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MANVEER FF : The journey of a wife... (Book 1) (Page 139)

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Posted: 08 December 2012 at 10:30am | IP Logged
Originally posted by malikmehreen95


update was superb dear..its good that you killed akash or aryan but plz dont kill uday..and also dont do memory loss..plz and update soon
 
 
Thank you  Hug  .  I think we all had TOO MUCH OF AKASH ...  it was high time for him to go Approve.  Uday was involved in an accident which led to an explosion  ...  HE MAY HAVE AMNESIA  ...   HE MAY BE CRIPPLED  ...  HE MAY BE DISFIGURED  ...  HE MAY BE IMPOTENT  ...  HE MAY BE DEAD!!! 
That's the choices  - WHICH 1 LOOKS THE BEST???Wink
 
The FINAL update will be coming soonSmile.

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Posted: 08 December 2012 at 10:43am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ...navina...

Originally posted by malikmehreen95


update was superb dear..its good that you killed akash or aryan but plz dont kill uday..and also dont do memory loss..plz and update soon

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<font size="3">T<font color="#0000ff">hank you Hug . I think we all had TOO MUCH OF AKASH ... it was high time for him to go Approve. Uday was involved in an accident which led to an explosion ... HE MAY HAVE AMNESIA ... HE MAY BE CRIPPLED ... HE MAY BE DISFIGURED ... HE MAY BE IMPOTENT ... HE MAY BE DEAD!!! </font></font>

<font color="#0000ff" size="3">That's the choices - WHICH 1 LOOKS THE BEST???Wink</font>

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<font color="#0000ff" size="3">The FINAL update will be coming soonSmile.</font>

non of these pls atleast dont make him impotent
let he lose his memory
i chose the lesser of the 5 evils

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Posted: 08 December 2012 at 12:11pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Zina-

 NAVINA!
NAVINA!
NAVINA !
O MY GODShocked 
O MY GOD Shocked
Itna zor ka ghatka lga dia humko ye kia kr dia!Cry mera uv Cry kahan gya wo kuta kamina sand sala na-mard pakash uurrgghhh!Angry AngryAngry AngryAngryAngry oooiieennn meko rona a raha hai hayye raba abi to sirf 6 mahenay hue thay or or or or tumne mera uv ko mar dala CryCry Cry CryCry Cryhayye ma lut gai barbad ho gai! bechari manyata us par kia guzar rahi hogi navi baby tumne to atomic bomb say bhi bara dhamaka kr dala! wo night to remember kia hume is shock ko sehnay k liye doze tha! tufaan anay say pehlay ki shanti! Cry Cry Cry meko to bht bht rona a raha hai! koi balti lao nahi to yahan tsunami a jae gi Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry! hayye mje chakar a rahe hainOuchSleepyDead! uday ko wapis lao wapis lao wapis lao! abi abi abi abi! meko uv chaheyeCry Cry Cry lao na usko!Cry haye ma mar gaiDead
 
 
Zainab
Zainab
Zainab
Shocked
Shocked
Shocked
I like the "na mard" partLOL. Rona aa raha hain Cry ...  ABHI SE???  Dear , the next chapter is worse.  I can't even write the damn thing because I start tearingCry. Haan, sirf 6 mahine the  ...  lekin kya kare???   YE TOH KISMAT HAIN!!!
I told u Zina ...  "A NIGHT TO REMEMBER "   will look MILD compared to this BOMBShocked!!!
TOOFAAN ANE SE PEHLE  BlushingPYAARBlushing!!!!
Haan, koi balti le ao ...   Zainab will solve the drought problemLOL.  Chakkar bhi  ...   ohoOuch!!!   ( ZAINAB - don't get sick ...  I get very worried about you).
 
NAHI KARENGE - NAHI KARENGE ...
...   I 'M ALSO ON STRIKEWink!!!
 
Mar gayi ki bachi ...  I ALREADY TOLD U WHAT I'M PLANNING,  So ...   WHAT'S WITH THE MELO DRAMAAngry???
 
Trust me ZainabWink!!!
 
  Hug   Hug   .

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Posted: 08 December 2012 at 12:20pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by MsLuscious

Awesome update navina...
sorry couldn't read the previous chapter because iam  not comfortable in reading extra adult stuff so i thought not to read it...
ok now these two chapters were fabulous really they were written beautifully  ...
Yay the best part was Akaash death iam so glad manyata killed that psychic...
but the sad part was uday got dissappeared but iam glad you said u will bring him back ...
seriously the last note made me happy again...
navina u have got 46 likes now so you better bring uday back i know you will
love yaSmile
 
 
Thanx Sarah  Hug  .
I know ...  I DON't MINDBig smile!!!
 
U know when I watched the scene in the show ...  the 1 where Uday teaches Manyata to shoot   - I told my mother : THEY ARE SHOWING US THIS PART BECAUSE 1 DAY MANYATA WILL SHOOT AKASH.  I never thought that I would be proven wrongConfused !   BUT I WAS!!!   So  ...  I included it in my SS. ( ANYWAY ...  I THINK I DID A BETTER JOB THAN THEY EVER COULD - I know I sound conceited  Ouch  , forgive me)
It's 50 LIKES now ...   I CAN'T BELIEVE ITShocked!!!
 
Love u Sarah   Hug  .
 

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Posted: 08 December 2012 at 12:37pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by anushruthi


Ab tumne double dhamaka wala update diya hai toh 
long comment banta hai bossLOL

Well I guess neither You nor I have to carry through our 
threats 
U got more than 35 like !!!

