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MANVEER FF : The journey of a wife... (Book 1) (Page 121)

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Posted: 29 November 2012 at 11:38am | IP Logged
Originally posted by MsLuscious

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Navina the update was fab...
but what amused as well as surprised me was akaash impotent thing lol i don't know whether you were in mood of giving us funny update or really akaash lost his ... Peeep:P
so you better clear my confusion.. Other than this every scene was written beautifully :D
lol i guess next chapter would be extra hot you better give warning :D
navina your ff id going really great keep up the great work
 
 
Thank u Sarah  Hug  ...  then why u didn't "LIKE"  it Unhappy???
 
Okay , I was a bit sick the last few days and in that mood ...  I MADE AKASH IMPOTENT!!!   It wasn't MEANT to be funny   ...   but if u felt it to be hillarious - I HAVE NO PROBLEM WITH THAT!!! 
(& yeah - he really lost his BEEP!!!)Evil Smile
 
The next update will DEFINATELY have a warning includedCensored.
STRICTLY FOR 18 & OLDERApprove.
 
Thanx a lot for the kind words .  I really appreciate it!!!Big smile
 
 
lol the Like button wasn't working that time on my cell but now i have liked itWink
 
 

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Posted: 29 November 2012 at 12:03pm | IP Logged
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Posted: 29 November 2012 at 12:12pm | IP Logged
updated my comment on page 104

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Posted: 29 November 2012 at 12:12pm | IP Logged
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i have commented alreadyBig smile
 
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Posted: 30 November 2012 at 12:09am | IP Logged
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Posted: 30 November 2012 at 10:11am | IP Logged
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Awesome Update Navi :D

U r a beautiful Writer ;;)

Hee Cute n Romantic ManVeer Scene in the Morning :D 
hehe UV calling har persistently.. and then!! tht!! urghh!! akashh!! mr Impotent :P 

ahah Funny   n hilarious Scene was when he was telling M tht he Became Impotent :P
hah M coudnt suppress her laughter poor girl bit her lip to control her laughter to burst in front of him :P

aahh Flowers n Flowers :D

Anniversary tym to Celebrate...

so can i req this update before sunday ? :P 

waiting for the Night to Remember update :D 
im gng crazy over this FF.. Love this FF to d Coreee

Muaaahhh <3

~Jazzy Smile



  
Thank you Jazzy Big smile.
 
Embarrassed.
 
Nice name : MR IMPOTENT  ROFL!!!
Usse laga ke woh bohot  IMPORTANT hain!!!
 
So glad u foud that scene funnyLOL.  Poor Manyata , how else could she react???
 
A rose for HIS ROSE  BlushingWink.
 
6 months together Day Dreaming.
 
Yes Dear , U can request it  ...   DOESN'T MEAN  I'LL  COMPLY Evil Smile!!!
 
MUAHHH!!!!  ( Uday style)Wink
 
Thanx for this awesome comment  Hug  .
 

haha!! waiting for the update :D 

isnt a year ?? .

thts wat i was thinking in ka 1 yr inni jaldi ho gaya ? :P

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Posted: 30 November 2012 at 11:57am | IP Logged
wow loved it as usual beautifully writen...
thanks for pm
and do pm me wen u update next..

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Posted: 30 November 2012 at 11:59am | IP Logged
Originally posted by chitra_rao

Hey navi Hug, finally u updated what an oosome update Clap, so finally Akash is reintroduces back.And what a re-entry, This is no where compared to the stupid reentry the serial makers fed us. this update had everything right from manveer's romantic tadka, to Manyata's wittiness to majnu's dilkush defective re-entry LOL.

Loved the cute manveer scene, and Manyata chose UV's outfit that was even more adorable.And then the Patideviji scene was just so Awww EmbarrassedEmbarrassed. I mean itni respect hazam nahi ho rahi lol , Naughty Uday I though he like being called Halkat veda, lolLOL and the nok-jhok that followed with so manveerish Wink.

The villian's call and Manyata using her brains and letting rajat know about the call and taking his help, was such a oosome move. I love this new transformed manyata, atleast we are sure that she is not some dumb emotional bimbo who can be folled by any tom, dick and harry Approve.

Finally Akash entry, I'm so happy that u dint make him re-enter by his other name Aryan, he is Akashn and this u have made it clear right at this time that he has disguised as his look alike to get all the money that he has now, with this I can look forward to what else you have to offer us from this character, instead of wasting like 2-3 updates trying to prove aryan is akash or not.

OMG what a jackpot for me Akash ko impotent bana dala, dil jingala lol ROFL, OMG how did u come up with something so ooosome like this, u know I hated him for shootimng my prince, but this things has cooled me down a bit lol LOL

Again loved how Manyata showed her presence of mind and tricked Akash in his own trap by lying that she saw the tape, I'm liking Manyata equally as UV now Big smile, and the tapad, was so pending, bass aab UV ke hath se dhoobi pachad bhi karwa do , sari murad puri ho jayegi lol LOL

Ok now seriously what is M planning to SHOW akash, my mind is already swimming in the gutter here lol LOL

Thanks fro the PM navi and do update soon Embarrassed
 
Hi Chitra  Hug  . Yep - I finally updated Big smile ...   you know how much I love to torment u all Evil Smile .   Thank u so much for such a great compliment. I really hated the way Akash/ Aryan was brought back into the programme Angry.  The CV'S made a mess of of itDead.  Then to top it all ; the thing that irked me the most was Manyata's "TOUCH THERAPY" for AkashOuch.  It was damn annoyingAngry.  Anyway  ...  SORRY about drifting off the topic!!!  I enjoyed writing out the scene between Akash & Manyata.  He comes to her expecting a HAPPY REUNION  ...   then she WITTILY DASHES HIS HOPES!!!Approve
 
I try really hard to make Manveer scenes cuteEmbarrassed ...   but , in the end it comes out more NAUGHTY than anything else Blushing.  So , u had an AWWW moment with PATHI DEV JI Wink  .   I'm so glad!!!Smile   U know - that was a last minute addition to the chapter!!!Cool
 
Hey ...   I think , after living with Uday all these months - SHE"D BETTER GET SOME BRAINS.  Afterall ; she ain't Moniya anymore  ...   so there's no question of Tom/ Dick/ Harry or Akash  fooling her!!!
 
Exactly ...  HE IS AKASH!!!   And I haven't got the patience to dedicate 2/3 chapters to him  of whether he wants to be Akash or AryanConfused.  BTW - he only has 3 chapters left for himself in this SS Evil Smile.
 
Oh God Chitra  ...  are u throwing a partyDancing , in celebration of Akash's inability to Censored!!!  I really don't know what prompted me to do that to him Shocked ...   BUT , I'M THRILLED THAT EVERYONE ENJOYED THAT PART.  So glad that  U APPROVED OF MY FORM OF REVENGE ON HIM.
 
I told u ...  Manyata is on par now with Uday Stern Smile!!!   Nobody will stand a chance against them. SORRY - I have to dissappoint uBroken Heart ...  Uday will not do anything to Akash Disapprove.  Everything will be in Manyata's hands. THIS IS HER STORY
 
What Manyata wants to SHOW Akash Day Dreaming ...  I THINK U ALREADY KNOW THE ANSWER TO THAT!!!Wink  Ooo  - Don't let your mind swim there TOO LONG , it may start drowning!!!LOL
 
Welcome for the PM Smile .  Next update on Sunday Blushing.
 
 
THANX FOR THIS "OOOSOME" COMMENT Wink
  Hug   Hug  .
 
 

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