Dekha Ek Khwaab


Dekha Ek Khwaab
Dekha Ek Khwaab

MANVEER FF : The journey of a wife... (Book 1) (Page 136)

--Zinay-- IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 07 December 2012 at 2:19am | IP Logged
O MY GODShocked 
O MY GOD Shocked
Itna zor ka ghatka lga dia humko ye kia kr dia!Cry mera uv Cry kahan gya wo kuta kamina sand sala na-mard pakash uurrgghhh!Angry AngryAngry AngryAngryAngry oooiieennn meko rona a raha hai hayye raba abi to sirf 6 mahenay hue thay or or or or tumne mera uv ko mar dala CryCry Cry CryCry Cryhayye ma lut gai barbad ho gai! bechari manyata us par kia guzar rahi hogi navi baby tumne to atomic bomb say bhi bara dhamaka kr dala! wo night to remember kia hume is shock ko sehnay k liye doze tha! tufaan anay say pehlay ki shanti! Cry Cry Cry meko to bht bht rona a raha hai! koi balti lao nahi to yahan tsunami a jae gi Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry! hayye mje chakar a rahe hainOuchSleepyDead! uday ko wapis lao wapis lao wapis lao! abi abi abi abi! meko uv chaheyeCry Cry Cry lao na usko!Cry haye ma mar gaiDead

Edited by -Zina- - 08 December 2012 at 10:40am

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MsLuscious IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 07 December 2012 at 4:21am | IP Logged
Awesome update navina...
sorry couldn't read the previous chapter because iam  not comfortable in reading extra adult stuff so i thought not to read it...
ok now these two chapters were fabulous really they were written beautifully  ...
Yay the best part was Akaash death iam so glad manyata killed that psychic...
but the sad part was uday got dissappeared but iam glad you said u will bring him back ...
seriously the last note made me happy again...
navina u have got 46 likes now so you better bring uday back i know you will
love yaSmile

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anushruthi Goldie

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Posted: 07 December 2012 at 5:17am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ...navina...

Originally posted by anushruthi

First to comment 
fantastic double updates
loved them 
it wasnt less than the climaxes of movies 
bas***d Akash/Aryan 
i hate the stupid blundering fool 
I HOPE Uday is alive 
he Should be alive 
Please let him be alive ...

Loved the justice 
Thankgoodness Manyata completed UV's 
incomplete job 
that son of a bitch Akash deserves a more painful death 
do cont soon 

How did u create the pumpkin text ??
i liked it very much 

I am sure You will get more than 35 likes 
and Please bring our prince back alive 
If UV isnt alive then your inbox will be floodedWink
who said " blackmail" doesnt pay ? LOLLOLLOL
YikesShocked  ...  so long comment AnuConfused!!!!
I gave a double dhamaka  :
   ...  in the 1st - UDAY DIEDCry
   ...  in the 2nd- AKASH DIEDEvil Smile
I have 3 chapters left in this story  ...   in the last 1 ...  I'm still deciding whether to kill Manyata OR NOTWink!!!
Anu - if u want me to keep Uday alive  ...  u better start praying that I get 35 LIKES Big smile
Manyata had to FINISH OFF the job , her husband left Approve.  And I think , she did it really well Cool.
Here's the link for the pumpkin graphic:
U just fill in the text that u want!!!
Hawww Anu  ...   u are blackmailing me Cry !!!
MAIN TUJHE DEKH LOONGIEvil Smile ( Haan nai tohWink)
Thanx a lot for commenting  Hug   .

Ab tumne double dhamaka wala update diya hai toh 
long comment banta hai bossLOL

Well I guess neither You nor I have to carry through our 
U got more than 35 like !!!

I Sincerely hope You will bring UV back again 
*crosses fingers*

If normal blackmailing doesnt work 
then I will resort to Emotional blackmialWink
Haan nahi toh !!!

