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MANVEER FF : The journey of a wife... (Book 1) (Page 128)

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Posted: 03 December 2012 at 9:23am | IP Logged
oh my god,it was very veryy hot and passionate!!!!!! akash gt his lesson very well and fully manveer!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 03 December 2012 at 11:35am | IP Logged
Originally posted by vampire12345678

k navi u have finally updated 
the most awaited chapter of the decade 
the it was so worth the wait
i am so so happy that the update was 3/4 purple
u just nailed it 
perfectly written Clap
it was f**king hot
i loved the fact that u used many styles in there 
from 69 to doggy to the normal 
i give my hottest title writer title to u as andy said u have even beaten me 
and i am proud of u * patting ur back*
haha u were so scared for people reporting u but see how much everyone loved it Wink
i loved the title dialogues in between them 
i bow down to u now when it comes to hot writing
now u are my guru lolzz
really navi beautifully written 
perfect amount of detail
perfect feel and emtion
perfect dialogues 
perfect amount of watching by mr impotent
if he was normal he would have excited for sure Tongue
awesome 
u rock
u can write even better than me 
love u 
and this chapter was super duper hot
Clap

 

 
 
Yep  ...  I finally updated Approve.  I don't know about most awaitedConfused. Everyone was looking forward to it BUT , when I updated  ...   I THINK THEY GOT A SHOCK OF THEIR LIVESShocked  ...   they had no idea about the size of the bomb , I was going to set offOuch.  And I think all got SCARED Dead.
 
BUT ...  if MY SAIRA enjoyed it , then why should I be dissappointedUnhappy??? 
 
No ...   Please don't pass your title to me!!!  For me - U WILL ALWAYS REMAIN :  THE BEST WRITER OF HOT SCENES!!!Embarrassed
 
Even now ...  I'm still so scared of being reportedCry.  U know - IT'S NOT TOO LATE ...   it can still happen!!!
 
Hey ...   I'm not the guru here Angry ...  YOU ARE !!!   Whatever I know - I LEARNT FROM YOU  Evil SmileEvil SmileEvil Smile!!!
 
Thanks for the MANY compliments Big smile.
 
If Akash were normal ...  he most definately would've had an erectionWink.  But u know what Saira  ...  after witnessing  "THE PO*N SHOW OF MANVEER"   ...   maybe he got better from his problemLOL.
 
THANKS SAIRA  , FOR GIVING ME THIS WONDERFUL COMMENT  Hug   Hug  .
 


Edited by ...navina... - 03 December 2012 at 11:36am
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Posted: 03 December 2012 at 11:45am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Softy17

Chap 3.4
awsmee update
wow manyata slaped akash loved it
manveer scene n mobile conversation was awsome

Chap 3.5
it was so hotBlushingBlushingBlushing

sorry for the late comment
I was buzy
update soon


 
 
3.4   :  Thank u Dear.  Akash was really annoying there , so Manyata slapped him!!!  How nice if we could've seen that in the showOuch
 
3.5   :   I know Wink.   Most of my readers didn't even read the entire update ...  because they couldn't handle the heat!!!   No apology necessary - I UNDERSTAND!!!
 
Thanks Pallavi   Hug  Hug   .
 
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Posted: 03 December 2012 at 12:03pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Sanarasheedroxx

Koi paani daalo yha aag lg gyi hai Wink
It ws supa hawt Embarrassed
Apne kya pura din google pe bitaya tha LOL
Akash ko shi se jalaya manyata is very intelligentROFL
Awesome ,superb,mindblowing update navi di Clap Clap Clap
Koi pagal hi hoga jo isse report krega Tongue
Hot hot hot hot hot hot supa hawtThumbs Up
 
 
Sambhalke Sana  ...  kahi jal na jaye ROFL !!!
  BlushingBlushingBlushing.
Puri din nahi  ...   pure hafte , main google pe thaWacko.
Arre  ...  Bechara Akash Ouch!
Thanks Dear Embarrassed.
I hope so SweetyUnhappy.
U brought a huge smile to my face - thanx!!!
 
  Hug    Hug  .
 
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Posted: 03 December 2012 at 12:11pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by anushruthi

Awesome part !!
sooo damn hot 
it set my computer screen on fire 
Akash desrved wat he got 
stupid idiot spying on manveer
loved Manyata's way of 'showing' him her love for UV

the ending


Manyata realised that night,  that she  learned about LOVE from Uday.   Whether it was the meaning or the feeling or even how to express it   ...   IT WAS ALL TAUGHT BY UDAY!!!  She knows now ...   THAT SHE NEVER  LOVED  AKASH, BECAUSE SHE HAD ALWAYS LOVED UDAY!!!!


this part made my day 
Yaaayy 
she always loved Uday 
In Your face uncle Akash
do cont soon thanks 4 de PM
 
 
 
When I was writing this part - I had no idea how HOT it got until I read everyone's commentsEmbarrassed.  I think I went overboard with itConfused .   Manyata wanted Akash to see just how much she loves Uday  ...  & I think HE GOT THE MESSAGE LOUD & CLEAR Wink!!!
 
