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MANVEER FF : The journey of a wife... (Book 1) (Page 122)

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Posted: 30 November 2012 at 12:01pm | IP Logged
Update Navi dear update

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Posted: 30 November 2012 at 12:23pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by vampire12345678

updated my comment on page 104
 
Thanx Saira  Hug  .
 
 
Originally posted by vampire12345678

res

awesome update navi
u are so super duper evil but i love it when u evil Wink
hahahahah akash is impotent 
and manveer scenes were so cuteEmbarrassedClap
i love it when manveer have this cute little moments
i love hot ones better but the cute ones are awesome too because u write them so beautifullyClap
now coming to the last the desert part 
k now my gutter mind is working in full swing
i think i know the name of the desert 
in the dirty way lolzzz ahhaa
u did an awesome job navi for this update
can not wait for the next chapter 
sorry for the late comment
thanks for the pm
and next update should be full purple WinkTongue
best of luck with the next update
its not easy to write hot scenes Tongue
i know u will rock it
love u
this update was beautifully written and potrayed Clap




 
 
Thank youEmbarrassed
Hawww Shocked   ...   innocent little meTongue  - NOT EVIL!!!Unhappy
YES  ... he is Evil Smile!!!
 
Thanx Dear ...  I love writing Manveer scenes , whether it is cute or sweet or naughty!
Sometimes - IT GETS VERY NAUGHTY  Blushing...  & those are YOUR favouritesWinkLOL!!!
Your gutter mind has converted mine , & made it just like yours.  Now , we both think of the same thing 24 hours a dayDay Dreaming.
The name of the desert is : CHOCOLATE a'la MANYATA !!!Approve  ( did u think of the same name?)
 
I'm really grateful for u editing your comment & don't worry - it wasn't late at all.  
Welcome for the PMSmile.
 
The next chapter is three-quarter purpleEmbarrassed.  Could not make the entire thing purple.  LOG KYA SOCHENGE MERE BARE MEIN???Confused
 
Thanx a lot for the well wishes for the next piece.  GOD KNOWS HOW MUCH I NEED ITOuch.  BTW -  pray that nobody reports me for it Dead .  I am terrified to post itDisapprove!!!
 
Love u Saira    Hug    Hug  .
 
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Posted: 30 November 2012 at 12:26pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by thejazzgal

Originally posted by ...navina...

Originally posted by thejazzgal

Awesome Update Navi :D

U r a beautiful Writer ;;)

Hee Cute n Romantic ManVeer Scene in the Morning :D 
hehe UV calling har persistently.. and then!! tht!! urghh!! akashh!! mr Impotent :P 

ahah Funny   n hilarious Scene was when he was telling M tht he Became Impotent :P
hah M coudnt suppress her laughter poor girl bit her lip to control her laughter to burst in front of him :P

aahh Flowers n Flowers :D

Anniversary tym to Celebrate...

so can i req this update before sunday ? :P 

waiting for the Night to Remember update :D 
im gng crazy over this FF.. Love this FF to d Coreee

Muaaahhh <3

~Jazzy Smile



  
Thank you Jazzy Big smile.
 
Embarrassed.
 
Nice name : MR IMPOTENT  ROFL!!!
Usse laga ke woh bohot  IMPORTANT hain!!!
 
So glad u foud that scene funnyLOL.  Poor Manyata , how else could she react???
 
A rose for HIS ROSE  BlushingWink.
 
6 months together Day Dreaming.
 
Yes Dear , U can request it  ...   DOESN'T MEAN  I'LL  COMPLY Evil Smile!!!
 
MUAHHH!!!!  ( Uday style)Wink
 
Thanx for this awesome comment  Hug  .
 

haha!! waiting for the update :D 

isnt a year ?? .

thts wat i was thinking in ka 1 yr inni jaldi ho gaya ? :P
 
 
Anniversary SIRF  6 mahine ka hi hain Approve!!!
 

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Posted: 30 November 2012 at 12:28pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by MAHI1198

wow loved it as usual beautifully writen...
thanks for pm
and do pm me wen u update next..
 
 
Thanx Mahi  Hug  .
You're welcome !
I will Wink.
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Posted: 30 November 2012 at 12:31pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Choco.Swiss

Update Navi dear update
 
 
Sorry Swini ,
 
Next update :
                           


Edited by ...navina... - 30 November 2012 at 12:32pm
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Posted: 30 November 2012 at 1:17pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by aliya666

comment edited on pg no 114
 
Thank u Hug  .
 
