Dekha Ek Khwaab

India-Forums

   
Dekha Ek Khwaab
Dekha Ek Khwaab

MANVEER FF : The journey of a wife... (Book 1) (Page 16)

vampire12345678 IF-Rockerz
vampire12345678
vampire12345678

Joined: 08 April 2012
Posts: 5836

Posted: 01 September 2012 at 1:56pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by navinahun

Originally posted by vampire12345678

sorry sorry for the late reply i was not home 
K now coming back to the chapter it was lovely i loved unnati she rocked as usual and manyata heart broken was so bad but she is smart and i know she would work her way i loved the line Uday - I want to sleep with you! that was cool and i loved the precap name please update soon and a super hot chapter just the way i would like u know my style rightWinkWink please update soon and thanks for the pm the writing rockedThumbs Up
 
 
No SAIRA  ...Dont apologise...you are not late. 
Glad u enjoyed the chapter...
The last  line was just for u...Happy that u liked it!
I will try to make next part HOT...only 1 problem:
                                                         I GOT SOME VERY YOUNG READERS...
                                                         I DONT WANT TO CORRUPT THEM!!!
 

they will get corrupt sooner or laterLOL and in this forum everyone is above 14 so u should write as hot as u can and i guarantee everyone will love itWink  and please update soon

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

...navina...

...navina... IF-Stunnerz
...navina...
...navina...

Joined: 17 December 2011
Posts: 35970

Posted: 01 September 2012 at 2:04pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by vampire12345678

Originally posted by navinahun

Originally posted by vampire12345678

sorry sorry for the late reply i was not home 
K now coming back to the chapter it was lovely i loved unnati she rocked as usual and manyata heart broken was so bad but she is smart and i know she would work her way i loved the line Uday - I want to sleep with you! that was cool and i loved the precap name please update soon and a super hot chapter just the way i would like u know my style rightWinkWink please update soon and thanks for the pm the writing rockedThumbs Up
 
 
No SAIRA  ...Dont apologise...you are not late. 
Glad u enjoyed the chapter...
The last  line was just for u...Happy that u liked it!
I will try to make next part HOT...only 1 problem:
                                                         I GOT SOME VERY YOUNG READERS...
                                                         I DONT WANT TO CORRUPT THEM!!!
 

they will get corrupt sooner or laterLOL and in this forum everyone is above 14 so u should write as hot as u can and i guarantee everyone will love itWink  and please update soon
 
Okay I'll try...but, what  if I get kicked out of the forum???
 
vampire12345678 IF-Rockerz
vampire12345678
vampire12345678

Joined: 08 April 2012
Posts: 5836

Posted: 01 September 2012 at 2:06pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by navinahun

Originally posted by vampire12345678

Originally posted by navinahun

Originally posted by vampire12345678

sorry sorry for the late reply i was not home 
K now coming back to the chapter it was lovely i loved unnati she rocked as usual and manyata heart broken was so bad but she is smart and i know she would work her way i loved the line Uday - I want to sleep with you! that was cool and i loved the precap name please update soon and a super hot chapter just the way i would like u know my style rightWinkWink please update soon and thanks for the pm the writing rockedThumbs Up
 
 
No SAIRA  ...Dont apologise...you are not late. 
Glad u enjoyed the chapter...
The last  line was just for u...Happy that u liked it!
I will try to make next part HOT...only 1 problem:
                                                         I GOT SOME VERY YOUNG READERS...
                                                         I DONT WANT TO CORRUPT THEM!!!
 

they will get corrupt sooner or laterLOL and in this forum everyone is above 14 so u should write as hot as u can and i guarantee everyone will love itWink  and please update soon
 
Okay I'll try...but, what  if I get kicked out of the forum???
 
come on u would not be kicked have u read my FF if i am not kicked then u would not be also and r u planning to write a hot scenes more advanced then mineWink (i wish the answer is yesLOL)

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

...navina...

...navina... IF-Stunnerz
...navina...
...navina...

Joined: 17 December 2011
Posts: 35970

Posted: 01 September 2012 at 2:17pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by vampire12345678

Originally posted by navinahun

Originally posted by vampire12345678

Originally posted by navinahun

Originally posted by vampire12345678

sorry sorry for the late reply i was not home 
K now coming back to the chapter it was lovely i loved unnati she rocked as usual and manyata heart broken was so bad but she is smart and i know she would work her way i loved the line Uday - I want to sleep with you! that was cool and i loved the precap name please update soon and a super hot chapter just the way i would like u know my style rightWinkWink please update soon and thanks for the pm the writing rockedThumbs Up
 
 
No SAIRA  ...Dont apologise...you are not late. 
Glad u enjoyed the chapter...
The last  line was just for u...Happy that u liked it!
I will try to make next part HOT...only 1 problem:
                                                         I GOT SOME VERY YOUNG READERS...
                                                         I DONT WANT TO CORRUPT THEM!!!
 

they will get corrupt sooner or laterLOL and in this forum everyone is above 14 so u should write as hot as u can and i guarantee everyone will love itWink  and please update soon
 
Okay I'll try...but, what  if I get kicked out of the forum???
 
come on u would not be kicked have u read my FF if i am not kicked then u would not be also and r u planning to write a hot scenes more advanced then mineWink (i wish the answer is yesLOL)
 
 
Okay... here's what I'm gonna do...
I'll make it HOT but I'll keep it clean.
Then in my 24september update...I'll make it X-rated just for you!!! TEEK HAI?
 