I'm so happy - u loved the ending Approve
 
Welcome for the PMSmile.
 
Thanks for commenting Anu   Hug  Hug  .
 
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Posted: 04 December 2012 at 6:15am | IP Logged
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Posted: 04 December 2012 at 8:33am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Zina-

Comment edited on page 126SmileTongueWink
 
Thanx Dear  Hug  .
 
 
 
Originally posted by -Zina-


IT WAS TOO HOT TO HANDLEBlushingBlushing

it was out of the world uff uff navina  i cannot tell u how my condition was my vision got blur eyes got watered smoke coming out of my ears and much much more and honestly speaking it was tooo much for me i didn't understand several things and i had to google it as manyata didLOL this was the hottest love-making i have ever read it was the best chapter of this ss honestly speaking i have no words to describe how  much i loved it totally amazing at a moment i felt like i am viewing their private scenesLOL it seemed to be a total reality i loved eav=ch and every line of it wow manyata nay kia khub izat ki pakash ki  A PIECE OF GARBAGE awesome manyata u proved to be the best wife ever!ClapClapClap
 

after what manyata was doing my expressions were like thisLOL

the chocolate part was hooii dropping chocolate and licking it my my it was beyond hotCensored what did uday said lat me make love to my wife before we were doing sex well said boy that was actually sex!LOL

u r the best writer navina

did i tell u something navina? i guess no then listen I LOVE THIS SS THE MOST!  its my favurite ss in the forum! the best ss ever~ClapClap

waiting to read the next chapter eagerly waiting! u have really made a mark this was actually the night to remember not even for Manveer despite all the forum members i just cannot stop telling that how much i am in love with it! TOTALLY AMAZING!ClapStar
A BEAUTIFUL HEART FOR MY BEAUTIFUL FRIEND!Hug
update soon!
love u a lot
thanks for pm!Smile
 
                                                                                                                                            
 
 
Thank you Zainab   Hug  .
 
Oh dearShocked  ...  I did say the chapter was for 18+ Blushing.  U shouldn't have been reading that Zina Disapprove.  Anyway  ...   now that u googled itGeek , I'm sure ; U GOT AN EYE-FULL Wacko!!!  Hottest love-making ...   I'm not so sureConfused  -  I've read hotter stuff on this forum!!!  I'm really glad that u loved it so muchBig smile.  U also felt like a spectator ...  JUST LIKE AKASHLOL!!!   I made Manyata strong in my SS , so that she can take on people like Akash Angry.  She thrashed him well with her witty remarks Approve.
 
Not only u  ...   everybody's expressions were like thatWink!!!
 
I'm sure u wouldn't look at CHOCOLATE the same way again.  It will always remind u of Manveer Embarrassed.  Oh yeah  ...  Uday knows everythingDay Dreaming!!!  He can SHOW U the difference between s** and making love Heart.
 
Thanx for the compliment   ...  but I believe there are many other's (YOURSELF INCLUDED)  who write better than me.
 
Awww - u are so sweet to call my SS, your favourite Cool.  Don't tell the othersOuch ...  I DON'T  WANT THEM TO FEEL BAD WinkLOL!!!
 
There will be another massive bomb ( OF A DIFFERENT KIND) in the next chapterStern Smile.  Be prepared!!!
 
Love you Zainab ,
Welcome for the PM Smile.
 
I simply love your commentsEmbarrassed  with all the pretty graphics !!!
U really know how to make a girl feel appreciated!!!
 
Very sorry for replying to your comment so late ...
I was searching for the perfect graphic that would tell you how grateful I am,
 & I think I found the best one:  
 
             
 
 


Edited by ...navina... - 04 December 2012 at 9:25am

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Posted: 04 December 2012 at 9:19am | IP Logged
Originally posted by snowdream

navi...what was it...Blushing...i think this is one among the hottest stuff i ever read on the forumBlushing...u just beated up all other dearDay Dreaming
Res for rest of the commentWink
 
Well Krishna ...  u know that Manveer didn't have a honeymoon in my SS.  So now they were making up for thatWink.  It actually came out hotter than I planned ...   I DIDN'T MEAN TO OUT-DO ANYONE ELSEOuch!!!
 
 
 
Originally posted by pia.raha

oh my god,it was very veryy hot and passionate!!!!!! akash gt his lesson very well and fully manveer!!!!!!!!
 
 
Thanks Pia  Hug  . 
Akash got  AN EYE-FULL Wacko!!!  
Manveer Embarrassed ...  let's just say  ...   lage rahoDay DreamingWinkLOL!!!!
 


Edited by ...navina... - 04 December 2012 at 9:30am

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