she didn't text or e-mail him...that would sort of kill the feelings.Dead
 
I was really glad Unnati told Manyata off in the two flashbacks...she had really deserved the rudeness and indifference at that point of time.Angry
 
Wow, the reconciliation of Unnati and M was too good!!
M: UNNATI- I'M IN LOVE WITH YOUR BROTHER & I NEED YOUR HELP!!!
This particular line is my personal favourite in this update...it is soo typical of Manyata!!Big smile
It was the same 2 things she had given Akash and she didn't want to do a repeat performance for Uday. Uday was much, much more special than Akash ever was.
True. I really didn't like the way Uday had at times been portrayed as a second resort 4 Manyata in the actual serial.Ouch Uday is WAY more special than Akash..and I'm not talking in terms of looks, it is the unending faith that his love will prevail that sets him apart from Akash, who used to become insecure at the mere sight of UdayConfused...
 
WHOA..divorce papers!! That was an intial shock, but it soon subsided..because like Manyata, I too am confident that there'll be no divorce after the confession..Big smile
 
Ooh, Manyata's rushing off to Uday as she is scared of the imminent storm, ha??Wink
 
 
 
 
 
Thanx Dear- it feels nice being forgivenLOLLOLLOL & u are welcome!
Yup...poor M...BUt what about POOR UDAY?
 
As I plan my updates, I also imagine everything. As for NOW- WHO'S LEAVING?, there's a funny story behind that... My mum was watching THE BOLD & THE BEAUTIFUL and I was present in the room. 1 Of the character's said NOW WHERE ARE U GOING? . I just had to use it...so I reworded it ! When the ad-break came in the programme... I said my version out loud and flung my arms in the air...My mother gave me a wierd look. I know what she was thinking...I DEFINATELY DIDN'T GIVE BIRTH TO THIS CHILD...I BET SHE WAS SWITCHED AT THE HOSPITAL!!! LOL
 
No- I never watched Chotti bahu. Infact I don't watch any Indian serials. DEK was my 1st & last.
I decided to give this show a shot because the good-looking cast attracted me & it's the last because I don't ever want to be let down again...the way this  show let me down.
 
Unnati was always a true sister...she always stood up for and defended  her brother. So- she had to be the person that shut M up...because M was such a Brat then!
 
U are the only 1 that's favourite  line is UNNATI- I'M IN LOVE WITH YOUR BROTHER & I NEED YOUR HELP!!! Everybody else loved the last line...WELL; for obvious reasons!!!WinkWinkWink
 
Yuvraaj Udayveer Singh does not not come second!!! HE'S AN ORIGINAL...HE DESERVES ALL THINGS ORIGINAL!!!!
 
Divorce.Ouch...WHAT DIVORCE??? Angry   Not while I'm the writer!!!
 
The storm in the room; will be more ELECTRIC than the storm outside.EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedBechari Manyata!
 
 
THANK U, THANK U , THANK U  for such a beautiful reply...I hope this won't be your 1st & last 1.
I hope  to hear from you after every update.  THANX ONCE MORE!!!
 


Edited by navinahun - 04 September 2012 at 9:37am

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Posted: 04 September 2012 at 9:53am | IP Logged
Originally posted by afreshbegin

Originally posted by navinahun

Originally posted by afreshbegin

Wonderful update dear...Smile

Tumhare last dialogue ne hamari raaton ki neend churaliya...Wink

Uday - I want to sleep with you!

Is dialogue ko sunne keliye kaan tharas gaye the..

ab tho next weekend thak hamara haal aisa hoga..Day Dreaming


 
Thank you!
Dear- not only u ; UDAY also has lost his sleep after that line!!!

Haaye matlab woh doonon poori raat ek kamre mein sooyenge nahi toh kya karenge? jaldi update karke baathavonaWink
 
Bacha...sabr ka phal meetha hota hai...
Thora intezer karo,
Saturday Ya Sunday...sab raaz khul jayenge!
SPOILER:  maybe,  they'll talk all night...Shocked.
                     maybe,  they'll play Dumb-charades...Confused
                     maybe,  they'll play Ludo...Confused
                     maybe, they'll plot Jai's murder Big smile
 
WAIT & WATCH...
LOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOL

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Posted: 04 September 2012 at 10:03am | IP Logged
Originally posted by navinahun

Originally posted by afreshbegin

Originally posted by navinahun

Originally posted by afreshbegin

Wonderful update dear...Smile

Tumhare last dialogue ne hamari raaton ki neend churaliya...Wink

Uday - I want to sleep with you!

Is dialogue ko sunne keliye kaan tharas gaye the..

ab tho next weekend thak hamara haal aisa hoga..Day Dreaming


 
Thank you!
Dear- not only u ; UDAY also has lost his sleep after that line!!!

Haaye matlab woh doonon poori raat ek kamre mein sooyenge nahi toh kya karenge? jaldi update karke baathavonaWink
 
Bacha...sabr ka phal meetha hota hai...
Thora intezer karo,
Saturday Ya Sunday...sab raaz khul jayenge!
SPOILER:  maybe,  they'll talk all night...Shocked.
                     maybe,  they'll play Dumb-charades...Confused
                     maybe,  they'll play Ludo...Confused
                     maybe, they'll plot Jai's murder Big smile
 
WAIT & WATCH...
LOL


oye Angryyehi sab karaake mera dil math todna Broken Heart

woh pehle waali planning haina

The storm in the room; will be more ELECTRIC than the storm outside.

he he yahi karaan haan mein chup chap intezaar karoongi update ka par mein aisi raah dekh rahi hoon iskaDay Dreaming

Waitin for ur update dear...


