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MANVEER FF : The journey of a wife... (Book 1) (Page 147)

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Posted: 11 December 2012 at 11:41am | IP Logged
awww..i started crying :'(
plz make it nightmare of manyata..and start their happy life plz

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Posted: 11 December 2012 at 11:58am | IP Logged
Originally posted by huma12.

awsssmmm niviii its tooo emotinol
 
 
Thanx Huma  Hug  .
 
 
Originally posted by adventure_gurl

that was so sad please save Manyata and bring Udayveer back!
 
To see if Manyata gets saved  ...  u have to wait for BOOK 2.
Uday WILL be back  ...  but not so soonConfused.
 
 
 
 
Originally posted by malikmehreen95

awww..i started crying :'(
plz make it nightmare of manyata..and start their happy life plz
 
I also started crying while writing itOuch.
Sorry Dear - it's not a nightmare  ...  everything is REAL.


Edited by ...navina... - 11 December 2012 at 11:59am

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Posted: 11 December 2012 at 12:04pm | IP Logged
K navi I read the update
And I finished reading and sameer came in
And I hugged him and creid actually I am still in his embrace tears flowing my eyes
He is right here and I am crying and his consoling me and I am commenting
Btw he says HI
K coming to the update it is awesome super duper emotional
If I was not smart enough to get a rough idea about the plot
Then ur inboz would have being flooded
U and nira just make me cry
I look like an emtional fool infront my boyfreind because of u
Lol u write so beautufully
U can write everything
Hats offf
This update was awesome
Please I want the next update super soon
U rock
And loved the update
Sorry can't like I am using my phone
K bye can't write more of my nonsense sameer is here and he is seeeing me crying
U rock hats off
The update was FANTABLOUS and AWESOME

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Posted: 11 December 2012 at 12:10pm | IP Logged
cant wait for book 2...when is "soon" :D

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Posted: 11 December 2012 at 12:19pm | IP Logged
Awww navina u made me cry plzzz bring back my manveer back to eachother soon plzzzx...

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Posted: 11 December 2012 at 12:35pm | IP Logged

awsome update dear. its was so emotionalSmile

sorry couldn't comment earlier as i was so tired that i felt asleep
got up some time back and the first thing that i did was read your ss
then i typed a reply in my phone and then it didn't get posted so iam trying with my laptop
enough of my nonsence
the update was sooo emotional
the scene wre udays will was read and manyats emotions was so touching
the way she sat in udays study and remembered himCry
why did you bring akash mother here?Angry uday may be kind but
i am just like manyata i just cannot tolerate akash or his parents
i loved the scene were manyata gave sound scolding to that maharaj
i couldnt continue to read the sub chapter as i was so sad
but i did the memories of manyata made me cry literally- her wedding saree , his gifts etc
the cd scene were uday tells that   Hey Princess -  Hi Beautiful.  If you're watching this - it means I'm not here anymore.  
it was so heart breaking
 
the attitude of the media persons irritrted me . how could they think they could make money taking the pic of the young widow
since you had already told that the update would be emotinal i was prepared for it but i never ever expected she would commit suicide
but iam sure she will survive as you need her in book 2
do start book 2 soon
thanks for the pm and sorry for boring you with my comment


Edited by andy.a - 11 December 2012 at 3:26pm

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Posted: 11 December 2012 at 1:07pm | IP Logged
Navi... Soo sad and tragic! U made me cry:-( Its very cruel to all of us to read manveer story ending like this... But then I saw ur comment of book 2. I hope you are continuing that from where you left off in this book.

Pls continue and start ur book 2 soon... Like right now!

I really liked the way you tied up all the loose ends.. Unnati n yudaveer, murari out of jail and that pakaash mother as well.

Pls let book 2 be continuation of this book.. Else it will be a heart wrenching. Pls let uday be back and manyata be fine. Pls pls pls pls!

Adored your story! My fav!

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Posted: 11 December 2012 at 1:10pm | IP Logged
Navina i don't have words to explain how iam feeling right now...Cry
God it ws so so so heart wrenching update...
my eyes are literally teary...
i never thought i would ever say this but for the first time your writing maked me really sad...
I am very sentimental i can never read or listen sad stories  cox i can't digest itConfused
This update aas sad but written PERFECTLY  trust me no body could have done justice with it except you... Man every single line maked my heart beat slow... The way you explained to which extent manyata misses her soul mate was remarkable...
but the most emotional scenes were the study one where she touches everything which uday touched n the suicide scene was ahhh... I donno when will uday be back but this update was a well written one... Ur amazing writer...

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