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MANVEER FF : The journey of a wife... (Book 1) (Page 112)

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Posted: 25 November 2012 at 6:16am | IP Logged
Navi read my analysis
I want to see ur reply

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Posted: 25 November 2012 at 8:02am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Softy17

love uday's driving tutionEmbarrassed
nice , awesome updateSmile waiting for next update

 
 
Thanx Pallavi  Hug  .
 
 
 
Originally posted by MAHI1198

awww awesome loved it loads!
 
Thanks Mahi  Hug  .
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Posted: 25 November 2012 at 8:15am | IP Logged
Navina when r u going to update
pls pls pls say it is today pls eagerly waiting for the update pls

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Posted: 25 November 2012 at 8:30am | IP Logged
Originally posted by andy.a

Navina when r u going to update
pls pls pls say it is today pls eagerly waiting for the update pls
 
 
Actually Andy - I was supposed to update yesterday (SATURDAY) , but I got very ill and even now I am still suffering with a migraine and fever.  I PROMISE  to update as soon as I feel better.
 
 
I wonder Ermm if u will still say:
 
eagerly waiting   
 
  ...  when I tell u that the chapter has 80% of Akash in itEvil Smile!!!
 

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Posted: 25 November 2012 at 8:43am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ...navina...

Originally posted by andy.a

Navina when r u going to update
pls pls pls say it is today pls eagerly waiting for the update pls

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<font size="3">A<font color="#0000ff">ctually Andy - I was supposed to update yesterday (SATURDAY) , but I got very ill and even now I am still suffering with a migraine and fever. I PROMISE to update as soon as I feel better.</font></font>

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<font color="#0000ff" size="3">I wonder Ermmif u will still say:</font>


eagerly waiting    


<font size="3"> ... <font color="#0000ff">w</font><font color="#0000ff">hen I tell u that the chapter has 80% of Akash in itEvil Smile!!!</font></font>


navina take ur time
hope that ur feeling better
am still eagerly waiting for the update
atleast looking forward for 20% akash free update
hope u punisg him well

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Posted: 25 November 2012 at 9:17am | IP Logged
Originally posted by vampire12345678

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k sorry sorry navi for this super duper late reply 
i am sorry navi 
i am glad u did not update yesterday otherwise it would be a shame on me 
but today u have to update because i am editing my comment yay
k coming back to the chapter it was super duper
i loved the dialogues 
can i copy paste the whole thing lolzzWink
i loved the gun part WinkTongue
hats off to ur imaginations 
haha sarah thought u were married right??
see how naturally u write 
this update was too good
but a small doubt is rising in my head i am trying to push it behind my head but then with each update the doubt just worsens 
in the character sketch u said that there will be uday's duplicate
veer malik who will come in chapter 4 
and in this update u said uday transferred all his property to manyata 
so now navi r u planning to get uday killed and veer maillik comes in the lead 
as u also wrote manveer children 
that means it is not supposed to be manyata and udayveer 
it can also be manyata and veer 
as veer is there is both see the connection
and everything can not be coincidence
this is very well planned 
uday's twin and aksh the villian entering at the same time
and uday trasfering all his property to manyata right before the bad guy comes in action
something looks very very fishy 
so navi how do u like my analysis on ur future track WinkWink 
 
 
YAY ...  Saira edited her comment Dancing .
No need to apologise - I knew u had other (MORE IMPORTANT) commitments. 
I didn't update yesterday Cry  ...   U KNOW WHY!!!
Can't update today eitherShocked ...  my arm is still very soreOuch & my head aches.
I'm so happy that u loved itEmbarrassed.  Putting together their dialogues , makes my brain very tired Unhappy.
 
THANK U FOR NOT  copying & pasting the entire updateBig smile.
 
The "gun" part became TOO naughty ...  even for meLOL!!!
 
Sarah  wanted to know whether I was married ...  
WITH THE WAY MY BRAIN WORKS ...  MY POOR  HUSBAND WOULDN'T STAND A CHANCEEvil Smile.
 
Okay ... coming to your assumptions: 
IT WAS VERY INTERESTING  WHAT U THOUGHT UP!!!
I won't say that u are right OR WRONG,
...  U need to be patient and watch me unfold this story.
 
Veer Mallik is Uday's look-alike. Manyata will marry him.  She will have 3 kids...   a daughter  & then twin boys.
AND THAT'S ALL I'M TELLING UApprove.
 
My current story has 6 sub-chapters left . I will start another book where the story will continue.  Manyata & Veer's love-story will be in thatEmbarrassed!!!
 
So ... In the mean time ...  FORGET ABOUT MY CHARACTER SKETCH!!!   ...  because I already forgot about itLOL.  I'm going to make some changes there - RIGHT NOW!!! , so it doesn't confuse anybodyWink.
 
this is very well planned    ...  thanx for the complimentLOL.
 
 
THANK U SAIRA ...  FOR THIS WONDERFUL COMMENT!!!
  Hug    Hug   .
 


Edited by ...navina... - 25 November 2012 at 9:31am

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Posted: 25 November 2012 at 9:51pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ...navina...

Originally posted by andy.a

Navina when r u going to update
pls pls pls say it is today pls eagerly waiting for the update pls
 
 
Actually Andy - I was supposed to update yesterday (SATURDAY) , but I got very ill and even now I am still suffering with a migraine and fever.  I PROMISE  to update as soon as I feel better.
 
 
I wonder Ermm if u will still say:
 
eagerly waiting   
 
  ...  when I tell u that the chapter has 80% of Akash in itEvil Smile!!!
 

Navi baby..Take rest and update when u feel better. I was wonderingErmm as in why ur not updating.u generally do on weekends.

Even if Akash is there in 80% of it, chalegaLOL..atleast after that m sure in the next updtae he will be thrown out to 90%!!ROFL

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Posted: 26 November 2012 at 10:40am | IP Logged
Awesoem Update Navina

Sorry for commenting late..
aweee Romantic Update 
Hayyee!! wat a Driving class ... super hot n Romantic <3

i hate tht AKASH fellow a*s.. ye Hamesha wrong timing par hi kyun spy karta hai ???Stalker kameena

soo should i connect this Driving class for the Coming updates ?
Over superb Update Navina.. cute romantic Scnes matched perfectly with the Dialogues.. big fat ago haha :P.. loved her Description for Uday

but Navina i hav a soft corner for J..
ek req karron ? J ko le aao.. i miss her.. but make her Grey not black..
i knw acanak nahi sudhregi woh dheere dheere thik hojayegi..

I Love J .. ;;) 

ahan next update is a night to remember :P *naught naught?*

Oye saturday bhi chala gaya..

wen r u updating the Next Update ??
maien late cmnt kiya it dsnt mean u should delay ur Update :P (ahha kidding)

do cont soon
muuuah!



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