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MANVEER FF : The journey of a wife... (Book 1) (Page 153)

...navina... IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 13 December 2012 at 11:22am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sweet_gargi

No this can't be the last chapter...Plz bring back Manveer..I can't believe this..I am as stubborn as UV's princess...

ANd when the hell did u make the poll of bringing back UV...Angry..I didn't see itOuch..Sorry thatswhy didn't comment..

Plz bring back Manveer...Plz plz plz

Plz plz plz
Gargi Dear  ...  it's the last chapter of THIS bookApprove.  The story will continue in the next book in a new threadBig smile.
I didn't make a poll  ...  I asked every1 to press the "like " button   and cast their vote in that manner.
Okay  ...  STOP BEGGINGLOL  ...  I'll bring them dackWink!!!

...navina... IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 13 December 2012 at 11:29am | IP Logged
Originally posted by livvy

That was so emotional plz continue don't end it like this
I'm not ending it HERE LivvyShocked  ...  it will continue in the next bookBig smile.
Originally posted by saneha85

hey navina piz also pm me once u start book 2

nice update
Sure Dear  ... no problem!
Thank you  Hug  .
...navina... IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 13 December 2012 at 12:30pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by swetsurati

OMG...navi dear u made me cry i was crying like hell..i never cryCry but u made it possoible aur woh bhi aise story padh ke aur movie dekh ke toh bilkul nahi roti but iss update ki baat hi alag thi it was sooo...emotiol i feel like this all happen to me...plzzz...bring my uday back plzzz...ooohhh...gosh 4.2 when manyata play uday's CD it was min. Uday ne manyata se ye sab kaha iss ka matlab uday janata tha k woh marne wala hai?plzzz...bring him backCryCryCryCryCryCry...plzzz...and veer agar manyata aur veerAngry ki jodi banane wali ho toh bhul one can match yuvraj udayveer standard plzzz...dnt sepret manveer plzzz...plzzz...start book 2 soon cnt wait for next part   thanx for PM...
Sweta  ...  I made everybody cry  ...  NOW U KNOW - I can make water spring out of a dessert even Evil Smile.
Uday suspected that "HIS TIME WAS NEAR" ...  that's why he made the disc.  I told you - UDAY WILL BE BACK  ...  but it will take some time for him to come back to ManyataShocked.  There will be a MINI story between Veer & ManyataEmbarrassed  ...  U WILL LIKE IT!!!
If our forum survives  ...   book 2 will come on 17 DecemberBig smile.
Welcome for the PMSmile.
  Hug   Hug  .
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Posted: 13 December 2012 at 12:36pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by anushruthi

loved it 
it was so emotional 
Manyata's handling of Mrs.Verma was good
her realeasing Murari was understandable 
memories , UV's lock combination , de CD evrything was awesome 
this chapter touched my heart 
I guess Manyata wil b saved by sum1 
Whn de doctors save her dey m8 discover she is pregnant 
UV's child m8 bcum her reason 2 live 
Just my guesses 
will eagerly wait for book 2 
Thank you Anu  Hug.
Mrs Verma actually needed a slapAngry  ...  too bad Manyata could not do thatOuch.  Thanx for picking out those scenes   ...   I put a lot of hard-work in those parts - IT NEEDED TO BE PERFECT!!!   Yep ...  Manyata will be saved.  She's my main character  - I CAN't LET ANYTHING HAPPEN TO HERWink.  Good guesses Clap
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Posted: 13 December 2012 at 12:41pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by princessSonia

NAHI NAHI NAHI NAHI!!!!!!!!!!!!! CryCry
No No No No no
NAvi di plz dnt say tht dis is d last chapter!!!!!!!!!!

Plz UDay ko vapis laooo
plz plz plz plz

Hum sab  Uday ko BOHOT MISS kar rahe hai

nw enough of my nautanki 
d update was really heart touching !!!!!!!!!!!
  Heart Heart  Heart 

luv u navi di
Sonia dear  ...  calm down.  This is the last chapter for this book.  I WILL continue in a new bookBig smile.
Uday wapis ayenge  ...  lekin abhi nahiUnhappy.  Main bhi aur Manyata bhi , usse miss kar rahi hainCry!!!
Sorry  ...   u cried so muchOuch.
Love u Sonia  Hug  .
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Posted: 14 December 2012 at 3:04am | IP Logged
too good story...loved my fav list...but last 2 parts were very sad Unhappy 
thanx to zina for giving me link of this story...pls do pm me when u continue it 

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chitra_rao IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 14 December 2012 at 8:29am | IP Logged
have I ever told you how much I love your chapter titles, they are so very apt to the chapter Smile
And both the chapters were amazing ClapClap. You are one beautiful writer NaviClapClap, u put life in ur words. every scene written out there was like a slide show playing in front of my eyes, Manyata compliaing that she has almost forgotten how he smells, and soon she will forget how he looks, OMG that was so heart pricking Confused

I have to give it to you for creating such a wonderful character like Manyata, I mean in ur ff, she has evolved so beautifully from a immature chrysalis to a beautiful butterfly. she has to the T proved that she is Mrs Udayveer singh ClapClap. The way she blasted the Maharaj and Yudhveer singh for breaking the rishta, and the much deserved coldness with which she treated Akash's mom was so outstanding ClapClap.

Navi in this update you have also merged some wonderful flashbacks of our favorite show , the valentine's day gift was mentioned, murari was mentioned which even the CVS had forgotten.I mean this chapter was really like tying all the loose ends, so apt to the chapterSmile.I liked how she went through the wedding album cursing her stupidity for ruining their best day in life, the childhood photo album was fabulous, and the flashback scene of his kiss was even more heart warming EmbarrassedEmbarrassed.

The CD scene just made mt heart sink in my chestOuch, It was so well written, so M has tried committing suicide , I so want the baby to step in so that she atleast has a reason to live from here on.

I read ur index navi, u r introducing a look-alike of UV, I dont know what u have in-stores like that look-alike being UV loosing his memory and M all going out there to patao him and get his memory back. I mean it would be so much of a role reversal right before it was UV dying for M's love and attention and now it will be M lolLOL, but I cannot take even a look-alike to be in the place of UV if it is not UV. After creating a gem of a character like UV-Manayata I cannot see a look-alike in place of UV.But whatever way u r taking the story, I'm on for it Smile.

Navi u must have already heard about DEK closing , please either start ur second book in the fan fiction forum or start it here and talk to the mods and move the thread to the fan-fiction forum, but please dont stop writing navi. I so want to see the second book unfold . thank u for giving us such a wonderful book 1, waiting for the journey to continue in book 2 Smile

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Posted: 14 December 2012 at 11:41am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Sunshinegirll

omg navina.. such an emotional chapter...CryCry
beautifully written navina..
hmmm i hate this aryan... he ruined manveerAngry
the video was so damn emotional..
showing uday's extreme/intense love for manyata...

one thought though: manyata shudnt have commited suicide.. i dont think uday wud've liked that... not just that suicide s wat cowards do.. i kno it must be extremely difficult and living hell for manyata but who knows she might have even been pregnant with udays kid when she decided to end her life..


hehehe the first time i dint check after drip drip..
waiting for the second bookSmileSmile
Thanx Sow  Hug  .
That recording was the most difficult thing I had to write for this SS.  It made me very emotionalCry.
Manyata will be saved  ...  so no need to worry about her.
2nd book ...  I'm not sure about that any moreConfused.  I don't want to start that especially when the fate of our forum is unknownOuch!!!

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