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MANVEER FF : The journey of a wife... (Book 1) (Page 127)

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Posted: 03 December 2012 at 2:01am | IP Logged
Chap 3.4
awsmee update
wow manyata slaped akash loved it
manveer scene n mobile conversation was awsome

Chap 3.5
it was so hotBlushingBlushingBlushing

sorry for the late comment
I was buzy
update soon

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anushruthi Goldie

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Posted: 03 December 2012 at 4:15am | IP Logged
Awesome part !!
sooo damn hot 
it set my computer screen on fire 
Akash desrved wat he got 
stupid idiot spying on manveer
loved Manyata's way of 'showing' him her love for UV

the ending

Manyata realised that night,  that she  learned about LOVE from Uday.   Whether it was the meaning or the feeling or even how to express it   ...   IT WAS ALL TAUGHT BY UDAY!!!  She knows now ...   THAT SHE NEVER  LOVED  AKASH, BECAUSE SHE HAD ALWAYS LOVED UDAY!!!!

this part made my day 
she always loved Uday 
In Your face uncle Akash
do cont soon thanks 4 de PM

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--Zinay-- IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 03 December 2012 at 6:07am | IP Logged
Comment edited on page 126SmileTongueWink

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...navina... IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 03 December 2012 at 6:48am | IP Logged
Originally posted by princessSonia

jjjzzz wanna say M SPEECHLESS
do cont soon navi dear!!!!!!!!
n Pm me if possible!!!!!!!!!
I will  ...  this weekend.
I shall add u to the PM listBig smile.
  Hug   Hug  .

Edited by ...navina... - 06 December 2012 at 7:36am
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Posted: 03 December 2012 at 7:03am | IP Logged
Originally posted by andy.a

Edited my comment on pg 124
pls do read
Thanx Andy   Hug .
Originally posted by andy.a

Navina, i dont know what to say
i cant even type properly
whatever it was i must say that saying that the update was hot is an understatement
it was more that that like a volcano
why i thought we could have an akash free update
but still he was there
but iam delighted with his discomfort
loved manyata for making him broken with her words and actions
continue soon
Sorry Andy   ...  I made your lose your vocabularyOuch.  I believe u about the typing part , I had the same problem while posting this updateWink.  Thanks for the "volcanic" complimentEmbarrassed.  Well , I did say that the update will be 98% Manveer   ...  so 2% had to be AkashAngry
Yep , Manyata was on a roll with her witty 1 linersEvil Smile.
  Hug  Hug  .

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Posted: 03 December 2012 at 7:08am | IP Logged
Originally posted by vrinda.diva

awesum awesum awesum ..
i really dont know how to express my feeling i have to learn that frm maanyata lol ...
bt it was soo good nd ya how can i frgt smokin hot ... !!!
Thanks Vrinda  EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed    ...    Don't worry , Uday will teach whatever u don't know Wink !!!
Originally posted by MAHI1198

omg awesome navina
Thank you Mahi  Hug  .
Originally posted by adventure_gurl

whoah beyond sizzling hot that was like being roasted on a fire pit hot
Thanks Shonali   Hug  .  It got HOTTER than I planned Blushing.
Originally posted by huma12.

awsssmmm n9ivviii hot updateee i need to turn on A.C on lowest teprature love it muuuaaahhh lotsss of kisssesss and a tightest hug
Thanx Huma  Hug . 
Don't stay too long by the AC  ...   I don't want u to catch a coldWink.

Edited by ...navina... - 03 December 2012 at 8:46am

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Posted: 03 December 2012 at 7:15am | IP Logged
Originally posted by swetsurati

OMG...navi tha was super smoking hot...i m speechless
: Iraada kya hain , Princess?  To rewrite the KAMA-SUTRA , she replied boldly.
my fevrt part
OMG...majnu needs a psychiatrist...kutta kamina halkat veda kahin kaaa...huuhh..shameless
plzzz...update soon thanx for PM.
Oh God Shocked ...  not u too!!!  Lagta hein ke maine sab ki bolti band karliOuch.
Nice choice of favourite partEmbarrassed.
Majnu is already a psychopath Wacko , and after what he saw ...   HIS CONDITION WILL GET WORSE!!!Confused   Psychiatrist will not be able to help Stern Smile.
Welcome for the PMSmile.
Thanx for commenting   Hug   Hug  .

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Posted: 03 December 2012 at 8:36am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sweet_gargi

OMG Navi baby!!...Blushing...I don't have words...blush blush blush...

All the romantic love making ways were excellent and too hot to handle..I just couldn't stop visualizing them...Your description is brilliant...and OMG 69Blushing..Blushing
When she kneels in her four limbs and says 'fill me up' I was about to have a heart attackBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingShockedLOL...and the garden position was again...sorry Navi have no words to explain now..M actually running sort of words...You are the hottest writer in the forum...I kept this title only for Vampy bhai...but have to give it to you...will tell her sorry speciallyOuch..your writing is so hot yet beautiful!..thats a rare combination Navina!!ClapClap

and ya how can I forget the Akash part!..He falling from the balcony was hillarious and u gave me peace of mind with that!...It was the best insult he could ever get when M calls him 'Garbage'

Have one pic for you which will describe you in two words!Tongue

OMG   ...   now u are making me blushBlushing.
Only God knows how I battled with those scenesOuch.  
Hawww Shocked - NAUGHTY GIRL GARGI !!!  (Anyway , it was the same with me LOL- I ALSO COULDN'T STOP PICTURING THEMEmbarrassed).  Actually the credit for 69 ...  goes to u!!!   You told me about FROZEN FLOWER.  I still haven't seen the entire film but the 69 position they did there ...  GOT ETCHED IN MY MINDWink  ...   THAT I HAD TO INCLUDE IT IN THE CHAPTERBig smile.
Very sorry about giving u AN ALMOST HEART-ATTACKLOL.  "Garden position"  was VERY PAINFUL  to write about Wink.
Thanks for handing me Saira's title   ...  BUT I DO NOT ACCEPT!!!!   She is still the bestApprove . Anyways ...   we are not having a competition here to see who can outdo the other.
I TRULY APPRECIATE  U CALLING MY WRITING HOT & BEAUTIFUL   ...  I think that's the highest compliment I could ever receive.
Poor Akash  Evil SmileEvil SmileEvil Smile  ...   BUT he will be backConfused.  He is not going to take that insult too kindly.
O GARGI  ...  what a comment / what a graphic !!!Cool
U are definately making my head swell !!!
                                   ...  for this amazing comment!!!

Edited by ...navina... - 03 December 2012 at 8:37am

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