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MANVEER FF : The journey of a wife... (Book 1) (Page 18)

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Posted: 03 September 2012 at 8:50am | IP Logged
Originally posted by SACHIKO123

It was awesome.I think after wedding Manyatas name would be Yuvrani Manyata Devi like in the serial DS name was Mrinalini Devi & Manyatas moms name was Komal Devi.After marriage the surname of the females changes from Kumari to Devi & they have mentioned it in the serial too.nice update.:-)
 
Thanx 4 the compliment Dear...
& thanx 4 correcting me! I really had no idea BUT will remember in future!
You see HINDI is my 3rd official language...Even though it's my Mother -tongue!
 
I hope my error doesn't put u off reading in future...

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Posted: 03 September 2012 at 9:04am | IP Logged
Originally posted by lilybabes

beautifully written Navina 
loved it 
poor Manyata i feel so sorry for her 
Unnati is back in picture 
yaay i always thought tat dey vud hav a lovely Bhabhi -Nanad relationship
i hope Manyata finds de perfect gift for our perfect UV 
Divorce... NO ye anarth nahi hona chahiye ... kabhi nahi  

and OMG de last line almost killed me 
 .Uday - I want to sleep with you!

eager to read abt UV s reaction 
patha nahi bedroom me kya hoga 
mayb M wil wish him as de clock strikes 12 


thanks for de PM and will b waiting for de next update
 
  
Thanx 4 the compliment.
Unnati & M would've had a wonderful relationship...IF ONLY THEY SHOWED IT TO US!!!
M will give him the PERFECT GIFT...u have to stay tuned!
 
SHALL I CHANGE THE LAST LINE ...I DON'T WANT TO KILL ANYBODY!
 
Maybe M will wish him at 12Big smileor maybe she'll sleep through itSleepy...WHO KNOWS?
 
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Posted: 03 September 2012 at 12:19pm | IP Logged
i just read your all chapters and i just love them they are awesome, fantabulous and vry romantic...
actually i m a silent reader but after reading ur ff i couldn't control myself by expressing my view...
i m a die hard fan of maanveer... just luv ur ff...
pls pls pls cont soon...
waiting eagerly 4 ur next chapter...

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Posted: 04 September 2012 at 6:46am | IP Logged
wow that was an awesome update...the way manyatha asked uday if she can sleep wit him was cute n funny...donno how uday reacts... waiting for ur update...when will u update ? pls ckear off there misunderstandings...from now no more misunderstandings ir tensions about thie relationship ...pls ...waitinggg for ur updateee

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Posted: 04 September 2012 at 6:55am | IP Logged
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Originally posted by fia21

FANTASTIC chapter Navina Clap
I cannot even begin to tell you how much I loved it. This was honestly so refreshing and cute. Unnati-Manyata bonding over Uday's surprise party and Manyata's confession was adorable. I just love Unnati. You reminded me a lot about how she used to be in the show. And the misunderstanding between Uday and Manyata was very well handled. A part of me felt bad for Uday, and the other part of me felt bad for Manyata. The last part was really interesting. Especially when Manyata says Uday - I want to sleep with you! She might want to rephrase that LOL
Loved the update to bits. Update the next part soon. Pretty please! Embarrassed
 
THANK  U SO ,SO MUCH FIA...I really do appreciate it. U know, apart from Manveer...my favourite character was Unnati...SO; I had to dedicate a full chapter to her. Please don't feel bad for Uday or Manyata...once they reconcile- they'll be making up for lost timeWinkWinkWink.
 
The next part is the Consummation chappy ...it requires a lot of thought, so it will only be available next weekend. So;  "pretty please"   EVEN WITH A CHERRY ON THE TOP...is not gonna work!!!


Mine too. Unnati's character was like a breath of fresh air. I always loved her scenes, especially her bonding with Uday. It was so pure and genuine!
Oh man but I am going to be busy on the weekend, I won't even be able to update my own SS Ouch
Sigh I guess I'll just have to wait then Embarrassed

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Posted: 04 September 2012 at 7:47am | IP Logged
Originally posted by fia21

Originally posted by navinahun

Originally posted by fia21

FANTASTIC chapter Navina Clap
I cannot even begin to tell you how much I loved it. This was honestly so refreshing and cute. Unnati-Manyata bonding over Uday's surprise party and Manyata's confession was adorable. I just love Unnati. You reminded me a lot about how she used to be in the show. And the misunderstanding between Uday and Manyata was very well handled. A part of me felt bad for Uday, and the other part of me felt bad for Manyata. The last part was really interesting. Especially when Manyata says Uday - I want to sleep with you! She might want to rephrase that LOL
Loved the update to bits. Update the next part soon. Pretty please! Embarrassed
 
THANK  U SO ,SO MUCH FIA...I really do appreciate it. U know, apart from Manveer...my favourite character was Unnati...SO; I had to dedicate a full chapter to her. Please don't feel bad for Uday or Manyata...once they reconcile- they'll be making up for lost timeWinkWinkWink.
 
The next part is the Consummation chappy ...it requires a lot of thought, so it will only be available next weekend. So;  "pretty please"   EVEN WITH A CHERRY ON THE TOP...is not gonna work!!!


Mine too. Unnati's character was like a breath of fresh air. I always loved her scenes, especially her bonding with Uday. It was so pure and genuine!
Oh man but I am going to be busy on the weekend, I won't even be able to update my own SS Ouch
Sigh I guess I'll just have to wait then Embarrassed
 
Oh no Fia...U won't be updatingCryCryCry...I'm So SAD!
I do understand u Will be busy...BUT, please take time out to read my update.
I will be looking forward to your review of it !
Hopefully it will be UP TO THE MARK!!!
 
 
 

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Posted: 04 September 2012 at 7:53am | IP Logged
Originally posted by princessvishaka

awsum update navina Big smile
feeling bad 4 manayta...bt happy about rebonding of manayta and unnati and lve the last line of chappy 
plz update asap and thankx 4 pm

 
Thanx 4 the compliment.
Don't feel bad for M...she'll have her happy ending!
Manyata & Unnati  are adorable..they're the PERFECT BHABI-NANAD.
Sweetheart, everybody loves the last line...EVEN UDAYWinkWinkWink.
Will update Sunday, if not Saturday!
 
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Posted: 04 September 2012 at 8:02am | IP Logged
Originally posted by navinahun

 
Oh no Fia...U won't be updatingCryCryCry...I'm So SAD!
I do understand u Will be busy...BUT, please take time out to read my update.
I will be looking forward to your review of it !
Hopefully it will be UP TO THE MARK!!!
 
 
 


Yea I won't be Ouch
I will definitely take time out to read your update as I'll be keeping my cell phone with me during the function Wink . I just won't be able to post my comment right away though. And I am sure it will be fantastic. Eeep I am so curious to read it Embarrassed

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