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MANVEER FF : The journey of a wife... (Book 1) (Page 144)

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Posted: 10 December 2012 at 9:26am | IP Logged
Awesome update Navi.Really like it.But dont tell me ki Manyta n Uv's brother nahiii.I hope not.Manyta+Uv perfect heheh.Cont soon pliz:D

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Posted: 10 December 2012 at 9:29am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Choco.Swiss

Awesome update Navi.Really like it.But dont tell me ki Manyta n Uv's brother nahiii.I hope not.Manyta+Uv perfect heheh.Cont soon pliz:D
 
 
Thanks Swini  Hug  .
Veer , sirf Uday ki humshakal hain.
Uday and Veer are NOT relatedBig smile.
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Posted: 10 December 2012 at 10:50am | IP Logged
Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Yeh kya kar dala navi... Uday ko mar dala, hero ko mar dala ShockedShockedConfused.

OK enough of my shock now, Amazing update navina Smile, and like evry other update, ur update just takes me for a surprise ride, expect the unexpected from ur updates. After dishes out super hot Manveer us give us this 1000 watts ka jatka by Killing Uday Shocked, yeh sirf navina hi kar sakti hai LOLLOL.

And Gosh loved Manyata, in this update, she proved the world that she is Mrs Udayveer singhSmile. I really like this rajat as well, so loyal and so fruitful. He does what he is told to do , a pakka wafadar sipahiEmbarrassedEmbarrassed. In both ur updates M was shining like a polished DiamondClapClap the way she shot akash, ended Akash once and for all , it was stupendousClap and the last line of burining him to ashes was outstanding Clap.And all the credits for polishing this diamond goes to our princeEmbarrassedEmbarrassed, but sad he is no more to see his created end resultCry.

I'm not sure how u r taking this ff ahead, or are you somewhere planning to end this ff , coz Uday is dead, all have lost hope, even M's hope is dying, no baby so far, I guess u can get UV's baby and bring some happiness into M's life, but please dont go Nira's ff's way of killing M too, I mean people are supposed to live even if their beloved dies, for their family and people. Waiting for ur next update Navi, as usual I have no idea what to expect form u next, but thats the part that makes every chapter more excitingSmile


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Posted: 10 December 2012 at 11:54am | IP Logged
Originally posted by puggyy

Lovely update Clap Clap 

Also emotional Cry U know y I replied late ...am unable to digest that uday is missing

Pls in next update want uday back ...also MANYATH pregnent Ouch

Pls yaar I want uday back ...really fled sad aft reding update Cry Sleepy

Pls navi update soon ...lengthy one



Plsss update soon ...updateee

Updateee updateee

Updateee.  Updateee.  Updateee 

Update update update ...


 
Thanx Anisha  Hug  .
 
I know that u were upset ...  U didn't HAVE to give a comment  !!!!   U were only supposed to press the "LIKE" button  ...    BUT U DIDN'TCry!!!
 
It is too soon for Uday to returnShocked
 
If u want him back ...  U have to put in your vote for thatWink!!!
 
The next update is my last . It will be the same size as always.  The update will be posted on WednesdayBig smile.
 
PS - HAVE THE TISSUES READY   ...  the update is extremely sadUnhappy!!!
 

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Posted: 10 December 2012 at 12:03pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by chitra_rao

Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Yeh kya kar dala navi... Uday ko mar dala, hero ko mar dala ShockedShockedConfused.

OK enough of my shock now, Amazing update navina Smile, and like evry other update, ur update just takes me for a surprise ride, expect the unexpected from ur updates. After dishes out super hot Manveer us give us this 1000 watts ka jatka by Killing Uday Shocked, yeh sirf navina hi kar sakti hai LOLLOL.

And Gosh loved Manyata, in this update, she proved the world that she is Mrs Udayveer singhSmile. I really like this rajat as well, so loyal and so fruitful. He does what he is told to do , a pakka wafadar sipahiEmbarrassedEmbarrassed. In both ur updates M was shining like a polished DiamondClapClap the way she shot akash, ended Akash once and for all , it was stupendousClap and the last line of burining him to ashes was outstanding Clap.And all the credits for polishing this diamond goes to our princeEmbarrassedEmbarrassed, but sad he is no more to see his created end resultCry.

