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MANVEER FF : The journey of a wife... (Book 1) (Page 126)

...navina... IF-Stunnerz

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Posts: 35970

Posted: 02 December 2012 at 8:20am | IP Logged
Originally posted by puggyy

    Superb !!!Clap

Smoking hot !!!Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed

Too good yaarClap

Kaam sutra joke was too good LOL LOL

 I didn't get desert meaning ???? I know it has some double meaning ...????
Thank you Anisha.
Manyata was the "DESERT" !!!Wink
  Hug    Hug  .

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...navina... IF-Stunnerz

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Posts: 35970

Posted: 02 December 2012 at 8:24am | IP Logged
Originally posted by livvy

Holy f*ck that was so h0t !!!! I don't know u guys can manage to write so gud writing Is really a gods gift
Holy  Censored!!!  
Thank you SO MUCH    Hug  .
Originally posted by Khawaunju

I just loved it :D love making was totally ausum :D
Thanx Anushka   Hug  .
Originally posted by sirjee

Waooo datsss extemely hot...ufff u set da fire in da forum...
Thanx Sonia   Embarrassed!!!    Hug
Originally posted by Choco.Swiss

Nice one Navi.Cont soon:)
Thanx Swini   Hug  .

Edited by ...navina... - 02 December 2012 at 8:27am
...navina... IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 02 December 2012 at 9:09am | IP Logged
Originally posted by AndreaBaid

Holy virginwhat the f**k was that
I left it in the middle lol amazed right
But that was too much for me
I skipped alot here as it was motherf**king HOT
Holy  Censored!!!  OMG - such language AndreaShocked.  I just can't believe that U (of all people)  couldn't complete reading itOuch.  U have made me very sad Unhappy
Originally posted by AndreaBaid

And wait did i mentioned how good of a writer you our
I must say you know soo much as i didn't think you knew bout
69 !!! But man you proved me wrong as i feel like shit compared to you
I must say you even beated vampy and now ur the HOTTEST WRITER of
The forum
No u didn't Cry ...  but thanx for saying it nowWink.  Before this update , if anyone asked me about 69   ...   I'd tell them :  THAT'S THE NUMBER THAT COMES BEFORE 70LOL.  After a lot of research ...  I GOT CUED UP ON A LOT OF THINGSEmbarrassedWink!!!  
But man you proved me wrong as i feel like shit compared to you    ...  Oh no Andy , don't say that  ...  U ARE A FANTASTIC WRITER!!!   I'm still in the learning stages.  Outdoing Saira   ...   NO !!!!   No chance of that. 
U , Alissa , Saira , Ria , Anushka   ...   you'll are the pioneers when it comes to HOT SCENES!!!!Blushing


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vampire12345678 IF-Rockerz

Joined: 08 April 2012
Posts: 5836

Posted: 02 December 2012 at 9:39am | IP Logged
k navi u have finally updated 
the most awaited chapter of the decade 
the it was so worth the wait
i am so so happy that the update was 3/4 purple
u just nailed it 
perfectly written Clap
it was f**king hot
i loved the fact that u used many styles in there 
from 69 to doggy to the normal 
i give my hottest title writer title to u as andy said u have even beaten me 
and i am proud of u * patting ur back*
haha u were so scared for people reporting u but see how much everyone loved it Wink
i loved the title dialogues in between them 
i bow down to u now when it comes to hot writing
now u are my guru lolzz
really navi beautifully written 
perfect amount of detail
perfect feel and emtion
perfect dialogues 
perfect amount of watching by mr impotent
if he was normal he would have excited for sure Tongue
u rock
u can write even better than me 
love u 
and this chapter was super duper hot


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adventure_gurl IF-Sizzlerz

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Posts: 23970

Posted: 02 December 2012 at 10:24am | IP Logged
whoah beyond sizzling  hot that was like being roasted on a fire pit hot

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MAHI1198 Goldie

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Posts: 2486

Posted: 02 December 2012 at 10:31am | IP Logged
omg awesome navina

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_Grey_ IF-Sizzlerz

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Posts: 15570

Posted: 03 December 2012 at 1:24am | IP Logged
Koi paani daalo yha aag lg gyi hai Wink
It ws supa hawt Embarrassed
Apne kya pura din google pe bitaya tha LOL
Akash ko shi se jalaya manyata is very intelligentROFL
Awesome ,superb,mindblowing update navi di Clap Clap Clap
Koi pagal hi hoga jo isse report krega Tongue
Hot hot hot hot hot hot supa hawtThumbs Up

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sweet_gargi IF-Dazzler

Joined: 20 March 2012
Posts: 4210

Posted: 03 December 2012 at 1:30am | IP Logged

OMG Navi baby!!...Blushing...I don't have words...blush blush blush...

All the romantic love making ways were excellent and too hot to handle..I just couldn't stop visualizing them...Your description is brilliant...and OMG 69Blushing..Blushing
When she kneels in her four limbs and says 'fill me up' I was about to have a heart attackBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingBlushingShockedLOL...and the garden position was again...sorry Navi have no words to explain now..M actually running sort of words...You are the hottest writer in the forum...I kept this title only for Vampy bhai...but have to give it to you...will tell her sorry speciallyOuch..your writing is so hot yet beautiful!..thats a rare combination Navina!!ClapClap

and ya how can I forget the Akash part!..He falling from the balcony was hillarious and u gave me peace of mind with that!...It was the best insult he could ever get when M calls him 'Garbage'

Have one pic for you which will describe you in two words!Tongue

Edited by sweet_gargi - 03 December 2012 at 1:34am

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