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MANVEER FF : The journey of a wife... (Book 1) (Page 15)

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Posted: 01 September 2012 at 12:45pm | IP Logged
i am feeling so hurt seeing m hrtbrken like dis!!!!!!!!! luved dat siblingwala dilaog!!!!!!!! nnati helping m out,soo sweeett!!!!!!!! udayy finally backk!!!!!!!! the last wa sbang on!!!!!! will be waitngg for the weekend!!!!!!!!!! Smile

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Posted: 01 September 2012 at 12:50pm | IP Logged
Loved it, loved it, loved it, loved it, loved it... and loved it some more. Plzz make the next update soon... this was just fantastic.

 Edited:Can't wait to read more... plzz make the next update as fast as you can... well, I can understand that it will require some good thought process to make the next chappy a memorable one... so will gladly wait till the next weekend!!Smile
Seeing Manyata reciprocating Uday's feelings is always a pleasant change to read about!


Edited by mahi0809 - 01 September 2012 at 1:01pm

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Posted: 01 September 2012 at 12:55pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by fia21

FANTASTIC chapter Navina Clap
I cannot even begin to tell you how much I loved it. This was honestly so refreshing and cute. Unnati-Manyata bonding over Uday's surprise party and Manyata's confession was adorable. I just love Unnati. You reminded me a lot about how she used to be in the show. And the misunderstanding between Uday and Manyata was very well handled. A part of me felt bad for Uday, and the other part of me felt bad for Manyata. The last part was really interesting. Especially when Manyata says Uday - I want to sleep with you! She might want to rephrase that LOL
Loved the update to bits. Update the next part soon. Pretty please! Embarrassed
 
THANK  U SO ,SO MUCH FIA...I really do appreciate it. U know, apart from Manveer...my favourite character was Unnati...SO; I had to dedicate a full chapter to her. Please don't feel bad for Uday or Manyata...once they reconcile- they'll be making up for lost timeWinkWinkWink.
 
The next part is the Consummation chappy ...it requires a lot of thought, so it will only be available next weekend. So;  "pretty please"   EVEN WITH A CHERRY ON THE TOP...is not gonna work!!!

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Posted: 01 September 2012 at 12:59pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by mahi0809

Loved it, loved it, loved it, loved it, loved it... and loved it some more. Plzz make the next update soon... this was just fantastic!
 
WOW Mahi, you loved it 6 times...which means I'm doomed.
In future HOW AM I GONNA TOP THIS CHAPPY FOR U TO LOVE IT 7 TIMES...
 
I think I should retire now!!!

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Posted: 01 September 2012 at 1:04pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by pia.raha

i am feeling so hurt seeing m hrtbrken like dis!!!!!!!!! luved dat siblingwala dilaog!!!!!!!! nnati helping m out,soo sweeett!!!!!!!! udayy finally backk!!!!!!!! the last wa sbang on!!!!!! will be waitngg for the weekend!!!!!!!!!! Smile
 
Dear, dont worry about M...she's a strong gal- & she ALWAYS GETS HER WAY!
 
I'm sure that everyone is waiting for next weekend (not only u)WinkWinkWink

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Posted: 01 September 2012 at 1:19pm | IP Logged
sorry sorry for the late reply i was not home 
K now coming back to the chapter it was lovely i loved unnati she rocked as usual and manyata heart broken was so bad but she is smart and i know she would work her way i loved the line Uday - I want to sleep with you! that was cool and i loved the precap name please update soon and a super hot chapter just the way i would like u know my style rightWinkWink please update soon and thanks for the pm the writing rockedThumbs Up

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Posted: 01 September 2012 at 1:28pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by swetsurati

Very niceee...awsomeee...brilliant...unnati and manyata scene was sooo...good...awww...poor manyata...reallly feel sooo...bad for her bichari kya soch rahi thi aur kya ho gayauday ko surprice party dnen wali thi lekin ushe hi divorse mil raha hai...last scene was intresting. Upadate soon thanx for PM.
 
Thank u Dear...Dont feel bad for M...
she deserves a bit of PAYBACK...Dont u think???
 
Let me guess...u are not really talking about the last scene...YOU ARE TALKING ABOUT THE LAST LINE-    RIGHT!
 
As for the pm..U ARE WELCOME...I made a special exception for u!!!

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Posted: 01 September 2012 at 1:52pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by vampire12345678

sorry sorry for the late reply i was not home 
K now coming back to the chapter it was lovely i loved unnati she rocked as usual and manyata heart broken was so bad but she is smart and i know she would work her way i loved the line Uday - I want to sleep with you! that was cool and i loved the precap name please update soon and a super hot chapter just the way i would like u know my style rightWinkWink please update soon and thanks for the pm the writing rockedThumbs Up
 
 
No SAIRA  ...Dont apologise...you are not late. 
Glad u enjoyed the chapter...
The last  line was just for u...Happy that u liked it!
I will try to make next part HOT...only 1 problem:
                                                         I GOT SOME VERY YOUNG READERS...
                                                         I DONT WANT TO CORRUPT THEM!!!
 

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