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Posted: 04 September 2012 at 10:32am | IP Logged
Originally posted by afreshbegin

Originally posted by navinahun

Originally posted by afreshbegin

Originally posted by navinahun

Originally posted by afreshbegin

Wonderful update dear...Smile

Tumhare last dialogue ne hamari raaton ki neend churaliya...Wink

Uday - I want to sleep with you!

Is dialogue ko sunne keliye kaan tharas gaye the..

ab tho next weekend thak hamara haal aisa hoga..Day Dreaming


 
Thank you!
Dear- not only u ; UDAY also has lost his sleep after that line!!!

Haaye matlab woh doonon poori raat ek kamre mein sooyenge nahi toh kya karenge? jaldi update karke baathavonaWink
 
Bacha...sabr ka phal meetha hota hai...
Thora intezer karo,
Saturday Ya Sunday...sab raaz khul jayenge!
SPOILER:  maybe,  they'll talk all night...Shocked.
                     maybe,  they'll play Dumb-charades...Confused
                     maybe,  they'll play Ludo...Confused
                     maybe, they'll plot Jai's murder Big smile
 
WAIT & WATCH...
LOL


oye Angryyehi sab karaake mera dil math todna Broken Heart

woh pehle waali planning haina

The storm in the room; will be more ELECTRIC than the storm outside.

he he yahi karaan haan mein chup chap intezaar karoongi update ka par mein aisi raah dekh rahi hoon iskaDay Dreaming

Waitin for ur update dear...


 
Oh Sweetheart...You are really making me laugh!!!
It seems u already know what's gonna happen...
BUT u know what:
I can imagine them sitting on the bed & planning Jai's murder...
YEAH...I think I'm gonna change the track a bit  to this 1...

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Posted: 04 September 2012 at 10:48am | IP Logged
Originally posted by maasoom2

i just read your all chapters and i just love them they are awesome, fantabulous and vry romantic...
actually i m a silent reader but after reading ur ff i couldn't control myself by expressing my view...
i m a die hard fan of maanveer... just luv ur ff...
pls pls pls cont soon...
waiting eagerly 4 ur next chapter...
 
Hi  maasoom2...PLEASE LET ME KNOW YOUR REAL NAME!!!
I'd love to converse with u as a friend...not by calling u your username.
 
Firstly...WELCOME TO THE FORUM
    &     WELCOME TO MY WORLD!!!
I've notived that this is your first post...I feel honoured .THANK U .
 
I'm very happy that you  love my work...
U are very generous with your compliments...
I appreciate it!
 
I hope  that in future...you will continue giving me your precious time and valuable  comments...DON'T GO BACK TO BEING A SILENT READER!!!
 
Next chappy will be available this weekend...
SHALL I JOIN U TO MY PM LIST???
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Posted: 04 September 2012 at 10:54am | IP Logged
Originally posted by navinahun

Originally posted by afreshbegin

Originally posted by navinahun

Originally posted by afreshbegin

Wonderful update dear...Smile

Tumhare last dialogue ne hamari raaton ki neend churaliya...Wink

Uday - I want to sleep with you!

Is dialogue ko sunne keliye kaan tharas gaye the..

ab tho next weekend thak hamara haal aisa hoga..Day Dreaming


 
Thank you!
Dear- not only u ; UDAY also has lost his sleep after that line!!!

Haaye matlab woh doonon poori raat ek kamre mein sooyenge nahi toh kya karenge? jaldi update karke baathavonaWink
 
Bacha...sabr ka phal meetha hota hai...
Thora intezer karo,
Saturday Ya Sunday...sab raaz khul jayenge!
SPOILER:  maybe,  they'll talk all night...Shocked.
                     maybe,  they'll play Dumb-charades...Confused
                     maybe,  they'll play Ludo...Confused
                     maybe, they'll plot Jai's murder Big smile
 
WAIT & WATCH...
LOL




\
hahahahahahahah 


maybe,  they'll talk all night...Shocked.
                     maybe,  they'll play Dumb-charades...Confused
                     maybe,  they'll play Ludo...Confused
                     maybe, they'll plot Jai's murder Big smile
thise lines cracked me up ROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFL
 





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Posted: 04 September 2012 at 11:00am | IP Logged
Originally posted by vampire12345678

Originally posted by navinahun

Originally posted by afreshbegin

Originally posted by navinahun

Originally posted by afreshbegin

Wonderful update dear...Smile

Tumhare last dialogue ne hamari raaton ki neend churaliya...Wink

Uday - I want to sleep with you!

Is dialogue ko sunne keliye kaan tharas gaye the..

ab tho next weekend thak hamara haal aisa hoga..Day Dreaming


 
Thank you!
Dear- not only u ; UDAY also has lost his sleep after that line!!!

Haaye matlab woh doonon poori raat ek kamre mein sooyenge nahi toh kya karenge? jaldi update karke baathavonaWink
 
Bacha...sabr ka phal meetha hota hai...
Thora intezer karo,
Saturday Ya Sunday...sab raaz khul jayenge!
SPOILER:  maybe,  they'll talk all night...Shocked.
                     maybe,  they'll play Dumb-charades...Confused
                     maybe,  they'll play Ludo...Confused
                     maybe, they'll plot Jai's murder Big smile
 
WAIT & WATCH...
LOL




\
hahahahahahahah 


maybe,  they'll talk all night...Shocked.
                     maybe,  they'll play Dumb-charades...Confused
                     maybe,  they'll play Ludo...Confused
                     maybe, they'll plot Jai's murder Big smile
thise lines cracked me up ROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFL
 





 
Okay Saira...IF YOUR'E  DONE ...
STOP LAUGHING & GET OFF THE FLOOR!!!
I really like the Jai's murder idea...I think I'm gonna go with that!
I KNOW YOU WILL SUPPORT ME 100%

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