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MANVEER FF : The journey of a wife... (Book 1) (Page 110)

patakaguddi Goldie

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Posted: 19 November 2012 at 11:42am | IP Logged
updated my comment on page 109...
plz do read it...

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--Zinay-- IF-Rockerz

Joined: 18 June 2012
Posts: 5473

Posted: 20 November 2012 at 4:41am | IP Logged
Hello Navina!!Big smile
i am so sorry for being late this time...actually i am badly stuck with my studies as half of the session is complete so loads of assignments and tests...God i hate them...i am gonna be active in some weeks as i am have half session exams...but will read all your updates!! ok now i will stop my chatar patar!LOL 

now coming to the update it was so so so so awesome aww...i just loved it to the core Day Dreaming Thank God this one was also a complete ManVeer update...!
all the things were written so nicely! Clap 
i loved the way manyata described uday...i too agree with her 10000% he is such a hawwtiiee yar! i keep on falling when i see him my vision goes blur my heart beats with the speed of light...ans so on!LOL but where did she actually stop THAT BIG FAT!!Tongue ahunnn...!
so jay is a full to mad now! but that is what she deserves! manyata right i too feel sorry for her and that is the only thing i feelThumbs Up that scene was just so cuteHug when she lying over him and caressing the scar...he marked her his right from childhood!Embarrassed 
LOl manyata dear u found the right time to learn driving!Cool 3 in the she is having special driving classes from her husbandEmbarrassed woops ye gari chalate chalate kia kr rahe hain dono!LOL wow LIVE PYAAR IN THE CAR!ROFL not bad i love it still!
navina it was an extra ordinary awesome, lovely,  mind blowing, and manyata ki zuban ma rapchick type update! wohaaa precap is so interesting the NIGHT TO REMEMBER!!Blushing waiting for it eagerly
love u

Edited by -Zina- - 20 November 2012 at 4:42am

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huma12. IF-Dazzler

Joined: 11 March 2012
Posts: 4638

Posted: 20 November 2012 at 6:58am | IP Logged
i m sooo sooorrryyy niviii i read the day u updated but i forgot tooo commenttt itsss awsssmmm keep it up and update soonnn

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...navina... IF-Stunnerz

Joined: 17 December 2011
Posts: 35970

Posted: 20 November 2012 at 8:41am | IP Logged
Originally posted by MsLuscious

OMG navinaa it was the cutest update ever!
i loved every bit of it... Big smile
it was a light romantic update which was penned down
Manveer car scenes were beautifulEmbarrassed
Your story is getting interesting with each update...
one thing which is annoying me is kameena jakaash...Angry
i don't want him to enter and ruin their happy married life
but somewhere i know villains are necessary to spice up
the story so i would avoid his part...Ouch
Lol you know sometimes i feel like you yourself are
married because you always bring something very
refreshing and romantic... Wink
 So you better dont hide it from
us if you are married? Or if you arent you should tell
me the source from where you get so epic ideas...Embarrassed
You better not say its your brain i will surely steal it
away from youLOL
This was one of my favourites uptil now very welk written...ClapClapClapClap
Thank You Sarah  Hug   . I'm so glad u felt it so!!!Embarrassed
The driving scene was very important , because Manyata NEEDED to know how to drive for the next chapter.Approve  ...  But then things got a bit TOO HOT thereBlushing.  Akash is a VITAL part of this story.  I tried to delay his entry for as long as I could - BUT IT'S NOW TIME FOR HIS ARRIVALShocked!!
No Sarah - I am not married. Neither do I ever plan to marryConfused.   The "epic ideas" (as u put it)  does come from my brain.  I have an extremely  OVER-ACTIVE IMAGINATIONEvil Smile.  Perhaps 1 day - I WILL BEQUEATH IT UNTO U IN MY WILLLOL!
I appreciate your kind words  & I love your comments,

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...navina... IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 20 November 2012 at 8:48am | IP Logged
Originally posted by puggyy

 Thumbs Up   GREAT JOB !!!Clap Clap Clap

Very cuteee update Heart Embarrassed

Manveer scenes were awesome Clap

It was also emotional Ouch Uday writing will Sleepy , I felt it so real and got tearsCry

Wow n climax was hot I guessTongue  This time she will get pregnent for sure WinkLOL
Thanx Anisha Star.   Manveer are ALWAYS awesomeWink  ( ESPECIALLY WHEN I MAKE THEM  "NAUGHTY" .)   AwwwEmbarrassed ...   SORRY Anisha - I didn't mean to make u cryOuch.   If she didn't get pregnant there  ...   SHE WILL DEFINATELY BE AFTER THE NEXT CHAPTER ApproveDay Dreaming.
 Hug    Hug  .
...navina... IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 20 November 2012 at 8:55am | IP Logged
Originally posted by anushruthi

BEAUTIFUL update Navina 
i loved it 
UV's special tuition vala idea 
toh rapchick rapchandus tha 
thanks 4 de PM
Thank you Anu  Hug  .   Those kind of innovative ideas can only come for himEmbarrassed.    Welcome for the PMSmile.
Originally posted by huma12.

i m sooo sooorrryyy niviii i read the day u updated but i forgot tooo commenttt itsss awsssmmm keep it up and update soonnn
Please don't apologise DearShocked.  I understandBig smile.  Thanx a lot Star.  Next update will be weekend Wink.
 Hug   Hug  .

Edited by ...navina... - 20 November 2012 at 8:59am
andy.a IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 21 November 2012 at 3:08am | IP Logged
Cry  so so so sorry dear for the late comment
had exams so i couldn't read the update
loved the update especially the driving lessons
 Princess - just sit on my lap  ...  then , you'll see.  She got on his lap but continued protesting.  Nobody teaches driving like this!  Yeah well Princess - YOUR HUSBAND IS GIVING U SPECIAL TUITION
this was my favorite scene
now its time u punish that stalker properly
death would be too small a punishment
pls pls punish him really bad or i wont read the story(just jockingWink)
pls pls update soon

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Posted: 21 November 2012 at 6:15am | IP Logged
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