I'm not sure how u r taking this ff ahead, or are you somewhere planning to end this ff , coz Uday is dead, all have lost hope, even M's hope is dying, no baby so far, I guess u can get UV's baby and bring some happiness into M's life, but please dont go Nira's ff's way of killing M too, I mean people are supposed to live even if their beloved dies, for their family and people. Waiting for ur next update Navi, as usual I have no idea what to expect form u next, but thats the part that makes every chapter more excitingSmile




The bold highlighted black part...LOLLOLLOL
chitra,,,,so u still havnt forgotton the ending humn,,,,
i wanted to  end my story asap ,,,,so i killed both of them  (manveer)...LOL 

i didnt want to come on if, but couldnt control myself from posting here as i saw ur comment chitra...Embarrassed

but navina...plz tum aise mat karna...LOL   manveer ko galti se bhi maar mat dena,,,varna bahut kuch sehna padega...trsust me...Wink

now its time to go...will post  the actual comment once exams get over...

till then have fun navina and chitra...Big smile


Edited by coolsaloni.nira - 10 December 2012 at 12:04pm

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Posted: 10 December 2012 at 12:20pm | IP Logged
Navi dear if i m not wrong there is a CS with ur full planfor evry chp. but now i didnt find it plzz...tell me where is CS?i want to read it agin...

Edited by swetsurati - 10 December 2012 at 12:20pm

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Posted: 10 December 2012 at 12:23pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by chitra_rao

Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Yeh kya kar dala navi... Uday ko mar dala, hero ko mar dala ShockedShockedConfused.

OK enough of my shock now, Amazing update navina Smile, and like evry other update, ur update just takes me for a surprise ride, expect the unexpected from ur updates. After dishes out super hot Manveer us give us this 1000 watts ka jatka by Killing Uday Shocked, yeh sirf navina hi kar sakti hai LOLLOL.

And Gosh loved Manyata, in this update, she proved the world that she is Mrs Udayveer singhSmile. I really like this rajat as well, so loyal and so fruitful. He does what he is told to do , a pakka wafadar sipahiEmbarrassedEmbarrassed. In both ur updates M was shining like a polished DiamondClapClap the way she shot akash, ended Akash once and for all , it was stupendousClap and the last line of burining him to ashes was outstanding Clap.And all the credits for polishing this diamond goes to our princeEmbarrassedEmbarrassed, but sad he is no more to see his created end resultCry.

I'm not sure how u r taking this ff ahead, or are you somewhere planning to end this ff , coz Uday is dead, all have lost hope, even M's hope is dying, no baby so far, I guess u can get UV's baby and bring some happiness into M's life, but please dont go Nira's ff's way of killing M too, I mean people are supposed to live even if their beloved dies, for their family and people. Waiting for ur next update Navi, as usual I have no idea what to expect form u next, but thats the part that makes every chapter more excitingSmile


 
 
Haai ,haai  ...  maine Uday ko nahi maaraOuch.  Villain ne hero ko maaraAngry.
 
Thank God , u got over your shock (ANOTHER 1 COMING SOONLOL).  Ye jhatka's TRP ke liye hainWink!!!  U know what Chitra  ...  I think the chapter with the SUPER HOT MANVEER - shocked my readers more than this chappy didConfused
 
I wish we got to see A STRONG MANYATA in the show , but alas ; WE WEREN'T SO LUCKY .  So I did the next best thing ...  I made her powerful in my SS.  I made her WORTHY of being MRS UDAYVEER SINGH!!!
Rajjat  is a very loyal soldier  ...   it was necessary to have someone like him around.  Someone who would guide Manyata  -  in things  ...  NOT SO LEGALEvil Smile!!!
Thanks for all the applause  ...  I CAN FEEL MY HEAD SWELLINGLOL!!!
 
Yes - I am ending it VERY SOON.  My next update is on Wednesday  ...  it is a double update  ...  & IT IS MY FINAL UPDATE OF THIS BOOK Approve!  Your last paragraph of assumptions ...  contain a lot of answers in it.  In fact - IT HAS MOST OF THE ANSWERSConfused.  I don't know exactly how Nira's ff ended ...  Saira told me that Manveer died in the end  - AFTER THAT , I DIDN'T HAVE THE COURAGE TO READ ITUnhappy!!!
 
I don't think my next chapter will please u  ...   because it looks like u figured quite a bit of it out.
 
THANKS FOR THE LOVELY COMMENTS !!!    I look forward to them ...   as they ALWAYS liven up my moodBig smile!
 
  Hug  Hug  .
 
 
PS ...  Chitra  , Nira has also replied to your comment on p144.
 
 


Edited by ...navina... - 10 December 2012 at 12:40pm

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Posted: 10 December 2012 at 12:25pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by swetsurati

Navi dear if i m not wrong there is a CS with ur full planfor evry chp. but now i didnt find it plzz...tell me where is CS?i want to read it agin...
 
NO U ARE NOT WRONG!!!
The c/s is on page 2,
but it has to be ammended.
 
I'm ending this book after chapter 4.2.
 
Veer & his mother & his girl-friend will come in Book 2 Big smile.


Edited by ...navina... - 10 December 2012 at 12:28pm

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