I Sincerely hope You will bring UV back again 
*crosses fingers*

P.S. 
If normal blackmailing doesnt work 
then I will resort to Emotional blackmialWink
Haan nahi toh !!!

 
Awww   ...  so sweetEmbarrassed.
 
Thank God no more threats from u ...  I was starting to get scaredOuch. 35 choron  ...   it's even more than 45Shocked!!!!
 
We'll see ...  we'll see LOL!!!
 
Main yahan se bhaag rahi hoon  ..  Anu mujhe bohot darra rahi heConfused!!!
 
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Posted: 08 December 2012 at 12:48pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by thejazzgal

Double update.. whoooppiiie Tongue
u knw what U updating this sooner came as a shock to me :P but "Shauk Hai Shock Lagne kaaa" Wink

yey 45+ likes where as u said if u get 35 likes..Tongue 

navina ji 1 more like to get 50! Star Blackmailing Does Work!!  

coming ti the Update!
Awesome! Fantastic Update .. aww!! but UV ??
i knw UV is ALIVE!Wink 
or u wnat US to Black MAIL u to bring the Prince back alive!

i knw koi sad ending nahi honey wali Wink  but plz OYEE no Look Alike plzzz

we / I love ManVeer which is UDAYVEER n MANYATA

oye hoye!! finllay mr. Impotent id DEAD!!!
M k hubby ka Adhura kaam M ne pura karr diyaaa Smile
abhi no chances ki woh wapis aaye.. kyun k rajat ko keh diya M ne tab tak uye Ash me turn na hojaye wahan se kahin nahi jana!!

Wish we got something like this in the Show!! but AlaS!
pheww!!  ab se no Psycho Impotent in M's Journey Smile

i want J backkk Tongue

loved ManVeer Scenes



 
 
Hmmm  ...  double update !!!   See - I CAN BE NICE Approve.
 
Who knew ...  BLACKMAILING WOULD WORKShocked???  I'm  still shocked  ...  and I can't believe it.  UDAY  "DIED"  IN THIS UPDATE  ...  & still everybody  "LIKE"d  IT ROFL.
 
THANK U Hug  .  Anu is already blackmailing me ...  now u want to join herOuch.
 
There is a look alike ...  IT IS IN MY CHARACTER SKETCH (p2)!
 
Manyata is a good wife ...  she even did her husband's jobEmbarrassed. Akash is gone for good - haan nai tohWink. Don't even talk about the show Angry ...  they never fulfilled any of our wishesCry.
 
Next chapter is my last update ...  where do I fit Jai in???Confused
 
Manveer ...  Day Dreaming  ... they're THE BESTEmbarrassed!!!
 
Thanx for commenting Jazzy  Hug  .


Edited by ...navina... - 08 December 2012 at 12:54pm

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Posted: 08 December 2012 at 12:55pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by milhan

ShockedShockedShocked
AISA NAI HO SAKTA???????
UDAY KAISE MAR GAYA???????????????
NAVINA ZYADTI HAI YA...
Cry
UADY KO WAPIS LE AO JALDI!!!!!!!!!!
IT WAS A GR8 UPDATE!Big smile
BUT UDAY PART BROKE MY HEARTBroken Heart
FINALLY THATCensoredAKASH DEAD!
AWSUM AWSUM AWSUM!!!!!!!!
WILL BE WAITING FOR MORE!
THNX FOR PM
 
LOLLOLLOL
Aisa ho gaya hain!
Akash ne usse maaraDead.
Haan , hein na .. 
Ouch
Main poori koshish karoongiApprove.
Thank you !!!
It broke mine too Cry!
DancingDancingDancing
Thanx (3 TIMES)
1 LAST update leftUnhappy.
Welcome for PMSmile.
 
  Hug  Hug  .
 
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Posted: 08 December 2012 at 1:12pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ...navina...

Originally posted by MsLuscious

Awesome update navina...
sorry couldn't read the previous chapter because iam  not comfortable in reading extra adult stuff so i thought not to read it...
ok now these two chapters were fabulous really they were written beautifully  ...
Yay the best part was Akaash death iam so glad manyata killed that psychic...
but the sad part was uday got dissappeared but iam glad you said u will bring him back ...
seriously the last note made me happy again...
navina u have got 46 likes now so you better bring uday back i know you will
love yaSmile
 
 
Thanx Sarah  Hug  .
I know ...  I DON't MINDBig smile!!!
 
U know when I watched the scene in the show ...  the 1 where Uday teaches Manyata to shoot   - I told my mother : THEY ARE SHOWING US THIS PART BECAUSE 1 DAY MANYATA WILL SHOOT AKASH.  I never thought that I would be proven wrongConfused !   BUT I WAS!!!   So  ...  I included it in my SS. ( ANYWAY ...  I THINK I DID A BETTER JOB THAN THEY EVER COULD - I know I sound conceited  Ouch  , forgive me)
It's 50 LIKES now ...   I CAN'T BELIEVE ITShocked!!!
 
Love u Sarah   Hug  .
 
You have done amazing job dear...
after reading your update i slept peacefully like it was a real thingLOL...
but seriously i was so engrossed in this show that i always wanted akaash to be killed... But you my dear done which so called loosers (cvs) couldn't do... If i could have i would have liked your update over and over again...
Now i really hope uday comes back fit and fine but why iam feeling like he will be back but there will be twist he might have loosed his memory  or something???
watever it is iam waiting for it...
but sweetie i just want you to add twists like this if you wana continue this FF because if you won't we will miss this ff badly... So yiu better continue it or start a new ff but we won't let you goWink

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