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MANVEER FF : The journey of a wife... (Book 1) (Page 155)

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Posted: 15 December 2012 at 8:45am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Softy17

so much heart touching updateCryCry
it brought tears in my eyesCryCryCry
it was so emotional
U r really a great n amazing writer
loved the little manveer scene
update was emotional and very well written
update soon
 
 
So sorry about making u cry PallaviOuch.
 
Thanx for the compliments Embarrassed!!!

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Posted: 15 December 2012 at 8:48am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ...navina...

Originally posted by Sunshinegirll

omg navina.. such an emotional chapter...CryCry
beautifully written navina..
hmmm i hate this aryan... he ruined manveerAngry
the video was so damn emotional..
showing uday's extreme/intense love for manyata...

one thought though: manyata shudnt have commited suicide.. i dont think uday wud've liked that... not just that suicide s wat cowards do.. i kno it must be extremely difficult and living hell for manyata but who knows she might have even been pregnant with udays kid when she decided to end her life..

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hehehe the first time i dint check after drip drip..
waiting for the second bookSmileSmile
 
 
Thanx Sow  Hug  .
 
That recording was the most difficult thing I had to write for this SS.  It made me very emotionalCry.
 
Manyata will be saved  ...  so no need to worry about her.
 
2nd book ...  I'm not sure about that any moreConfused.  I don't want to start that especially when the fate of our forum is unknownOuch!!!
 



Cry
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please dont say things like these... want you to start writing the new book..
i am sure this is what all the other readers would say..
it wont close.. and even if it closes lets find other alternatives like posting in fan fiction forum n sending pms.. or if u hate that idea.. we can start our own private facebook group where all the writers can post their work and we readers can commentSmile


Edited by Sunshinegirll - 15 December 2012 at 8:46am

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Posted: 15 December 2012 at 8:58am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Sunshinegirll

Originally posted by ...navina...

Originally posted by Sunshinegirll

omg navina.. such an emotional chapter...CryCry
beautifully written navina..
hmmm i hate this aryan... he ruined manveerAngry
the video was so damn emotional..
showing uday's extreme/intense love for manyata...

one thought though: manyata shudnt have commited suicide.. i dont think uday wud've liked that... not just that suicide s wat cowards do.. i kno it must be extremely difficult and living hell for manyata but who knows she might have even been pregnant with udays kid when she decided to end her life..

*edited..

hehehe the first time i dint check after drip drip..
waiting for the second bookSmileSmile
 
 
Thanx Sow  Hug  .
 
That recording was the most difficult thing I had to write for this SS.  It made me very emotionalCry.
 
Manyata will be saved  ...  so no need to worry about her.
 
2nd book ...  I'm not sure about that any moreConfused.  I don't want to start that especially when the fate of our forum is unknownOuch!!!
 



Cry
Cry
Cry
Cry
Cry
Cry

please dont say things like these... want you to start writing the new book..
i am sure this is what all the other readers would say..
it wont close.. and even if it closes lets find other alternatives like posting in fan fiction forum n sending pms.. or if u hate that idea.. we can start our own private facebook group where all the writers can post their work and we readers can commentSmile
 
 
Sow  ...  this is THE ONLY FORUM I HAVE EVER BEEN INVOLVED WITH  , I have no idea about this "fan fiction forum"Confused.  About face book  ...  I'M STILL THINKING ABOUT IT!!!
 
But Gargi has assured me that we still have 3 months ...   so , in that 3 months - I WILL START & END  book 2  ...  and give Manveer their happy endingBig smile
 
So  ...  NO NEED TO CRY!!!
 

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Posted: 15 December 2012 at 9:02am | IP Logged
Originally posted by milhan

that was anth...DancingHug
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u left me speechless!!!!!!Shocked
bravo navina!Clap
i am hell sure the next book is seriously going to be more mind blasting!
come back with a big bang! and soon plz
thnx for pm 
totally luvd it!
 
 
Milhan  ...  u are the first person that's happy with that endingShocked!!!
 
Thanks for the lovely commentsBig smile.
 
I'll start Book 2 very soon,
welcome for the PmSmile.
 
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Posted: 15 December 2012 at 9:05am | IP Logged
Navi dont you ever think of stopping ur ss
if you dont write then i wont update anymore
just joining ur league
do write pls pls i will wait eagerly on monday for book 2

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Posted: 15 December 2012 at 9:09am | IP Logged
Originally posted by vampire12345678


i have liked it already 
I saw  ...  thanks SairaBig smile!!!
haha u got that threat from zina dont worry i got it too and i updated my ff Wink
i creid and sameer came in and he thought i am crying because i am over joyed to see him
and then i showed him ur update and he read it and i forgot to mention it in my first comment because i was crying he said it is outstanding and u are a very good writer 
Tell Sameer : "THANKS FOR THE COMPLIMENT!!!"
and then he thought i was crying imagining him as UDAYVEER and me as manyata and i had to burst him bubble by saying i was crying because of manveer lolz
so ur update created so much confusion 
Oh God  ...  I'm getting a head-ache reading this SAMRA (SAMEER + SAIRA)  love-storyOuchLOL!!!
haha u should grateful i know what will happen otherwise my threats would be super badEvil Smile
I know   ...  & I am gratefulWink.

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Posted: 15 December 2012 at 9:23am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ...navina...

Originally posted by vampire12345678




i have liked it already

<font color="#ff0000">I saw ... thanks SairaBig smile!!!</font>

haha u got that threat from zina dont worry i got it too and i updated my ffWink

i creid and sameer came in and he thought i am crying because i am over joyed to see him

and then i showed him ur update and he read it and i forgot tomentionit in my first comment because i was crying he said it is outstanding and u are a very good writer

<font color="#ff0000">Tell Sameer : "THANKS FOR THE COMPLIMENT!!!" </font>

and then he thought i was crying imagining him asUDAYVEERand me as manyata and i had to burst him bubble by saying i was crying because of manveer lolz

so ur update created so much confusion

<font color="#ff0000">Oh God ... I'm getting a head-ache reading this SAMRA (SAMEER + SAIRA) love-storyOuchLOL!!!</font>

haha u should grateful i know what will happen otherwise my threats would be super badEvil Smile

<font color="#ff0000">I know ... & I am gratefulWink.</font>




Sorry navi when I start I don't stop

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Posted: 15 December 2012 at 9:26am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ...navina...

Originally posted by DEK_girl

i felt so sad reading itCry...but u r bringing uv back and u r promising its a happy ending so its ok now!
uv in a new avatar...major veer singhEmbarrassed i am already drooling..LOL..and i m totally up for a new lovestory..Thumbs Up...omg uv's yaaddash will be gone...nd manyata will help him in remembering everything yeaaay!!plz update really soon..can't wait!
 
 
Awww  ... so sorry about that DearOuch.  Yes  ...  it will be A VERY HAPPY ENDINGWink.
 
Major Virendra Singh Mallik  OR  Major Veer MallikBig smile.
 
Uday's yaadash will be gone Shocked   ...   where did u get that fromConfused???
 
Thanks for the comment Big smile.



uday's yaddash will not be gone??ohh srry..i just assumed..becoz if that doesnt happen then uday will return to our dear manyata as uday! nd wer will major veer mallik come frm then??ohh i m puzzled now...

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