 
Mariam12 Senior Member
Mariam12
Mariam12

Joined: 05 March 2012
Posts: 209

Posted: 01 September 2012 at 2:35pm | IP Logged
awsum update navina Big smile
feeling bad 4 manayta...bt happy about rebonding of manayta and unnati and lve the last line of chappy 
plz update asap and thankx 4 pm

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

...navina...

vampire12345678 IF-Rockerz
vampire12345678
vampire12345678

Joined: 08 April 2012
Posts: 5836

Posted: 01 September 2012 at 2:37pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by navinahun

Originally posted by vampire12345678

Originally posted by navinahun

Originally posted by vampire12345678

Originally posted by navinahun

Originally posted by vampire12345678

sorry sorry for the late reply i was not home 
K now coming back to the chapter it was lovely i loved unnati she rocked as usual and manyata heart broken was so bad but she is smart and i know she would work her way i loved the line Uday - I want to sleep with you! that was cool and i loved the precap name please update soon and a super hot chapter just the way i would like u know my style rightWinkWink please update soon and thanks for the pm the writing rockedThumbs Up
 
 
No SAIRA  ...Dont apologise...you are not late. 
Glad u enjoyed the chapter...
The last  line was just for u...Happy that u liked it!
I will try to make next part HOT...only 1 problem:
                                                         I GOT SOME VERY YOUNG READERS...
                                                         I DONT WANT TO CORRUPT THEM!!!
 

 

they will get corrupt sooner or laterLOL and in this forum everyone is above 14 so u should write as hot as u can and i guarantee everyone will love itWink  and please update soon
 
Okay I'll try...but, what  if I get kicked out of the forum???
 
come on u would not be kicked have u read my FF if i am not kicked then u would not be also and r u planning to write a hot scenes more advanced then mineWink (i wish the answer is yesLOL)
 
 
Okay... here's what I'm gonna do...
I'll make it HOT but I'll keep it clean.
Then in my 24september update...I'll make it X-rated just for you!!! TEEK HAI?
 
 
hot but clean that is a tough thing to doLOL on 24 september is my birthday so  i will take  the update a birthday giftLOL

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

...navina...

afreshbegin Groupbie
afreshbegin
afreshbegin

Joined: 19 July 2012
Posts: 174

Posted: 01 September 2012 at 8:23pm | IP Logged
Wonderful update dear...Smile

Tumhare last dialogue ne hamari raaton ki neend churaliya...Wink

Uday - I want to sleep with you!

Is dialogue ko sunne keliye kaan tharas gaye the..

ab tho next weekend thak hamara haal aisa hoga..Day Dreaming




Edited by afreshbegin - 01 September 2012 at 8:24pm

The following 2 member(s) liked the above post:

vampire12345678...navina...

anushruthi Goldie
anushruthi
anushruthi

Joined: 11 May 2012
Posts: 1711

Posted: 02 September 2012 at 1:15am | IP Logged
beautifully written Navina 
loved it 
poor Manyata i feel so sorry for her 
Unnati is back in picture 
yaay i always thought tat dey vud hav a lovely Bhabhi -Nanad relationship
i hope Manyata finds de perfect gift for our perfect UV 
Divorce... NO ye anarth nahi hona chahiye ... kabhi nahi  

and OMG de last line almost killed me 
 .Uday - I want to sleep with you!

eager to read abt UV s reaction 
patha nahi bedroom me kya hoga 
mayb M wil wish him as de clock strikes 12 


thanks for de PM and will b waiting for de next update
 

The following 2 member(s) liked the above post:

vampire12345678...navina...

Go to top

Related Topics

  Topics Author Replies Views Last Post
MANVEER~MY MADE IMAGINARY EPIZ.Pt21/22 PG 51-15/11/14

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 51 52

Author: MAHI1198   Replies: 409   Views: 55607

MAHI1198 409 55607 04 July 2015 at 8:15pm by arisha_mv
ManVeer FF:~~We Are One~~[CH-18-pg-153] 30/03/2014

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 155 156

Author: --Zinay--   Replies: 1240   Views: 116813

--Zinay-- 1240 116813 08 June 2015 at 4:43am by Dimple.K
Behind the Mask - ManVeer FF [Ch. 23, P. 36]

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 37 38

Author: simisworld   Replies: 297   Views: 50969

simisworld 297 50969 15 January 2015 at 3:07am by Twinkle_alisha
WITHOUT PAIN NO LOVE~~MANVEER SS~Prt24 newpg 78

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 80 81

Author: MAHI1198   Replies: 646   Views: 65034

MAHI1198 646 65034 24 November 2013 at 2:55am by Nash..
Manveer Playlist for Manveer Dreams!!!

Author: LizBennet   Replies: 9   Views: 2164

LizBennet 9 2164 03 April 2012 at 9:15am by LizBennet

Forum Quick Jump

Forum Category / Channels
Forums

Dekha Ek Khwaab Topic Index

  • Please login to check your Last 10 Topics posted

Check these Celebrity also

Disclaimer: All Logos and Pictures of various Channels, Shows, Artistes, Media Houses, Companies, Brands etc. belong to their respective owners, and are used to merely visually identify the Channels, Shows, Companies, Brands, etc. to the viewer. Incase of any issue please contact the webmaster.

Popular Channels :
Star Plus | Zee TV | Sony TV | Colors TV | SAB TV | Life OK

Quick Links :
Top 100 TV Celebrities | Top 100 Bollywood Celebs | About Us | Contact Us | Advertise | Forum Index