Edited by anushruthi - 07 December 2012 at 6:40am

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thejazzgal IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 07 December 2012 at 6:11am | IP Logged
Double update.. whoooppiiie Tongue
u knw what U updating this sooner came as a shock to me :P but "Shauk Hai Shock Lagne kaaa" Wink

yey 45+ likes where as u said if u get 35 likes..Tongue 

navina ji 1 more like to get 50! Star Blackmailing Does Work!!  

coming ti the Update!
Awesome! Fantastic Update .. aww!! but UV ??
i knw UV is ALIVE!Wink 
or u wnat US to Black MAIL u to bring the Prince back alive!

i knw koi sad ending nahi honey wali Wink  but plz OYEE no Look Alike plzzz

we / I love ManVeer which is UDAYVEER n MANYATA

oye hoye!! finllay mr. Impotent id DEAD!!!
M k hubby ka Adhura kaam M ne pura karr diyaaa Smile
abhi no chances ki woh wapis aaye.. kyun k rajat ko keh diya M ne tab tak uye Ash me turn na hojaye wahan se kahin nahi jana!!

Wish we got something like this in the Show!! but AlaS!
pheww!!  ab se no Psycho Impotent in M's Journey Smile

i want J backkk Tongue

loved ManVeer Scenes

Edited by thejazzgal - 07 December 2012 at 10:18am

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...navina... IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 07 December 2012 at 6:33am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Fantasyangel

awsm...both the two updates was grt...whn m collapsd i thought m pregnent koi na..nd pls bring back m's halkat...bechari m..
Thanks Ravneet  Hug  .
Well, she MIGHT be pregnant ;
but the doctor coudn't make it out because it is still VERY EARLYWink.
I'll bring him back  ...  but -   ????   Evil SmileEvil SmileEvil Smile

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...navina... IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 07 December 2012 at 6:42am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Sunshinegirll

hey navina fab chapterSmile
something tells me uday wudnt hav died.. or that u wont kill himWink
btw am extremely glad that manyata killed that psycho..LOL
continue soon.. pls bring back uday in d next chapter..
relly cant wait for him to be back.. after all our uday is immortalLOLLOL

Hey SOW  Hug .
Ooo  ...  looks like u have a lot of faith in meEmbarrassed.  Yeah - U ARE RIGHT!!!   I wouldn't kill him.  In fact I can't Ouch.  Akash is gone FOR GOOD this time.  He is nothing but ash right nowApprove .  Sorry to dissappoint u Dear ...   but  it will be a while before Uday returns to ManyataShocked.  I agree  ...  HE IS IMMORTALBig smile!!!
Originally posted by Sunshinegirll

and ya congrats once again for becoming a goldieHugHug
Thanx (AGAIN) Sow  Hug  .
Looks like VERY SOON u will also be a GOLDIEEmbarrassed.
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Posted: 07 December 2012 at 6:55am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sweet_gargi

mindblowing update Navina...loved it...but ya very sad..i knew ur going to show something like this..plz bring Uday back soon...i feel bad for manyata CryCry
but the way she killed Akash was excellent..I wished to watch it in TV but woh to hope hi reh choro but u did it in a superb way Navina.ClapClap.u actually bought a smile in my face with ur surprising update..i never thought ull update today...
But plz don't finsish this SS..make it a FF..plzzz...tell me do i have to sign a petition for thisLOLLOL
Thanks Gargi  Hug  . 
..i knew ur going to show something like this..    -  Have u been talking to SairaShocked ...  is she giving away my secrets Ermm?
I appreciate the complimentEmbarrassed.  I also wanted a scene like that in the show ...  but the CV's were too much in love with Akash - SO THERE WAS NO WAY THAT THEY WERE GOING TO GIVE A SCENE WHERE MANYATA SHOOTS  HIMAngry!  I wasn't planning to update today  ...  THEN I DECIDED ; WHY NOT   ...   LET ME FREAK OUT EVERYBODYEvil Smile!
Gargi  ...  I am out of ideas ...  & U WANT ME TO CONTINUEOuch.  Okay  ... I'll think about extending it a bit.  PLEASE - NO PETITIONSDead.   But if u want ; U CAN MAKE A POLL ON IT  ...   I would love to see the result of it LOL.

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Posted: 07 December 2012 at 7:05am | IP Logged
No navi I have not been giving ur secrets away
Trust me
I sent u a pm
Please look sorry for disturbing everytime lolz

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