 
Originally posted by aliya666

res
me apna res ka board hat rahi hoo after long time LOL
navina your chapters are rally awesome i just loved it
they way uday callas manyta number of times and there usually talks it seems do real
and u are making this manyta really a good rajwadi and in true sence a smart women the way she handel that akash by taking help of rajjat now she takes step smartly
and i love in your chapter that u make akash impotent ROFL
and that desert thing manayta tell uday was really good a hidden meaning in it Wink
i m sure next chapter will be smoking hot
thanx for pm and update asap
 
 
Thanx a lot for removing the "RES" Big smile.
Awww  ...  u are TOO KINDEmbarrassed.
Uday's meeting was delayed , then he had lots of free time  ...   so he spent it in phoning his wifeWink.   I made Manyata strong  ...   not like how she was in the showAngry.  In future , she will continue taking Rajjat's help. 
I still can't believe that I made him impotent ...  POOR GUY!!!Ouch
 
MANYATA IS THE MAIN ITEM IN THE DESERT MENUDay Dreaming  ...  Uday is in for a VERY LONG NIGHT BlushingBlushingBlushing.  Yes - next chapter is extremely HOTTT!!!
 
Welcome DearSmile ...  & thanx for commenting   Hug  .
 

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Posted: 30 November 2012 at 1:30pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ...navina...

Originally posted by vampire12345678

updated my comment on page 104


<font size="3">T<font color="#0000ff">hanx Saira Hug .</font></font>



Originally posted by vampire12345678

res



awesome update navi

u are so super duper evil but i love it when u evilWink

hahahahah akash is impotent

and manveer scenes were so cuteEmbarrassedClap

i love it when manveer have this cute little moments

i love hot ones better but the cute ones are awesome too because u write them so beautifullyClap

now coming to the last the desert part

k now my gutter mind is working in full swing

i think i know the name of the desert

in the dirty way lolzzz ahhaa

u did an awesome job navi for this update

can not wait for the next chapter

sorry for the late comment

thanks for the pm

and next update should be full purpleWinkTongue

best of luck with the next update

its not easy to write hot scenesTongue

i know u will rock it

love u

this update was beautifully written and potrayedClap









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<font color="#0000ff">Thank youEmbarrassed. </font>

<font color="#0000ff">Hawww Shocked ... innocent little meTongue - NOT EVIL!!!Unhappy</font>

<font color="#0000ff">YES ... he is Evil Smile!!!</font>

<font color="#0000ff"></font>

<font color="#0000ff">Thanx Dear ... I love writing Manveer scenes , whether it is cute or sweet or naughty!</font>

<font color="#0000ff">Sometimes - IT GETS VERY NAUGHTY Blushing... & those are YOUR favouritesWinkLOL!!!</font>

<font color="#0000ff">Your gutter mind has converted mine , & made it just like yours. Now , we both think of the same thing 24 hours a dayDay Dreaming.</font>

<font color="#0000ff">The name of the desert is : CHOCOLATE a'la MANYATA !!!Approve ( did u think of the same name?)</font>

<font color="#0000ff"></font>

<font color="#0000ff">I'm really grateful for u editing your comment & don't worry - it wasn't late at all. </font>

<font color="#0000ff">Welcome for the PMSmile.</font>

<font color="#0000ff"></font>

<font color="#0000ff">The next chapter is three-quarter purpleEmbarrassed. Could not make the entire thing purple. LOG KYA SOCHENGE MERE BARE MEIN???Confused</font>

<font color="#0000ff"></font>

<font color="#0000ff">Thanx a lot for the well wishes for the next piece. GOD KNOWS HOW MUCH I NEED ITOuch. BTW - pray that nobody reports me for it Dead. I am terrified to post itDisapprove!!!</font>


<font color="#0000ff">Love u Saira    Hug    Hug .</font>



Navi uday will have chocolatey manyata
What about manyata she has to uday
And she literally have ...
Willtell u in pm its gutterly term

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Posted: 30 November 2012 at 9:08pm | IP Logged
UH-MAZIN MA DEAR GIRL! ClapClapClapClap

Favirote Part:

 
Akash :  I dreamt of this day for so long Moniya.  I missed u so much Moniya.  Oh Moniya - u look so pretty.  I can't believe you're in front of me  ...  kehedo Moniya , kehedo ke tum kitne khush ho mujhe dekh ke.  I love u so much , Moniya!  
 
M :  Manyata   
 
Akash :  Huh!  
 
M :  My name is Manyata!  Mrs Manyata UdayVeer Singh!!! 

And don't worry I forgive you for the akash overdose LOLTongue

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