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MANVEER FF : The journey of a wife... (Book 1) (Page 114)

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Posted: 27 November 2012 at 7:43am | IP Logged
Yippe first to comment 
hmm i dont understand the title much 
so far so good 
UV changing caller ID from halkat veda to pati dev ji 
lolLOL
hope to read the remaining update soon 

EDITED 
just read the full update 
it was great 
Akash a psycho??
wel he was and always wil remain pakash 
So M kept her mind and replied tat she had 
seen de video 
if she hadnt thought of tat thn Akash vud hav tried to 
brainwash her against UV 
cant wait for next chapter



Edited by anushruthi - 28 November 2012 at 6:23am

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Posted: 27 November 2012 at 7:57am | IP Logged
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me apna res ka board hat rahi hoo after long time LOL
navina your chapters are rally awesome i just loved it
they way uday callas manyta number of times and there usually talks it seems do real
and u are making this manyta really a good rajwadi and in true sence a smart women the way she handel that akash by taking help of rajjat now she takes step smartly
and i love in your chapter that u make akash impotent ROFL
and that desert thing manayta tell uday was really good a hidden meaning in it Wink
i m sure next chapter will be smoking hot
thanx for pm and update asap


Edited by aliya666 - 30 November 2012 at 12:07am

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Posted: 27 November 2012 at 8:00am | IP Logged
awsssmmm niviii love itt
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 akash importent hu gaya allaaa
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dinner un kay sath par sweetdish mare satthhh awww awsssmmm waitinggg 4 nxt parttt
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Edited by huma12. - 28 November 2012 at 6:15am

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Update is fab Navi...Manveer were cute and the scene where UV constantly keeps on calling his wife is really sweet and romantic!Clap...and the last part where akash calls is scaryOuch..

Edited:

Ok this was a fab update and Navi baby I never am upset and tired reading ur chapters actually!>.Love them..

Akash telling that he became impotent was really funny...I would have laughed out immediately if some guy told me this. bechara Akash!..LOLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFL..

and thus the next chapter which will be hot will now defo match very well with the situation as now Manyata will try to make Akash jealous by coming close to UV...Superb and its a 10 on 10 chapter and more excited for the coming chapter nowClapClapClap




Edited by sweet_gargi - 27 November 2012 at 10:51am

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Posted: 27 November 2012 at 9:42am | IP Logged
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awesome update navi
u are so super duper evil but i love it when u evil Wink
hahahahah akash is impotent 
and manveer scenes were so cuteEmbarrassedClap
i love it when manveer have this cute little moments
i love hot ones better but the cute ones are awesome too because u write them so beautifullyClap
now coming to the last the desert part 
k now my gutter mind is working in full swing
i think i know the name of the desert 
in the dirty way lolzzz ahhaa
u did an awesome job navi for this update
can not wait for the next chapter 
sorry for the late comment
thanks for the pm
and next update should be full purple WinkTongue
best of luck with the next update
its not easy to write hot scenes Tongue
i know u will rock it
love u
this update was beautifully written and potrayed Clap






Edited by vampire12345678 - 29 November 2012 at 12:32pm

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Posted: 27 November 2012 at 9:42am | IP Logged
Sorry navi, couldnt comment yesterday as i had to prepare a seminar today.
i read the update yesterday itself and i must say i loved it to the core
coming to the update i loved how uday kept on calling manyata and the 'dessert' dialogue
if uday had not continuously called her maybe she might not have answered akashs call
happy to know that akash is impotent i would have been even more happier if he was handicapped hope manyata tells abt this meeting to uday
continue soon
looking forward for the hot update.

Edited by andy.a - 28 November 2012 at 5:55am

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